Originally posted by: chavvi16
Woo hoo it seems I will be able to do this today
Thank god you split it into two2and that means more for us to read
You are the best for sure
Haaye! Yeh kya keh diya!😳 Dil touch kar ditta tussi!😆
Thanks for the review! Padhne mein bahut mazaa aaya!😃
Well lets see how their decision helps them out
Hmmm raizadas hain agar apni zidd poori nahin ki toh kya faiyada
Though it still wont be easy for them
It has to be done anyway
But if not maan khushi should make it hard for him
She don't have to right after all he will do that himself
He usually does don't he
Ahhh and no one saw him crying for his love
Weird but he was outside to be fair
And except maan no one knows of arhi love story either
True!😔
Geet did but she forgot all that
So no one but he can help him now
What with maan being too busy avoiding his love
What will you say to her now
And will that stop her from going
Somehow the talks aren't gonna be enough
But guess at least they should talk about this right
That's the least that can be done now
And it will only strengthen his resolve to get his love back
Will she listen to you now
After all that happened mate
But yes the wedding has to be stopped
As like we all know it will ruin too many lives
And whats the point of that
Its better they stop it before three of them regret it later
As after they get married (which of curse wont happen) they cant do anything about it either right
You are so right!😭
Back to where he came from
And still buaji aint back hain
What did she go to bring man that's taken her tis long I wonder
🤣 Only you could think of such things when such a serious scene is going on!😆
Aww poor thing rona hi likha hai aaj kal inki zindagi mein
But not after this right
So am gonna not feel too bad about her
Ahhh she is all ready to go huh
Seems arnie will be in time to talk to her
That's all he will be able to do though
Trust me its been long and now she notices
To think had instead of arnie some thief had come then what
But no inko toh khabar hi nahin thi
Arnie while talking about other things can you also ask her to be more vigilant
🤣 Again you went off tangent! How do you get these thoughts when such a serious scene is going on? Do tell me!🤣
Kya pata koi kuch karr de aapki khushi ko agar yeh aise hi apni duniya mein khoyi rahi
Sorry had to add that don't know why
Chalega! It is my fault! Generally I dont leave such silly loopholes but I had no other option to get Arhi face to face in the way I want! Toh yeh darwaaza khulla rakhna padha! 🤣
Now she is thinking is she
Well better late than never in this case
Someone did come and go also
Again you didn't know dear
She has gotta be more alert yaar
😆
Ahhh and he comes and just in time
Or is it at wrong time
So he is here is he cool
Well wouldn't you wanna know why he is here
He will tell ya himself why he is here
Don't worry nothing to worry about too much
Well it is but has to be said and done at least
Nope not this time no taunting warna iski toh aisi ki taisi
😆
Sorry for threatening arnav but he needs it
Dude scare her more why don't ya
Ufff kya karein but then this is him naa
Ab pyaar kiya toh darna kya
Cant believe I just said that
🤣
Yup he sure is scaring the hell outta her
Hmmm that he is anyway good at somethings cant change
Though I wish once she too scares him but in different way
Haila! Wish maanga? I have to write it down! Give me a sec!
And I am back! Where was I? What was I reading? Ah! Here it is!
Well if she wont be fearful of your actions of closing the door what else will she do
You are the one who did this to her
Had you tried to know the reason why a year ago this wouldn't happen
So true!
Sorry sweetie he knows
Not that it canges things much
Well some day he would know and the sooner the better
Not only for you two but la as well
Really you think he will believe you now
After knowing everything he wanna rectify it if possible ASAP
Acha tab yeh understanding kahan thi when he misunderstood her
😆Good question!
Why didn't he realise then why she did this
Ab bade aaya hai inhe janne waale
Toh kaun sa bada teer maar liya
You only know cause she told you while talking to herself
Otherwise you yourself would never have known mate
Khud toh pata karne ki koshish nahin ki
Hmmm I know all happy that he don't hate you anymore
But he is still engaged to your sister
That still needs to be worked out
But cant begrudge her some happiness there can we now
After so long she got her happiness
Let her enjoy it for now
Hmmm aww that was cute
Let them be with one another for now
Before she realises that technically nothing has changed
That will be sad to see
But what to do ehhh
Aww she missed his soothing presence
Well so did he though he tried to ignore it am sure
Haiyye seeing them like that is bliss
I know!
But this wont last too long
I know!
And when it does please let it be only after he is made to pay a bit for making her cry so much
Ek aur wish? Ek second do! Likh loon!
Haan! Likh diya! Chalo! Aage padhti hoon!
Wow she sure forgot everything being in his embrace
Wonder what shall break this spell
And she snaps outta it
And realises who she is with and what she is doing
And once again the dream is broken
But not for too long I hope
Oh dear she is gonna push him away right
But this time you cant give in to her no matter what
Dude I thoguth you knew her well
Even then that question
Sweetie you know your afreen was bound to do that
If she didn't well she wouldn't be herself
So true!
Ahhh so many days since he called her afreen
Trust me when you come to know whats going on in her min d that smile will be wiped again
Ahhh loved how she was being sarcastic
Well yes it wont be that easy
Warna mazaa kaisa
Abhi toh khoob papad belne padenge
Exactly!
And she isn't wrong to say all this
Just because you know the truth things cant change just like that
Did I say that before dang memory is bad man
Love it when she shocks him don't you
Excuse me again who is he to freaking forgive her
Whats with this guy still all me, me it is with him
😆It is like he is a bakri, mein mein karta rehta hai!😆
When pray tell me it will be about them both
Dude don't be your arrogant self
It isn't helping well what with her murderous thoughts of course they aren't
What he is saying is the truth though
But then neither can he live without her
Or did he forget that bit
Guess I have to give it to you dear you have fulfilled my wish again
Errr... Which one? (The writer scratches her head! Abbe yaar! Maine ek wish poora kar diya aur mujhe hi pata nahi!😕)😆
Oh come on she should just forget it all
All those taunts and mean things he said about her
She is right why didn't he come ask her why she did what she did
But no he was being mulish there
Yes I loved this fiery side of her
And all she said is so true
Why didn't you ask her arnie answer her that
I know right he remembered his hurt but what about hers
And you think a sorry will cut it
Will it sooth her heart of all those vile things you said about her
Hell no it doesn't
And if he thinks it does then he has another thing coming for sure
Not his anger again
Dude you ruin things with your anger
Like you did a year ago
Yaar yeh kaam bannane ke bajaye bigadte jyada hain
😆
No really he does
Aww baby just loved those lines from ya khushi
What apt words those were yaar
Haiyye am totally happy with this side of hers
Happy to read that!😃
She sure showed him that he may be ASR but she aint no less
Hah beat that dude bade aaye sab theek karne
Arrey waah ab bade plead karr rahe hain tab nahin inpe raham aa raha tha when you were taunting her
Wow she sure gave it to him
Am so prud of her right now
😃 Me too!
You have lost your rights on her mate
And you did push her futher all by yourself
Didn't I say you would regret doing this to her and that time has finally come yipeee
Maine kahaa tha na? I will make him regret his decisions!😃
Please don't do something you will regret again in your anger mate
She is right in her place too mate if you are
Abbey who maafi thi
Aur kyun naa de tujhe attitude didn't you do the same to you
After all she is your lady love and maan's sister toh attitude toh banta hai
He thinks all this is drama hey kushi ki DM save him will ya though he cant be saved can he
You tell him dear that you aren't some toy
Jab mann kiya khele aur jab mann kiya chod diya
Hadh hai yaar
When you weren't ready to listen to her why should she naa its only fair mate
Hmm changed his tactics did he
Good he pleaded not ordered
But am so sorry dude that wont change her mind either
By the way who would have thought he would actually plead to her
I didnt see that coming you surprised me there cool
Happy to surprise you!😃
It aint that easy is it
And with your temper I think you might just screw it all up
Guess your actions made her lose her trust on you
And she don't wanna trust you when you didn't
This is called as karma
😆
Ek time tha she hoped you would understand and needed you now its your turn
That was naughty of you to flirt with her sister like that just cause she didn't pay attention to him and hence ruins things by himself too
She is so right
He did fall in love but he sure didn't know how to keep that love intact
Was his love only this much that he didn't even once think of things from her pov
Yes trust and communication both are necessary in any relationship
He didn't trust her or communicate with her as to why she did what she did
See it from her pov now you didn't think for just once what she went through when yo said those things to her
How would you have felt had she said the same and you know you would do what she did
Hmmm can she really trust him to keep her heart safe again
To not break it like he did a year ago
Come on you should know this aint easy for her try to understand her but don't give up either
Ahhh who would have thought she would say that to him that their ways are separate but he forced her to didn't
I know!
Once again he didn't listen to her fully
When is he gonna stop doing that urgggh he makes me so mad sometimes
So she did forgive him should have known
She has too big heat sometimes man
But she cant make her life better at cost of her older sisters
If its possible for him to make sure neither la suffer nor they then that will be perfect can you do that arnav hope you can
How can she knowingly ruin her sister's life
If she did she wouldnt be happy and if she isn't you wont be either
You cant build your own happiness at stake of other can you it will only make you more guilty
Come now even arnav wouldn't want that
But that don't mean you give up if you do then where the hell is that ASR who gets what he wants
I might be mad at arnav but he is the one for khushi nonetheless
So true!
Geet time now weee
Poor baby is crying after maan rejection
Oyye kudiya rona mat time aa gaya hai aapko maan ko dikhane ka ki geet raizada kya hai
Exactly! Go Geet!😃
Aww poor thing isn't faring well after his rejection this is sad seeing her like this
Geet ab sirf aap hi hain jo sab theek karr sakti hain
Not only for yourself but for maan too
Please don't lose courage
You are much stronger than that we know you are
And I know you know that too and will find solution to this too
Oh dear you had to fall for MSK not maan cause MSK side of his is more prominent
And after the whole soni debacle MSK is back
So if you fell for MSK then you really love him
I know he seems to be mean and all but he isn't dear
Jo cheez asani se mil jaaye usmein mazaa kya geet
Arre! Waah! Kya baat kahi!👏
Good she realised that she is soni so why did he reject her
Seem she is getting there aint she
No dear that's not what you should be thinking
Koi apna phela pyaar itni asani se bhul jaye
And when that love had reached to the level it did
Surely you cant believe him in fact he gave you clues as to why he cant love ya dear focus on that sweetie
I know she will get it and soon why he did what he did
Ahh am glad she is thinking rationally
Hmmm well she should do right
He cant let go of that love
Not at all is it possible is it dear
Well that was maan this is MSK that's one difference
Another would be that he has closed off his emotions being MSK but of course he cant run from love
He couldn't when he fell for soni and he wont when he falls for geet
No change dear but he is showing it to be
He still cares for you why else would he be worried for your well being but is just hiding it well
Of course he loves you dear
And he will never stop but he wont show it to you either
You shall have to make him show you his love
Make him believe that you wont leave him
That you will be with him forever this time and voila maan will be yours again
Wow! Loved the way you are cheering Geet!😃
Please aage badh chuke hain
What rubbish that is dear
The maan who cared for you is the true one
This one was just pretending to distance himself from you but you don't go away from him
Wow that's more like it
This is what we wanted and we got it thanx sweetie
You are welcome (That thanks was for me, right?😕)
Waise she has to have her answers too
After all she is heart broken too
Seems all are heart broken okay one exaggerates there but you know what and who I mean I hope course you do
Her veere is here
Man I missed this guy
Me too!
At the moment sirf inki love story qayamat hai
Baki dono stories that started with his are in jeopardy
🤣
Whats up with aki I wonder
Loved him there
He too is a raiazada after all
So what he dosnt show that side of his
He sure gave her an idea there and hopefully that arnav too
Come on buck up there geet arnav get what you want after all you are raizadas
See geet this is what you gotta do too
You have to make that man confess his feelings for you again
Loved aki there man
He just gave her such good advice without knowing he did
Come on dear you are a raizada time to show what a raizada can do when they want to
Exactly!
Hmmm guess she needed to see the changes in her
She aint geet handa but geet raizada
But confident you can do this
Come on who do you wanna be geet handa aur geet raizada
You can see the difference between them
Come on you have the confidence to get his love back
Hmmm her inner self is right you know
There is more of that raizada streak in you than handa
You cant give up now
Come on she is telling you what you should do chose to be geet raizadas and you shall get what you want please chose her
Geet raizada who shall fight for her love and win too
Come on you know you will chose raizada version she will for sure
And we will know what she does as geet raizada
True!
Uff here is our devdas it seems
Ufff yeh toh kuch zyada hi shock mein rehete hain aaj kal
😆
What to do with him
Snap outta it will ya
Seems someone too needs to tell him he is a raizada
Aww he is fighting with God well they did give you your happiness
But what to do when you yourself reject that happiness and love
There is only so much She can do
😆
Haven't you heard the saying God helps those who help themselves
So you gotta do that too mate
Dude you could have told geet or your di but guess that isn't possible but geet is
Well where was this love when you didn't trust her arnie
And we thoguth you could do anything
Isn't that what you keep saying surely this too you can do
Don't lose her work on getting her back
And also make sure that la don't suffer either
That isn't too hard if you really want her as your wife after all ASR can do anything right
Wow just loved seeing him like this
I know might sound sadistic there
No you dont! Every reader must have been thinking the same thing!😉
But till he is pushed to a limit only then he does something
He wants khushi then get her
No way should he stop just cause she isn't ready to forgive him
Well my dear man its time to take your life back in your hands
Don't let fate rule you again
Grab a chance to bring her nack in your life
Only you can help yourself and her in this
You know you can do it just like geet is getting she can
Come on raizadas siblings I dare you both to get what you want
Cheers for pm
What a dhamakedar update dear
Though it was angsty but it will show them a way forward right
Happy that you liked this update!😃 Thanks for the awesome review!😃
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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