FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Finally after long time 1st page !😳

Edited : Wow N , you really are acing up with these complex emotions in this story.

My most favorite part has to be the end where Khushi stood up for herself , no doubts that her insides must be screaming out to cry but still she stayed strong upfront and gave Arnav a good hearing.

To begin with even Garima and Rakesh's bits very sensibly handled ,dealing with mature love stories can be quite a task and their parts were written so damn well.

When the whole knob wala scene came and Akash entered the scene , i was like what the yeh kya googly hai but of course then Arnav followed and everything from their shock on seeing each other to their reactions respectively ...all bang on and perfectly suiting the mood.

And i forgot to mention it was so brave of Khushi to take the flight and come in support of Garima, her fear also excellently etched out.

Edited by _disha_ - 11 years ago

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

It's a small world indeed. Rakesh and Akash connection brought Khushi and Arnav back together where they rightfully belong.

Of course it's another matter that Khushi is royally pissed. Loved it, loved her. I was so proud of the way she played cool in the room and later her thinking in the car park. I especially loved the way she gave what Arnav had coming.

Don't understand what changed Arnav's mind though...he left her for a reason and now he wants her again. Why? All those reasons he gave are right there. Nothing has changed. I guess they have. Absence has made him realize Khushi's role in his survival.

So, we have a love story in the making...Rakesh and buaji..😳 Cute. very very cute.

I have always felt bad for people who find it a problem to fly coz personally I love travelling and this kind of an impediment would restrict travelling. Poor Khushi.

Last but not the least...loved the way you described how Khushi felt seeing India after arrival. So aptly captured.

Loved it Nids👍🏼

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

mine

Sorry for late unres

Indeed d world is so small

Finally dey met and khushi dhak dhak proved right 😆😆

Khushi travelled for her buaji nt cnsidering her fear while travelling in flights was really caring and sweet of her and also proves her love towards her buaji😳😳

Garima was blushing while talking for rakesh hayeee so sweet

Rabbbe ve cmng frm rakesh and garima too 😛😛 I loved d way wen rakesh held garima hand and asked her nt to go so soon and she obliged😉😉

Bfr akash entry khushi dhak dhak strtd 😳😳not only her bt also our waiting for d mann to enter bt u had annother plans u made akash come first and break our sapne 😭😭

No worries khushi dhak dhak didnt stop and atlast he entered d moment he said "Khushi" Dats it i was gone in rabbe ve world

But i didnt like d way khushi ignored him😡😡

I knw she went through a heart break 😭😭 arnav was a jerk to leave her😡 bt he wasnt at fault dat tym

And nw wen he realized it i knw he wnt leave a chnce to get her back

Waiting for lots of dhak dhak dhak dhak and Rabbe ve moments

Loved d update dii

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

res
unres**

Fabulous update..
finally they met..
i knew it.. my god d meeting was awsm..
actually i like rakesh and garima relation too.
so smooth and yet cute😳
woaahhh khushi cried and i want it that arnav should see her state and
yes he saw.. amazing scene..
khushi was angry with him and anyone could be..
i hope he will do something now..
wonderful chappy...
waiting for d next one😃

Edited by flutterlashes - 11 years ago

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Nidhs!! i had lost track of this FF i guess from the 10th chap!!

Happy to have caught up with it again!

Whoa! too many things have changed! And that separation in too painful!!

But Love calls now! Will that bring the duo together this time?

Well doesn't it already proof that she would land in Delhi and not Mumbai!!

Would wait to know!! :)

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

taken...😃...
tension tension behind the door is arnav or not...

waiting...
cheers...

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago

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romaisaaa

@romaisaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Can't wait for the next update:)

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

my place
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loved it <3
your description of every character is awesome :)
love buaji & khushi's bond!
the door opened and I thought Arnav entered the hospital room..
but no it was Akash..
I was lil disappointed because I wanted them to meet..
And after sometime they met..
finally..
after so long!!. :')
my place
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loved it <3
your description of every character is awesome :)
love buaji & khushi's bond!
the door opened and I thought Arnav entered the hospital room..
but no it was Akash..
I was lil disappointed because I wanted them to meet..
And after sometime they met..
finally..
after so long!!. :')
I feel bad for khushi ..
she had to go through so much all because of Arnav's one stupid decision *shakes head*
and I happy that this time khushi stood strong! ...
I don't want her to get hurt again!!
Mr.ASR have to win her back this time

Edited by moumita03 - 11 years ago

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

How will anyone react in Khushis's situation? You wrote her emotions very beautiful. She shouldn't let him hurt her again but how long will she hold her together and strong?
What was Arnav expecting from Khushi? He have no right to this her!
So akash is a doctor, so how I wish that Payal was here. 😆

Edited by opsyellow - 11 years ago

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

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Posted: 11 years ago

#560

Res😉

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Remarkable update, Nidhi!!

You really have portrayed the emotions so beautifully and expressed the feeling so brilliantly. I could the emotion that were flowing in the chapter.

Khushi realized what her buaji has sacrificed for them and now she wants to get her happiness that she has lost in meantime.

The joy that buaji was feeling of getting to see her long lost love that too knowing that he is unmarried, any chances of rekindle in their love😳

Even though Khushi was scared of flying but she overcome that just so her buaji can come here to India.

I really thought that Arnav was behind the door but it was Ahkash! But surely followed him, I could the anxiety that Khushi was feeling after seeing him after three months.

I can feel Khushi's pain that flowing through her when hearing Arnav's voice, the pain that she wanted to forget but reliving it all over again..😭

Arnav thinks that it's,easy as saying sorry to get her back but that not the reality, if she didn't come here I don't know if he would have gone after her.. He really needs to earn that apology from her.

I happy that Khushi stood her ground and didn't breakdown after seeing or even feeling him. I know,it must have taken her all her might to walk away from him.But she doesn't want to go through that pain all over again..

Loved the confrontation that these to had..

Now,waiting eagerly to know what Arnav will to earn her trust and apology again...

Loved the chapter!

Nihdi, sorry for,the last unres, every time I wanted to update something came up, so hence the delay..

Thanks for the email..

Eagerly waiting for next...

Edited by Hawa1997 - 11 years ago