SwaRon OS- Tu Hi Dil Hai,Tu Hi Jaan Bhi (PMs sent)

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow this was wonderful indeed!!!I loved reading it throughout from the start till the end!!!!Lovely OS!!!

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Lovely os! Swayam and sharon are meant for each other!

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Mujhe frst cmnt karna tha...!!😭
No fair!!😭

But still...do I need to say??
Chalo keh hi deti hu..nhi to mai gyi!!😆
Killer..!! Bohottt Acha tha!!
Luvd it so much!!😃
Beautifully written!!😊

Ab ff update kar na!!!!!!😔

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

amazing dear.. 😊

it was sweet..cute and romantic... 😉

loved it totally... 😃

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome os sakshi dii
the way you penned this one down is fabulous just loved
I liked how you kept the character real
Swayam is such a sweet heart and sharon is a darling love them both
the romantic moments spent together were complete bliss to read
awesomeee
loved it

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Sakshi you wrote such a long OS! Delightful!
And it had so many wow factors in it like the room scene, attack and dance! It had a flow to it so nothing seemed abrupt. But the best was when sharon hugged swayam in the end which cooled her down, it was a genuine moment which is on my wishlist. I wish CV's show this, it would be a treat for the viewers to see how powerful is the feeling of love and especially power of swayam and sharon's love.

A bunch of super dates! Loved it totally.