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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Beautiful ending. Just wow!
I'm short of words to explain you how much in love I'm with this story. Especially the last chapter where you took us back to landour, where it all started.

Khushi's mom came back. This is rather harsh but she deserved that treatment. Really reaaly felt bad when Khushi told about learning to live without her and her mother without Khushi.

The most touching part of the update was when Arnav told that Branny would stay with them:-)

Looking forward to more and more stories from you.

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Wow! A lovely ending(or not, with three epilogues coming up! Yayy!) for a beautiful story!
The whole experience of reading ALS has been really enjoyable as it is a very sweet, simple and endearing tale of the magical couple Arnav and Khushi, add Branny to this picture and it became one heck of a trio!
Loved each and every chapter and the wedding culminating into their first night, everything was beautifully written!
The teaser is awesome! Triplets!! I can clearly imagine Arnav's face😆
Looking forward to the epilogues.

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akankha

@akankha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

omg! they r expecting triplets!
awe! how sweet! Mr. & Mrs. Foster r going to hv 4 children!

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

It's Friday,...waiting for epilogue 1 😊

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

LINK to tne Epilogues Thread...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91543450

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

this has gotta be one of my favorite chapters here...arnav khushi's intimate moments in ALS are to die for..the poem just blew away my senses... i just noted down that poem..the lines which they uttered alternatively as they were drifting off to sleep, were just so beautiful..the moment was so reliving and brilliant..that part has to be my fav part in this ff...sigh...😳i really wish to have such breathtakingly beautiful moments with my future hubby..

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Regret and repentance is piling up inside

Its been a week or two or may be three and i missed it all...

Starting from the end of Envy till the end of ALS and the start of an epilogue...

From Foster being called as a Daddy till his D-day and that days' night..

I feel so much in anguish that i just kept missing it all...

Every second seemed useless when the thought of missing it arrived...

May be this was just nothingness because of its absence for a while...

Coming back to compensate on it felt good and complete...

Now waiting for an epilogue seems worth and back to reality...

Hats off and thankyou for this spell bound story...

It will be useless and worthless to use words even of such high acclaims to describe ALS and appreciate it... Firstly please accept my apologies for being very very very late and missing more than 3 chapters at a stretch... I did not intend to do do...

I am loss of words to explain or say something about every chapter that i missed... I know that the poem did nothing good in doing it...

Its been a privilege to come this far along with ALS, along with you, along with every eager reader of yours and along with every single emotion, thought, feeling and those priceless poems and songs you've embedded in ALS... To continue further on this is a pleasure again...

ALS has always been my favourite among every other story i came across on IF and will always remain the same... Looking forward for the epilogues...

Last but not the least you hold a very special place in our hearts Jenny di... You have always been a block buster on IF with your priceless stories... The way you have with the words and especially love is too good... Second chances in life... Is something i have never believed in... Not in this type at all... ALS has been helpful... A lot... No more words to say...

Waiting for more...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Just read the whole story today...this is really awesome...
I have to say,in the beginning for a few moments I was wondering if I would start this,with ArShi in western set-up,which is hard for me to visualize...but when i started reading it was like happening in front of my eyes...
the teenager Arnav-Khushi just touched my heart...how he,with all his flaws,made the obedient Khushi fall in love with him...the feeling of first love...amazingly written...
and Khushi's granny...reminds me all over again,though the parents always consider the best for their children,but is not necessarily always right...
the way she had to get separated from Arnav...the helpless her situation was...and Arnav's heartbreak...I was in tears...
Khushi's married life was something noone can wish for his worst enemy...I loved it when she get out of that so called marriage and stayed still in her decision...not everyone can do that...
then after six years they met again...in India...with her son Branny...that kid instantly made me love him...
I am so glad Arnav didnt give Khushi any hard time...didn't misjudged her...
his lines when Khushi was sick..."Just let me love you..Khushi...You and Branny. I will even make space for the memories of your husband"...I fall in love with Mr. Foster all over again...
and how Khushi ran to him to tell him he was always the only one for her...loved it...
I just loved the bonding grew between Arnav & Branny...how he broke the news of their marriage to him...the kid's disappointment not being able to call him daddy...and finally when he called him Daddy...the happy moment of father & son...
loved how Arnav went forward to talk to Khushi's mom that he would never allow anyone near her whom she doesnt want...
then finally their marriage...and happily ever after of the cute little family...
Thanks you for giving us such an amazing story...introducing us to flawed but loving Mr. Foster and very simple but admirable Khushi...making us fall in love with Branny...

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

God that was so lovely an ending ...or should I say their beginning as that's how this chapter felt
Gotta admit when I saw this pm for one of my fav stories of all I was sad to open it when I saw the works last chapter
But after working up courage to read I gotta say it was arshilicious
The way how he reacted to seeing his sketch pad all his memories n feelings resurfacing all over again ...was so emotional still have a tear in my eye
As for his attempt to get intimate b4 the phone rang even I was cussing under my breath
But I soon started to smile again with the best man toast aww n how sweet was foster when he checked to make sure she was ok
He surely is turning into the family man suggesting to have branny in their wedding suite although did not stop him from finishing off his passion filled business he started earlier
Def gonna be keeping this story in reach for future reading when in mood for some romantic story
Thanks for pm really gonna miss this story

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s-576

@s-576

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Oh my gosh!!!...That was totally amazing...an off the top romance...

The beginning with its myriads of twist and turns showed a painful journey, unwillingly taken by the lovers; and very willingly enforced by fate...

I had been so sad then...I thought that's it...Khushi's married...plus she has a son... Arnav's engaged...but that was just like the sleet of ice that covers lake...it was all wintery and frozen on top and all water and life underneath...

How magnificently you wove this story into being...each character with his/her own set of flows... each battling their own demons...

the concept was quite unique and the setting itself was refreshing... your imagination is so vivid...thanks

Thanks for taking us on ride...and showing a different Arshi world through your eyes... muaah... thank you

love this FF

... heart-breaking

...heart wrenching

...heart stopping

YES!!! That's how I'd describe this story...its from the heart and its about hearts...so, it is heart-breaking, heart wrenching and heart stopping...