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Posted: 12 years ago
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WISH LIST

Dear new and old friends,

For those who don't know this is a special post called wish list!

Any scene my readers wish to see all you have to do is mention it through your review or mail and I will try my best to fulfil it. This post will contain a list of all your wishes!

I will also note who has requested it and when it was requested.

Once it is fulfilled, I will note it as fulfilled.

I have taken the note of all the wishes made by you guys until now in the first thread and half of second thread and have it posted it below! I will post the remaining wishes soon!

Now I cannot guarantee that I will put each and every one of your request in the story but one thing I can promise and that is that if I cannot add it into the story then I will write it as one shot dedicated to the person who requested it.

Thank you for your constant support. Love you guys for it!

Thank you!
Kalpana!

THREAD I WISHES

1. Chhavi16 : Page 25 : Wanted to see romantic scenes if not from main leads then from supporting characters

Fulfilled in Chapter 19 Thread I Page 29

2. Chhavi16 : Page 39 : Geet should meet Khushi

Fulfilled in Chapter 35 Thread I Page 89

3. Spvd : Page 40 : Wanted Popcorn to be included

Fulfilled after Chapter 23 Thread I Page 41

4. Chhavi16: Page 42 : Wanted the boys to fall first in love

Fulfilled in Thread I Chapter 28 Page 58 and Chapter 30 Page 68

5. Chhavi16: Page 45 : Wants to see jealous Maan and Arnav

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled after the big twist

6. Spvd : Page 47 : Wants Arnav Buaji Comic scenes

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 53 (A) Page 121

7. FragileAngel : Through Mail : Separate Posts for Maaneet and Arhi once!

Fulfilled in Chapter 25 (A) & (B) Thread I Page 47 and 50

8. Spvd : Page 65 : Exclusive Post just for Maaneet (the way ch. 28 was dedicated to Arhi)

Fulfilled in Chapter 30 Thread I Page 68

9. Spvd : Page 65 : Icecream scene for Maaneet

Fulfilled in Chapter 37 Thread I Page 100

10. Suhaaana : Page 67 : Exclusive Post just for Maaneet (Check Wish No. 8 for details)

Fulfilled in Chapter 30 Thread I Page 68

11. Spvd : Page 69 : Deepu wanted to kiss Dadi's and Maan's cheeks

Fulfilled after Chapter 31 Thread I Page 72

12. Chhavi16 : Page 73 : Wanted the girls to fall in love slowly

Fulfilled (Atleast I think it was slow enough! Not sure about her though)

13. Spvd : Page 78 : Wanted Khushi to tell Arnav she thinks Chote is a 11 yr old kid.

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 54 (A) Page 135

14. Chhavi16 : Page 90 : Wanted to see all four leads in the rain.

Unfulfilled : Cannot put it in the story. Will write it as a one shot later.

15. Spvd : Page 96 : Wanted to see Geet in office bringing lunch for Maan

Unfulfilled : If I did this, there will be lot of plotholes. Will write it as a one shot later.

16. Spvd : Page 96 : Wanted to see a tie scene between Maaneet

Fulfilled in Chapter 43 Thread II Page 8

17. Spvd : Page 96 : Deepu wanted to kiss Arhi

Unfulfilled : Small scene 3 coming up soon!

18. Arshi_1982 : Page 97 : Wanted a scene where Geet is bold and Maan blushes

Unfulfilled : Not sure where to put the scene!

19. Arshi_1982 : Page 97 : Wanted to see a retro party at KC with Geet and Khushi dressed in modern style

Unfulfilled : Not sure where to put the scene!

20. Arshi_1982 : Page 97 : Wanted to see Khushi and Arnav dhaaba scene with Deewana tera' in the background

Unfulfilled : The song does not fit the story. Will write it as a one shot later!

21. Maaneet099 : Page 102 : Want to see Anjali and Maan Scene

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 44 Page 17 & Chapter 53 (B) Page 127

22. Spvd : Page 102 : Want to see Geet / Soni in KC

Fulfilled in Thread III Chapter 57 Page 58

23. Arshi_1982 : Page 112 : Wanted dance sequences in engagement

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 54 (A) Page 135 & Chapter 54 (B) Page 144

24. Chhavi16 : Page 144 : Wants guys to confess first.

Fulfilled (I Hope so)

THREAD II WISHES

1. Maria_awan : Page 2 : Wants Arhi & Maaneet Confession soon!

Unfulfilled : Confession took a lot of time!

2. Maria_awan : Page 2 : Romance on any song of Salman Khan

Unfulfilled : Will try to fulfil it!

3. Chavvi16 : Page 3 : Boys will be the one to say I love you first.

Fulfilled in Chapter 48 (A) Thread II Page 51 for Maan and Chapter 54 (B) Thread II Page 144 for Arnav

4. Fffan123 : Page 3 : Night Time Romantic scene with old songs

Unfulfilled : Will fulfil it as a one shot later!

5. The Dark Knight : Page 5 : Want a jealousy scene of Maan!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled after the big twist!

6. Flowers4u : Page 5 : Double date of two jodis!

Unfulfilled : Will write as a one shot later!

7. Sonarajasingh : Page 5 : A jealous Khushi!

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 54 (B) Page 144

8. Spvd : Page 12 : Arnav gets a chance to get jealous!

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled after the twist!

9. Spvd : Page 12 : Wants Maan to propose in proper style

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 48 (A) Page 51

10. Spvd : Page 12 : The Raizadas should get to know Arnav's job as driver

Unfulfilled : Will write as a one shot later!

11. Mina420 : Page 20 : Wants Geet to get hold of Maan's baby photos!

Fulfilled in Thread II Chapter 45 Page 25

12. Mina420 : Page 20 : Wants Khushi to see Arnav's baby photos!

Unfulfilled : Thinking of a way to fulfil it!

13. Spvd : Page 29 : Wants to see Geet seeing Maan's dusht daanav avatar at Office

Fulfilled in Thread III Chapter 57 Page 58

14. Spvd : Page 49 : Want Arhi romance with phone interruption (like during Payash First date!)

Unfulfilled : Will write a one shot later!

15. Spvd : Page 88 : Want someone to record Arnav's antics with Khushi during their romance time before the big twist and show it to Raizadas.

Unfulfilled : Will write it as a one shot later!

16. Spvd : Page 88 : Want Thoda Sa Pyaar Hua Hai & Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan picturised on Maaneet.

Unfulfilled : Will be fulfilled soon!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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TEASER FOR TODAY GUYS! EXPECT UPDATE EITHER TOMORROW OR ON MONDAY!


"You know what!", Arnav roared making Geet pause. He glared at her, "I will be able to plan agar tum do minute chup ho jaao toh! Main jaa raha hoon.!" Geet pouted, "Par kahaan?" Arnav growled at her, "Bachpan mein jaise tumhaari bak bak se bachne ke liye apne aapko apne kamre mein lock kar deta tha, waise hi aaj bhi lock hone jaa raha hoon!" He walked away swiftly leaving a confused Geet behind. Maine kya kiya?

Kaisa laga teaser?

Take care and enjoy your Saturday,
Kalpana

P.S Please do not write update soon unless I have not communicated for more than a week! It is really demotivating and demoralizing!😔
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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TEASER FOR TODAY GUYS!


Daadima had the medicines with water and NT got up to walk away when Daadima caught her hand and made her sit beside her. NT worriedly glanced at Dev. Daadima mumbled so sadly that NT had to strain her ears to listen to her, "Mere Maan bete ko kya ho gaya hai? Jab se Soni gayi hai tab se ek dum badal gaye hain!


Next chapter will be up tomorrow! Could not complete it today!

Take care and be patient till tomorrow,
Kalpana
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update😃
But i feel that Arnav might need to use Geet's filmy idea's😉
After all uski Afreen bhi toh fully filmy hai😆

My Idea no # 1 :- '"HOW TO GET THE BECHDE PYAAR KE PANCHI'S TOGETHER"

Do a Sholay sharabi scene reenactment...If it worked for Dharam Paaji then surely it will work for
ASR and Geet as well...
Waise bhi dono bewaddo ko chaath par jaane ka bada shock hai😉
So let ASR and Geet get drunk (and funny) together and lock themselves on the roof...
While the whole family looks in horror standing outside in the garden area...
Anjali and Maamiji ki toh death he ho jayegi🤣
Geet toh pagal thi hi, par ASR ko is Devdas ke roop mein dekhkar uski family toh shocked reh jayegi
Phir dono apne Mahiwal aur Afreen ke liye Demand rakhe family ke samne...

Suicide negotiation with a drunk ASR and uski Motor-mouth...
Throw in Sankadevi and Dusht-danav and we've got ourselves a BLOCKBUSTER🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello folks,

I am here for posting the daily status of my writing and compilation of DFL! Compilation is almost full stop coz I am not getting anytime to work on it these days but I did read Chapter 45 and got many ideas based on it.

Also instead of reading the reviews from mobile and noting the wishes I will directly read and note wishes as I review them. Coz I have noted wishes till 100th page yesterday and I have to reply reviews from 101st page. So both are on the same page! So why not combine the work! So today I reply reviews from Page 101 and 102 and noted wishes from those pages too. Got three of them from one page! Phew!

About the DFL update, I wrote an intense argument and romance filled Arhi scene! BTW, consider this as your teaser coz when I post teasers, you guys are never surprised when I post the updates!😭 Then I rote another intense romance and argument filled scene but of Maaneet! Tomorrow, I will write NK's entry and then chapter is done! If all goes well, (Bhagwan bachalena) I will update on Thursday!😃 More accuracy in my update prediction will be tomorrow!😉

Thats all for today folks!

Thank you and take care,
Kalpana

P.S. For homework you have to read Chapter 4, 22, 32 & 35! 😆😉 Jokes apart, many scenes in next chappy are connected to these chapters! So read it if you miss DFL!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
and you are back again
woohooo
shall get to it as usual
and am back
wait when did i go away
okay have lost it even more pardon me will ya

waah jab khud karte hain tab kuch nahin
yeh bahgwaan yehi mile the inhe
dono ki kismat phooti hai re
ek dusht daanav aur ek laad governor
tab se me me me chal raha hai inka
kya karein inka
chalo chaddo ji joh hona hai woh hona hi hai
really can you not think why she did this
and as if you left her ay choice mate
but no why will ASR think about it from her pov
egoistic arrogant little man urggg he makes me so mad at times
arrey waah ek apni khushi ke liye yeh baaki ko duhki dekhna chahenge
do you know what could have happened if you went for your afreen and not la
kitna bada bakheda khada hota
parr nahin inhe doosron se kya matlab
okay gotta stop bashing the guy
pheli baar pyaar kiya hai
aur abhi bhi nahin samajh paaye pyaar ko ji
pyyar kewal paana nahin hota
pyyar tyaag bhi hota hai balidaan bhi
aur doosron ko dukhi karr ke khud ka pyaar paana pyaar nahin hota arnav
yeh baat jis din bhi aapke samajh main aayegi ussi din aapko pyaar ka matlab samajh aayega ji
tab tak stay clueless dude that you are
well yes he can see the pain
but that in khushi's eyes
that you funnily enough cant see
she herself aint happy doing this
but what else should she have done
snatched her sister's happiness
like i said before if you had told her she could have nipped this disaster inn the bud but no you didnt
now suffer for it
jhoot bol karr koi bhi rishta aage nahin badhta hai
so for maan his priority is khushi and not arnie
unfortunately not the same way we had hoped
hmmm but that sure mad him more mad
wait why is maan being mad at khushi
really it seems inn dono ladko ko pyaar ke sahi maane hamari ladki ko sikhane hi padenge
they dont know love in its true form as of yet
really maan what were you gonna do
sam as arnie make a scene and make life hell for all invloved
yeh koi business nahin hai ki kuch bhi kiya jaa sakta hai
waqt ki nazakat ko samjhiye maan aur aap bhi arnie
dont ruin it for payash and your families
and try to understand why khushi did this

seriously you think she is playing arnie
really you have gotta be kidding me
hello wasnt arnie doing the same
and you know why she did this
pata bhi hai aapko ki yeh sab inki hi wajah se hua hai
what could she have done maan
just get engaged to him breaking her sister's heart and that of the family
aisa pyaar mein naa toh yeh khush reheti aur naa hi arnav
and here i was hoping that maan would understand her feelings and the reason why she did this
but then i forgot these two are more like one another than i thought they were
sach mein DM babaji what do i do with them
not that i can do much but someone can
and that will be our girls only
so arnie ki badi padi hai aapko
joh game inhone lhela that bhul gaye
aur sach mein agar aap inhe apni behen m,aante naa toh yeh naa sochte
think just for a moment from her pov
has anyone tried that no they havent have they

dhoka toh kewal khushi ne diya hai naa
aap ne toh unhe bilkul bhi dhoke mein nahin rakha
and what crap is this
dard sirf aap ko hai
arrey haan khushi toh khushi ke maare phooli nahin samaa rahi hain
badi khush hain aap ki sagaai apni di kke saath hotte hua
tabhi toh unka dil toot raha hai parr kya karen woh itni matlabi bhi nahin hain ki aap ke pyar mein andhi ho karr apne parvivaar apne behno ki khushiyan cheen le
waah maan sirf inka dard dikha aapko
khushi ka nahin
yeh nahin socha ki yeh karke unka kitna dil toota
arrey agar inhone apna pyaar khoya hai toh phir khushi ne bhi lhoya hai
parr nahin hamdardi toh keval chotte se hain
ho kya raha hai yeh
really these idiots seriously
aa gaye naa apne asli roop mein ASR
what else to expect from him
now that his anger ego and attitude is put in his ASR personna he didnt even wanna know why she did it
ek baar poochne mein kya jaata
but no why would he
he is ASR and dare anyone play with him
and if they do they shall pay for it
agar itni hi chinta thi parivaar toh phir chup chup karr pyaar kyun kiya
bata kyun nahin diya apne aur khushi ke baare mein
parr nahin inhe toh kissi ko nahin batana tha
arrey khushi ko laga aap unke saath khel rahe hain
jab tak sach pata chala bahut der ho gayi thi
well now why dont we just listen to our brain and do things ASR way
bhale hi usmein inhe lavanya se bhi shaadi kyun naa karni pade
waah what else to expect from ASR at this time
aur jab itna bhadkane ke baad yeh keh rahe hain khushi se baat karni padegi
by god dono ka haina murder karne ka mann karr raha hai
kalpu sach sach boliye aur koi ladke naa the hamari ladkiyon ke liye
kab sudhrenge yeh log
wow ASR has just gone and made things worse for himself even more
well best of luck following what you said
yeh pyaar hai arnav naa ki koi deal aur business ki kissi bhi tarah bhul jayenge isse
i feel like banging my head on the wall now
or better yet ASR head on the wall
but wont too much violence you see
lets see them trying to forget their love
they wont be able to do it
only geet did but then that was just bad luck
and she will remember it too or better yet fall in love properly this time

sach mein yeh maan bhi kuch kam nahin
and he just got his MSK mask on
well he is only fooling himself there and no one else
awww this is their first talk after her memory loss
well the second memory loss
maan you just said that it aint easy to forget love then why did you forget the same mate
ufff kya ho raha hai naa
parr bada mazaa aa raha hai
kalpu my dear tussi sach mein cha gaye ji
of course maan dont wanna talk to her too much
warna dil ko aur chot lagegi yeh soch soch karr ki soni inhe bhul gayi
thank you shank you kaha jaa raha hai
parr geet yeh agar aap ki jaan naa bachate toh phir aap inki jan kaise banti ji
ahhh but she dont know naa such shame
abbe kya karr raha hai
she is comparing you with brij
man thats the worst comparision ever
if he comes to know which he wont luckily he will blow a fuse
lo abb yeh bhi love story phir se shuru hone se phele usse bigaad rahe hain
koi nahin yeh toh hona hi tha
warna geet dusht daanav ko phir se phighlaye gi kaise hai na
well that saree is yours
or the woman you were
wait now i get the year wait that maneet were supposd to be apart from
she needs to finish her studies and then join KC right
yup that makes sense why the year thing was mentioned
she has to complete her studies only thens he will be with him again
hmmm but in that one year a lot is gonna happen
yes NT he is back to being MSK
doesnt really surprise me
after all he became maan for soni
and she aint there anymore so back to the pavillion
but chill dear if she can do that once she can do it again as well
awww she dont know the importance of that saree as of yet
maybe in future she will do right
good one NT real good
so what if he said he wont get back in her life
but geet is was and will be your love and of course your future wife
and by doing what she did NT just ensured that maneet do end up together eventually
the saree your mother had kept for her bahu reached its destination
even though the recipient knows nothing about that yet
and even maan wont be happy but who cares about that
dont you just love NT for that
yeh huyi naa choti behen ka farz waaf dil khush karr diya inhone

and there we have the broken and sad khushi
well she too knows how to mask her pain
for the sake of her family
even if its breaking her little by little
well wouldnt it just do that to her
after all the one she loves so much isnt hers
but is gonna be her jiju
of course i know that wont happen but for now he is that right
and why am i not surprised that before maan got to her arnie did
well he aint happy to see her
and am guessing he would wanna get his answers at least
but it seems she will lie to him
khushi itna toh inhe haq hai janne ka
yeh toh mat chiniye inse bhi aur apne aap se bhi
but of course she cant show whats in her heart right
as she isnt that type of girl uff kya musibat hai ji
excuse me you think she is happy
you were happy to see her in tears wow now thats love for ya
actually you are accusing him right
he knew all along that you were payal sister
he did hide it from you
funny right she thinks she is accusing him wrongly but she isnt
he aint innocent of this deed
but the poor girl dont know that what she is saying is so true
now thats some coicidence that she is saying exactly the truth but without knwoing about it
sweetie you hit the truth
you want him to hate you well after lsietning to this he wont
well he better not warna iski toh
sorry dear after what you said unknowingly he shouldnt think of you as petty or that you are seeking revenge from him

oh wait i forgot this is ASR we are talking about
even after being confronted about the truth he still has no shame
and still is blaming her
aap kya inki zindagi nark bayenge arnav
woh toh yeh khud karr rahi hain
taki aap inki behen ko khush rakh sake
isse kehte hain pyaar arnav not what you had for her
did he even love her i wonder
if he did how could he not know that khushi is not like this
he should know his afreen that well at least
but it seems he doesnt or else he would have seen through her pain she was hiding
or the fact that she is lying to you
and for whom you and her sister's happiness
but what did he do ridicule that love oh ma kya kkarun main inka

shame he didnt come when she said all that behind arnav back
then he would have known
and wouldnt need to ask her
man i cant see her like this
its even worse than what happened with maan
that was all due to destiny but here she had to kill her love for the man she loves
oh maan will you be able to hear why she did this will you
see now you know why
it was all due to arnav hiding about his true identity
like i have said countless times before had he not lied they wouldnt be in this position
oh god i just though of something
and its not good what am thinking of
that is what that man also known as ASR do to make her life hell
please let him not do what i think he would do or else he will loose her even more
but he will so do what i fear he will do
dammit this is gonna be worse for khushi than arnav
seee she did say what i said she could have done had she known
and why didnt she know
because a certain someone didnt tell her did he
well no it wont be all doom and gloom for ya khushi
because he too has to suffer
kyunki unki bhi toh galti hai
naa woh aapse chupate aur naa yeh naubat aati
see you too are doing the same
dard aap ko bhi hai aur inhe bhi
naa hi aap geet ko force karna chahate hain
aur naa hi yeh apni behen ko dulhi dekh sakti hain
what she said was so true right
kya kismat hain inn dono ki yaar bahut kharab hai

oh great it seems la aint happy about this either
whcih just makes this whole thing pointless
oh khushi wish you can hear this
it would help but now its late aint it
neither will la break it nor would khushi let her love come between them
at least dont lie to her la she is your di
unhe toh aap bata hi dijiye please
and you do wow i just love these sisters bond right
awww dammit her mother came at wrong time
why did she say what was in her heart in her mind
bet now what she tells payal will be heard by khushi
hence she wont back down either
this is just bad luck i tell ya
she too is doing this for family
arrey yeh dono bhi naa
ek baar toh apne baare mein sochti
but they just arent like that right
wait who broke her heart
so this mean neither is ASR gonna be happy
nor is la and of course not even khushi
yaar aisi shaadi ka kya matlab
two ar ruining their lives for love one for his ego
now thats the differene between them all
parr phir bhi zibndagi toh teeno ki hi barbaad ho rahi hai
shayad aage chal karr naa ho par abhi toh hai naa
she will never fall for ASR
ASR will never be able to love her either
and khushi too wont be able to forget ASR
hainnn yeh ho kya gaya

oh ho yahan man is lost in her memories
wahan geet calls him just when he is remembering her
waah kya connection tha boss
but it wasnt about maneet now
oh dear it seems dear ASR has gone into devdas mode
and about time too man
oh dear the poor girl is worried for her AB
well what else could she do but call maan
after all maan is closer to him than anyone else
and the one who was closer well she is the reason for this right
kya HP express ki tarah bol rahi thi yeh
poor maan's heart right
listening to his love and yet cant tell her of it
well for now ASR is of importance
only cause he is freaking drunk man
god knows what he will do in that state right

and there he is
our very own devdas arnav
man who would have thought she would reduce him to this
i miss you but will never forgive you
lo karr lo baat
chadhi huyi hai aur phir bhi ASR banna na chodenge yeh
ufff iss devdas ko koi le ke jaao re
maan my man where are ya mate
good naa they didnt know it was ASR
warna izzatka faluda bann jaata
abbe dheere bol maan ke kaan ke parde khaade ga kya
yeh toh keval geet ka haq hai
haila kitni chad gayi hai ki bar ka nam bhi nahin maloom
aur phir inhe bhi bula rahe hain bevdaa hone ke liye hadh hain
satyansh ho yeh toh aur bhi peeye jaa rahe hain
arrey aise gaane toh mat sunaiye warna yeh kya karenge bhagwaan jaane
kuch naa hi karre toh achaa hai boss
chalo kuch toh akal aayi inhe peene ke baad
parr yeh samajh jayegi tel lene jab hosh aayega inhe
well like she said its due to your one lie only
aur saaya arnav kabhi peecha nahin chodhta hai
toh iska kya matlab hua ki woh bhi aap ke saath hi hongi
parr saath ho kar bhi saath naa hongi saath
really you hate her
you cant hate her deep down even you know that
sach sach boliye arnav at least to yourself mate
oh dear well this was bound to happen
what happened sure hit him hard well it was supposed to so he would know what it feels like
well your stories are so simlar and yet they arent
he can get his answers from khushi but maan cant
ahhh the tragedy of it all

oh ho geet aap nahin jaanti
ussi baat ka toh rona hai ji
but what to do dear
he is back in his MSK mode so all this was gonna happen
you will know more of it soon enough
well thats that for now or is it
nope it aint is it
well she is right for sure
kaisa pyaar hai aapka
itni jaldi aap haar maan gaye maan
aap MSK yeh ya nahin
lagta hai deepa dear yeh kaam toh phir geet ko hi karna hoga
so baby naming ceremony and akash performance
well at least one brother got his love
only because he was clever enough to make sure they got him for her
as in telling family and letting them do it all
had our heroes done the same this wouldnt have happened
oh well something else would have happened right
cheers for pm
and so sorry for bashing maan and arnav so much
but they make me so mad for sure sorry
will try not to do that again i hope
hope your back is better now dear
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Ahhh so its time for arhi side of things right

And a lot will happen for them too

But after this one all shall be okay

And lets hope it will be back to normal

Although are our maneet and arhi even normal

Hmmm that depends on our pov right

After this one things will be fun like you said

And am glad for that

It was hard seeing them so sad and forlorn man

Time to bring some laughter and mischief back huh

That will be rocking for sure

After all this isn't some rona dhona story is it

No its just opposite of that right

So lets get down to it

And hope will put this up in time for you to view next day

That will be good

Ahh so we start with dadi NT and nani convo

Lets see what nani is calling to tell dadi

Arrey haan shaadi toh lucknow mein hogi

After all ladki waale lucknow mein hain

Aur barat le karr raizadas jaayenge naa

I really forgot about that oops

Well am sure the khuranas shall come to lucknow for the double or maybe more than double wedding right

Parivaar jaise ho nahin nani parivaar hi hain

After all payal aur khushi maan aur dev ki muh boli behne hai

Toh khuranas ka aana toh taiye hain

See even dadi said the same

That they are from girls side naa

So they shall all be going to lucknow where things will change naa

Hehehehe okay let those games begin okay not yet but soon enough

I know if khuranas wotn be there well that will be sad

Warna geet aur maan ka kya hoga

Plus maan needs to be there to support his sisters naa

Dadi ladke waale baraat le karr jaate hain ladki waale nahin

Though it would be easier if they got married in delhi right

So it wasn't guptas who decided to have wedding in lucknow

But anj okay I think that will work

After all that's was the place where arhi met for the first time and payash too

Gosh I remember their first meeting of these two couples in sheesh mahal

How khushi called arnav a rakshas

And payash cute meeting too

Guess anj reasons for getting them married there is right too

After all the bad and sad memories that place has seen time to replace those with new and happier memories right

Okay so they are all set for the wedding

But surely the wedding wont be happening for a while right

That's will be too early

Anyway before the actual wedding we have lots of pre wedding ritual that will happen first

So there is time for actual wedding

And things being the way they were

Hello dadi is not sabko but family member yaar

Toh unhe nahin batayengi toh kisse batayengi

After all dadi and khuranas gotta know about it all

They are family too naa arnav

Yup of course they are family yaar

And after marriage of certain arhi and maneet they shall be family

After all behen de rahe hain ek doosre ko yaar

Even if they aren't blood sisters but they are sisters nonetheless

Once again I am going off the tangent

Iss ladki ka kuch nahin ho sakta hai ji

Okay so she did tell the same story to others

That's why he was shaking his head

Ufff yaar ek baar agar nani bhi shuru ho jaaye well no stopping her either right

And there nani drops a bomb on arnav

He so didn't see that coming

But dude why would she go with you guys and buaji

After all she has less time to spend with her sisters naa

Once they are married well she cant meet them so frequently

So she will wanna spend some time with them

And help with gupta side of preps too

How much will garima and the brides do on their own right

Another helping hand will be needed and that hand is khushi

Arrey waah yeh toh khushi ki bat hai

NK bhi aa rahe hain

Matlab samajhte ho haan iska logon

Apni la ke kiye bhi koi aa raha hai

Her love interest is also coming

No wonder you said things will be on track

You have prepared for it all dear

Tussi great ko ji sach mein

Chalo things are working out for everyone slowly slowly

Hum bhi excited hain nani that nk is coming

What can be better news

Well I can think of some more but for now this is good news for sure

I have realised something arnav aur maan ki zindagi mein kaafi ladies hain who can give other run for their money when it comes to talking

I mean juts take nani for example now right

Arnav does it matter when she is going

Of course it does what a silly question am asking right

Hello anything that is to do with khushi is his business

Even though he was trying to show that it isn't

Oh ho so she is leaving this soon huh

Well what else will she do here man

After all for who and what should she stay back no reason she has now

Nani kinki shaadi mein

Aap ke hisaab se arnav aur la ki shaadi mein

But that cant happen now can it

Man she dropped another bomb on him

That she is leaving today itself awww

Dude did ya forget she has no rights on you now

After all who aapki ab kya lagti hain

Toh ruk karr apne aap ko aur kyun dukh dengi ji

We all knew that you still loved her

But that damn ego of yours and your anger just made things worse

Dude we never suspected your love for her

But of course no one was happy with his behaviour with khushi either

Her betrayal well am sure soon you shall know it wasn't her betrayal

But all thanx to you that this happened

And since I read last line of this update am sure that he does find out the reason of her supposed betrayal good about time too

No your journey is for much longer and for life but at this moment you guys were together only till here

Later things shall change

But for time being you are her jiju to be like aki man

Aaj jaa ke inhe realise hua ki shaadi mein jyada samay nahin hai

Man he was kinda sleeping till now

More like not focusing on the bigger picture right

That in 18 days time he will be her jiju and not saiyyan

About time he woke up to that thought man

Ek nazar se kya hoga arnav

You know it she knows and we sure as hell know it that seeing her one more time wont change anything

But if that makes him happy and if arhi meet for one last time before she goes back who am I to stop him

Waise kya excuse use karne waale hain aap unse milne ke liye

Not that he needs any excuse since he is guptas to be damaad but still

Ahhh dev did see it all

The confrontation between maneet

Well he wanted to make sure all goes well

But he forgot that his brother is such dusht danav

Who is hell bent on ruining his life by letting his love go

Aww poor geet went away crying

But am sure not for long will she be crying

At least I hope not right

Okay sorry so he didn't hear it all

But he knows that his bro has done something wrong for sure

And he is spot on for sure

Goes to show he knows his brother pretty well naa

Your bro has done it again hasn't he

Though shouldn't really be surprised that he did what he did naa

Dev is so right in thinking that

Come on MSK will not make life easy for himself or for other to make it easy for them to get his lost happiness back

In fact he will make it hard for others and himself to get his love back naa

I so agree with dev there

MSK is the most stubborn fella along with of course ASR

Dono hi ek hi thalli ke chatte batte hain

Kitna bhi samjhao ya inke liye kuch karo maante hi nahin hain dono

Well he may be the most stubborn but he is still human

Of course rejecting geet love like that cant be easy on him

But he thinks he had to do this

Why because he doesn't wanna go through another heart break if geet left him again

Ufff kya karein inka yaar

Dev you will know when he tells you what happened between your bro and bhabhi

Itna kuch keh diya aur ab ro rahe hain

Guess it just isn't easy for him to risk his heart from being broken again

But then if he doesn't then also he shall be crying

So this situation is just catch 22 aint it

You might not have the strength to love her but we hope she does

So she can this time support you

Her love will make you fall in love with her

This time she cant afford to lose you either

Dude I don't know why you cant believe it that he gave up on love

Of course he has dude

He may look strong and all but he too is human naa

There is only so much he can take

And I think losing soni was the last straw

But that don't mean you have to give up on them

Or geet gives up on her love

Cause that will bring them nothing but misery for sure

Now all is on geet for sure just as I suspected

And she is his last hope for maan to come back to normalcy

It all depends on geet how she will win her love back and make her love belive in their love

Hain kuch jyada hi love love ho gaya re

Of course he still loves her

That is one surety my man

You cant just fall outta love just because one decides to give up on the said love mate

Pyaar who sirf inse ki karte the karte hain aur karte rehenge

Who baat aur hai ki iss pyaar parr unka vishwaas uth gaya jab geet unhe bhul gayi parr pyaar abhi bhi kayam hai

Yup like I said only geet can make maan belive in his love again

And that is for certain

It might take a while but it shall happen dev fear not

Although how can he not fear what with his bro breaking down like this

I swear itna toh yeh tab bhi nahin toote the jab geet sorry soni inhe bhool gayi thi

Koi nahin geet hai naa ji inke liye

Ahhh back to arhi I see

Arrey yaar yahan bhi toh dukh hi dukh hain

Both couples aren't having the best time are they but this phase too is temporary

Dukh aaya hai toh jaayega bhi ji

So khushi is getting ready to go back to her amma and sisters

I know that's sad but what can she do either right

There is only so much she could take being near him and not be with him naa

Yeh bhi toh insaan hain ji

I know dear fret not this was supposed to happen

And soon you will get your lost happiness back

Oh dear even thinking that her love is gonna be her jiju well that is just hard

Why did this have to happen

Her love isn't hers anymore is it

Its gonna be her la di's uff the heart ache

Dil toh nahin manega naa ki arnav inke jiju honge saiyyan ye bajaye

Well it's a good thing that wont happen

Warna teen zindagi barbaad ho jayengi and that will be more sad than at moment

Even I wonder the same why did this have to happen

But if it didn't happen how else would this story be spiced up

Plus I have said it before if they got their love so easily whats the fun in that right

So this is test of sorts to see how they would cope without one another

That's another matter that they aren't coping so well

But this too is temporary phase naa

Seems even the radio is in agreement with khushi aww

Iss kyun ka kya jawab dein khushi

Mujhe nahin lagta iss kyun ka koi theek jawab hoga jo aapko rahat de

Aww seeing her like this or any characters I don't like

But this too is part of better things to come so that's fine too

Ahhh one side khushi is sad the other her veerji is sad too

Well more like all four are sad only

Aww all he can think of is geet

She is his love so of course his heart would remember her only naa

How can it forget the reason for its beat man

Ahh yes that vision of hers will haunt if for sure

Making her cry never made him happy

But what could he do he just couldn't get himself to believe that she wont leave him again

Hain yeh bhi radio on karr rahe hain waah kya baat hai

Dono bhai behen apne dukh radio se sang bant rahe hain

Maan don't be shocked dude

I know the song is enrapturing what you are feeling

Well this always happen with songs and this story how the songs are just perfect on any given situation not that one is saying other stories don't have the same oopsies

Not him too man

Though guess cant blame him for asking that question either

After all dono ki situation ek hi hai ji

Nasha toh who aapka hain maan

Aur uss nashe ko bhulna naamumkin hai maan

That still wont stop him from wanting to forget her though

Ahh the third person in this tragedy is here too arnav

So he finally reached to see his khushi or is it afreen for last time before the whole pre weding ritals start

Can someone tell me how come peeps just come and go from these houses

As in gupta house KM and shantivan koi bhi ghussa chala aata hai and no one knws

Okay I exaggerate there but you know what I mean

And why on earth do peeps leave their doors open that's just asking for trouble

I cant believe am spouting such rubbish when such intense scene is going on

Yeh babaji aur DM mera kuch nahin ho sakta

Ahh there is the last of the four who is being miserable at the moment

And no one knows that these guys are so sad which aint true these guys know how sad the others are but cant do anything for it either

Geet jyada fast na drive kari accident ho gaya toh

And with her frame of mind that's even more dangerous aint it

Whats with these guys and wanting to get as far as possible from whom they should be coing closer

But then cant blame them can we

Jab dil toota hai toh jisne dil toda use door hi jaana chahoge naa

Which is what they are doing aint they

So she too is listening to the same time huh

Wow what a connection that is

One song has them all connected with their hearts too

Sorry geet but I think that song will make you think more of maan words instead of making you forget them

This isn't nightmare but reality though no less that nightmare too must add

For not only geet but maan arnav and khushi

OMG could those words be more apt for maan or what yaar

Aww now he is lost in those moments with geet

And of course he wants to move on from those as if that's possible sorry maan no can do

Ahhh so true khushi you have lost him but not forever my dear

Don't be silly geet

You cant stop love from happening

And this was all destiny's game again which brought you face to face with your love again

You couldn't have fought against your fate dear

And nor will your love for him which was already in some corner of heart would have stopped you from loving him truly again

Wow those lines sure depicted her turmoil didn't it yup

Dude time waits for no man and cant be rewound

But it sure can make help you get your loved one back as well

Chalo at least someone saw arnav but it was buaji who saw him not khushi

Not that it matters as she is leaving arhi alone so that's good

They can still have their last meet with one another before she leaves for lucknow

Waah kya baat hai buaji aapne toh yeh aur bhi asaan karr diya arhi ke liye

He came to meet her only now you just gave him reason to see her too

Though how she shall react to his presence is another matter

The one from whom she is running away from has come to see her oh teri

Acha she didn't hear her buaji well she is too lost in her sad sad thoughts naa

And its better she not know that he is here or she will be even sadder

Parantu inka milna bhi hai zaroori

You aint the only one who is gonna lose khushi she too will lose you

And not to forget the other couple

Though unka matter different hai since they aren't about to marry someone else like arnav

Ahh yes her having an accident is what me worried about too

But then her tears cant stop not today when her love rejected her

And why because he thinks she might leave him again

Of course that aint gonna happen thankfully

Arrey baap re yeh lines toh sach mein match karr rahi hai inke emotions ke saath

Don't be silly khushi

How is it all your fault dear not all of it

Some of it and majority is his fault too

Had he not kept your relationship a secret well they wouldn't have chosen la for him

And had he told you his identity things wouldn't have gone this far

Damn I cant help but blame this man here sorry parr kya karun yaar

Though she is right about one thing three lives are gonna be ruined if this marriage happens

Aww sadness hi sadness hain aaj

Kuch jyada hi parr jald hi khushiyan bhi waapis aayengi naa

Soni forgot you but geet still remembers you dear

So why are you not letting geet soothe you with her love

Wait they are one and the same right

Abb jisne dard diya hai wohi toh uss dard ko mitayega

That's if he gives her a chance naa

Well shutting off the radio will not stop all these thoughts about geet go away either maan

Dude she never heard her buaji so she don't know you are here

And its not like she doesn't wanna see you either

Even though it hurts to see you in front of her

Well love can give you such sweet pain cant it

So he decided to go see her for himself

That I think was good move for sure

Aww there is her room khushi is looking at her love pic since that's all she can do

Since her love don't wanna see her personally after her supposed betrayal

Hmm just in time he came and saw her with his pic

Thank god for a change h was at the right place at right time

Think he will find out about the whole reason for her doing what she did

Nahin arnav who aapki picture nahin hain aapke hamshakal ki hai

The things this dude says man unbelievable

Duh she loves you so it will be your pic she has naa

Ahh she is letting her tears flow for her first love loss

Aww man I feel so bad for them all now

Ahhh now that's the perfect place to have this song of IPK

Acha sab inka karaya hai

Aap ne toh kuch bhi naa kiya arnav

Well you will know soon enough if it was all due to her or also due to what you hi mate

Well she is asking for forgiveness for lying to you not betraying you

Dude she never betrayed you but same cant be said about you

Seems the time is here for him to know why she thinks he isn't a liar or betrayed her when in fact he did lie to her

That's where you are all wrong my dear

He toh knew all about your identity and still he didnt tell his to you which is why you guys are in this mess

She thinks he didn't lie hah if only she knew right

Sweetie he knew it all from the beginning only you didn't know the same

He knew who he was falling in love with you didn't my dear

Actually khushi you were bang on right in blaming him you just ddint know it

Dude aab yaad aya ki inhone aapse yeh sab kaha tha

If only he had paid attention then well what to say

Abbe gadhe (sorry for calling him that but just had to there please don't kill me peeps) of course she believed ya you were lying but she didn't know that did she

Well she did all that because she knew that her la di was chosen to be your bride

Jab yeh rishta aaya tha la ke liye unhe nahin pata tha naa ki aap hi la ke hone waale who hain

Had she known she could have told you and you could have sorted it out before things got this far

But then how would she know that when he hid his identity from her

Bade aaye sach jaane waale

Will you be able to hear the truth mate

When she isn't wrong in accusing you for lying to her

Beta sab saamen aa jayega wait kariye

And he will come to know of it all now

He didn't even have to ask her she just told him like that

She was all happy for her sister and also happy that once la and payal got married it would be her turn not knowing that her la di was gonna get married to her love only

And why she didn't know that because a certain someone never told her of his identity

Ab toh inhe solid jhatka lagega hi zaroor

Haiyye kitne aspen dekhe the aur sab choor choor hog aye naa

Waah kya sapne the yaar

So cute and beautiful but all went down the drain didn't they when she came to know of reality of things man

Awww man it wasn't easy for her when she came to know that you were not her groom but that of her sister whom she loves so dearly

So she didn't say anything because she knew he would say no and that they would work it all out

But then nothing like that happened did it

In fact just the opposite happened didn't it man

Hmmm yes that would or could have happened but of course it never got to that

Oh hello where are you lost now

Do you realise she was hoping you would make things alright but that clearly wasn't meant to be

If only that had happened

But once again that would have been too easy for them

Utna mazaa nahin aata if that had actually took place naa

Uff his proposal came at wrong time

She had hoped he would get the family and ask for her hand

But with his proposal she didn't know what to do

Though she loved him but she couldn't accept after al she cant let la suffer due to her could she which is why she didn't react to your proposal

Hmmm she was in solid dilemma wasn't she

On one hand was her love and the other her parents trust on her which she kinda broke by meeting and falling in love with ya kinda

Ahhh and he finally knows what a mistake he did by flrting with la and ruining his love with his own hands good about time he knew that

Abb samjhe la ke saath uss tarah flirt karr ke aapne apne pairon mein khuhadi mari thi

And gave your family the green signal for your and la marriage proposal

Yes due you are the blooming reason for this mess and not her

Aur impulsive hoyiye josh mein aake aapne kya karr diya ji

Well she is feeling lighter and he just started feeling burdened

Uff arnav what did you do in your hasty decisions man

No way would he do that to take revenge from you but then what else would she think of it he didn't know naa that he was agreeing to marry thee wrong sister

Yes it was mu on both sides too

Her thinking that he is doing it all to make her jealous and revenge

And he didn't know that payal had another sister and agreed to marry who he thought was khushi but was in fact la

She was in right dilemma man she couldn't say about her situation as things could have gone bad for both the families so she did what she thought was right for the family and sacrificed her love

Yup that's the reason why she did all this for you for her sister

And what did you do arnav you demeaned her sacrifice and taunted her for that how could you

Well how could she consult you mate you hadn't left her with any choice

Had you at least told her of your identity then she could have told you about la being her sister and all but you didn't

She broke your trust and you didn't break hers by lying to her

Is he still freaking focusing on her lies and breaking of trust what about his man

Why is it that he still cant see beyond himself there

Though he is right about the ruination of three lives

Well this was one hell of a rollercoaster

With maneet and their heart break

And arhi and the truth of it all coming out

So now its time for some action and that's gonna happen and soon cool man

Cheers for pm kya chapter tha yaar solid

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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wat an imagination yar👍🏼! must say Geet Handa/Raizada part was out of the world! ahhh it dat d FF got ovr tooo soon... cant hv enuf of it.
after reading this FF only one thing comes to my mind








update sooon!




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was stalking sorry
okay maybe not sorry if you dont mind 😆

And so the one we were waiyting for is here

Haiyye kya baat hai

Bless this is it peeps

Arnav and geet are gonna go and get their love after all raizada gets what raizada wants

And baby am I waiting for this or what ASR and GR will be in form now

MSK and KKG wont know what hit them right

So will be done today of course

Well of course it would be since not too long

Hmmm lets get down to it then

Geet there is nothing more ti understand

You have to get maan back

Its what you need to do and have to do

Cant let him be such devdas don't suit his personality

Boy this sure is fun I tell ya

Raizadas are both gearing up for the fight

May they win their love back

Oh ho that's because maan don't want further heart break

But we know that wont happen

No one is forcing him to love you either

He loves you anyway

Now you just gotta prove it to him that his heart will be safe with you

And this time his love will be his

Not much you have to do just make him believe in his love again

Okay I must be kidding if am saying not much to do

That's gonna be real hard to do

Making MSK you get it MSK to believe in love again

Because if you don't then well he wont let love into his life

Will make himself and you miserable

Now am sure you don't want that dear right

No more asking babaji like I aid to ASR God helps those who help themselves

Ab sab aap parr hi hai geet

You have to fight for your love and only then you shall win

No point is staying sad like this too long as that's not gonna help not in your case or that of your bother anav

Dil ki baat sunni chahiye when its to do with emotions

Maan ka kya hai dekhiye aap unhe paane ke liye karengi sab kuch toh maan mil jaayenge naa

Maan says a lot of things don't mean that you agree with them all do you sweetie

Well I think diary will give her hope for her to fight for her love

Sorry geet there is no other way

That way is not for you ever please not giving up

You didn't when you escaped your cruel family

Then how can you give up now when again its matter of your life dear

Sorry dear that song I don't see maneet like I said before see different couple but song is apt

You know what those words mean don't you

He made you his deewani now time to return the favour my dear

Of course he didn't get his love easily

You never do that do you

So if he fought for his love now its your turn dear

So now you know what to do don't you dear

Time for you to woo your love

Agar who karr sakte hain toh aap bhi karr sakti hain yeh

And she got it what she gotta do

Time to dance in happiness like geet

Kya baat hai about time it sinks in right

Chalo she understood what babaji and all readers want

Happy days are here finally

Yes, yes and more yes she shall fight for her love

Haiyye we all wanted that didn't we

Thought this day couldn't get here soon enough

And now that its here woohooo

Mission M more like double M dear

Maan and mohabbat

Maan count the days soon you will be confessing your love to your lady love in front of all

Haiyye kya baat hai

Just thinking about it makes me so happy

Oh ho its so good to see her so happy

Ahhh geet is being very dangerous at the moment

Hehehe that's where the fun lies don't it

Haila like I said she is dangerous mode now

Mami ki lipstick ke saath kya karr diya inhone

Haiyyo rabba geet jhalli kya karr rahi hai

But I prefer this jhalli geet to the sad geet she was being any day

Trust me mami understanding her mood at this moment wont be easy

Leave it you shall know soon enough why she is behaving this way

Poor mami got scared what she saw in the mirror

Ab kya karrein yeh toh hona hi tha

Ahhh thanx to kanha she wont do any mischief here right

Anj you Baby was always crazy now you realise it

Parr aaj kuch zyada hi crazy ho rahi hain apne phele pyaar mein

So who is the next victim I wonder

Her veere or her jiju don't think he would be home or her AB

Okay so its her veere only

Oyye hoyye who toh parjayji ke khwaab mein khoye huye hain

Well he is the only one who can openly look at his love's pic naa

Poor geet and arnie cant do the same

Time to keehcofy his tang I think no

That's what she will do right hehehehe

And he wont even know when the typhoon geet hit him

Sheesh she screamed in his ear

That was even more naughty of her

So hilarious that was poor aki man

Run geet my dear

Your veere is after ya dear

So if she didn't tease him regarding payal now there is still time for that in pre wedding rituals naa

She hid by the poolside and aki didn't see her

Well yes arnie could use a hug right about now

As it is he is too miserable due to his love life going down the drain

He needs this hug and geet being there for him

She might just give him idea how to get his afreen back

Aawww at least someone finally saw him crying

Well dear he is crying for the same reason you were just a day ago

Heart break and not getting his love

Even ASR is effected by those things

After all he too has a heart which is broken as his love doesn't want to be with him

Though for different reason to geet love story

Hope he tells her and she can help him

Its time he started sharing his grief with others it will help

Well duh she too is going through the same

She knows what you will be going through as she too is going through the same

Please tell her why you are like this arnie

Aww am glad he has shed his ASR mask before her

He needs that hug and someone for a change to soothe him too

Arrey yaar pheli baar inhone pyaar kiya dil kissi ko diya aur jab thukra diye gaye toh chot toh inhe bhi lagi naa

Am glad she was there for him

That she too could comfort him when he needed it

That's what siblings are there for

Ahhh she sure will figure it out it seems

Thanx to that DM idol I hope and rest she can find from the horses mouth sorry I mean arnie

Yup your thoughts are going in the right direction geet

It is to do with khushi only

Now you just need to figure out or ask him why

She is good aint she yup she is

Kitne jaldi do aur do ko joda aur paanch bana diya

I know I know do aur do paanch nahin hotte but it sounded better there sorry

Yes that khushi mystery that needs to be solved and soon by you

Aww but she too is right

Now is not the time for that

She needs to comfort her brother who needs some comforting right about now

Ahhh good seems his emotional outburst has stopped

Weird to see him and maan cry

But then love makes even the toughest of peeps cry don't it

Really don't be silly

So what she saw your emotional outburst

Choti hain toh kya hua hai toh aapki hi behen

Don't hide this side of yours from family at least

Aww I loved it when she placed her shoulder on her AB that was so cute scene seeing these two bond too

Arnav don't try to hide please

It will help if you told someone they can help

Don't have to say her name but can tell your problem even then

Aur choti behen se kya chupana arnie

Come on don't you clam up to her please

Come on we know you can do it

Tell her please arnie you can do it

You can bare out your heart to geet

Yeh arnie bhi naa bahut hi ziddi bache hain

Lets see what she does to make him open up

Or if not that tries to help her AB

Soch lo arnav yeh maukka phir naa ayega bata do geet ko kya hua

Aise akele udaas baithne se toh acha hoga aap inhe bata dein

Arnav ab aapki choti behen itne pyaar se pooch rahi hai kya hua unhe nahin batayenge aap

Come on better tell her before she tells your di that you were sad

And once it gets to your di she will be after you like anything till she knows all

Am sure you don't want to disturb your di so just tell geet

Plus he is right anj will feel guilty for getting you engaged with la and not khuhi whom you love

So geet is the safest option dude

She can help you out as she is going through the same

And you can unburden yourself with her too

Geet wait for it he is deciding to tell you

Just give him few minutes and he shal tell you all I hope

And he finally opens up to her

Tells her what she knew of but now forgot

And the whole saga

Not just how he met fell in love but also how he hid things from her too

Those were the times right

When arnav would whine to meet up with khushi on Sundays and poor dear had to lsten to him

Though it was hard for her

Well yes that made us laugh too geet this side of your AB that khushi brought out sure is a miracle

I know like you made maan do things no one else made him do khushi too did the same

Kya baat hai kitni milti hai inki soch naa

Well thank god they came into ASR and MSK lives or these two would be the robots that they were and would forget living as humans yaar

Wow didn't know that he didn't share his pain of losing his parents with even his family

Yes she does mean a lot to him

But then he had to go and forget all this in this past year didn't he

Waah all the story is coming out

He hasn't left anything behind and that's good

See even she can see that wasn't the best way of handling things with khushi

Kya karrein geet apke AB aur aapke maan dono ek hi thaali ke chatte batte hain

Oh my she almost was gonna be violent against him

Wanting to slap or strangle him that's bad naa

Well duh she can understand what khushi went through when her brother made her go through that dark phase

Well pyaar mein idiot bhi bann jaate hain geet

And he isn't the first one to commit such stupid mistakes either

Plus you know what your brother is like when someone hurts him he goes all defensive and hurts that person too

See she agrees with me that in love you do the stupidest of things

Wow geet aur mere khyal kitne mil rahe hain regarding hee brother and her love

Even I was thinking the same

I know right inn dono ka kuch nahin ho sakta

But you gotta help him out not for him but for khushi dear

Doe he really wanna hear whats she gonna say

It wont be anything good about you just so you know mate

She knows once she says what she does he will go all angry on her so is making ready for her escape

Smart girl must say why be near the furious lion right

Arrey geet ne toh mere mann ki baat cheen li

She is right you know in calling you all those names

Don't know why you are screaming so much when she is right

So what else should she say after finding out how you yourself ruined your love with your own hands ASR my man

See she can tell what your afreen is like and you claim to know her and understand her well

She has forgotten what she was like with khushi but she can tell what khushi is like

And that she would never betray you kya zamana aa gaya hai jisne pyaar kiya use apne pyaar parr bharosa naa tha

Aur jo khushi ko jyada nahin milli who unhe zhat se jaan gayi

I know he had no trust on her love for him

He didn't even ask her even once why she did what she did

Itna toh aap ko haq tha naa to ask

But no what did you do instead taunt her and what not

Gussa hone se kya faiyda when what she said is true mate

Don't you go if only on me mate

If only will not help you right now okay

Yeh babaji geet tera bhai naa sach mein maan ki tarah hai

He is giving up on his love too just because khushi told him not to come after her

Laga isse ek sach mein naa kya karrein inn dono ka

Had hai bewakkofi ki bhi arnav sach mein

I know geet even am like what is wrong with this guy too

No you might not deserve her

But she blooming well does deserve someone who loves her that much

Now how to tell him not to give up just like that geet

Cause if you don't he wont get it either

You tell him dear aise haath pe haath rakhne se kuch nahin hoga

Like geet he too should fight for his love yaar

Aap ASR hain ki nahin

And since when did ASR give up so soon yaar

She is so right make her forgive you

Fall in love with you again

For aminute he was like I can do this and then he mentioned his wedding

Oyye 18 din kaafi hai yeh sab karne ke liye

I know who can be more stubborn than ASR when it comes to winning (well MSK of course but that's besides the point)

Waise geet khushi ko pataana inke deal karne se bhi jyada mushkil hai

Parantu naamomkin bhi nahin

Rejection se tang aa karr hi toh jitney ka zasba aaur badh jaata hai

Guess its time to use her own story to make him understand

Of course maan and arnie knew one another love story

In fact only maan knew how he was keeping his identity hidden from khushi

Arrey don't go there geet

Jab pyaar ke liye kuch naa karr paaye toh dost ke liye kya karte

Not when arnav's love is his baby sister too

So right again she is

Per pe kuraadi maar li hai dono ke dono doston ne

Inak sach mein kuch nahin ho sakta parr hona zaroori hai

So she told her story too

And how she fell for him again well this time properly

Is arnav kidding me you are angry at him for doing this to geet

Did we forget what you did to khushi mate

You weren't any less harsh with her

When you know why he did it then you being angry on him don't make sense

Ahahah kya baat hain maan ki glati dikhi

Khud ki galti bhul gaye aap arnav

She sure pointed out that he too did the same to khushi too bhul gaye

Good that he understood that he wasn't any less wrong too that he will point his finger in accusation towards maan

She is gonna fight for her love just as she is asking you to do the same

Yes both brother sister have built walls around their hearts

Which will have to be taken down by you both and soon too

Inki toh sach mein suyi atak gayi hai

Baar baar rejection ka soch karr ghabra jaate hain

Aha loved what she said to arnav there about love and being able to take anything for that love

That needs to be drilled in him too

Jab inhe pyaar huya naa toh sab change ho gaya

True Love can change you make you mature and do what ever you can do to keep that love with you

Come on if Baby can do it so can you her brother do it

Aww that was so cute scene with arnav and geet

And he is gonna fight for his love wooohooo even more happier now

Chal give him another solution as to how to make his afreen come back to him

Hmmm yes he has to start thinking with his heart and swtich off his brain in this matter

As brain wont help him woo her back

Your heart knew she would never do this to you but you didn't listen to it did ya

Love is not any of your deals mate its love so think of ways of getting your love back by being sweet and nice to her as you once were

Of course she will help you

But just helper not the one with how to go about wooing her

That has to be you and only you not google either mate

Aww and then he too can help her with maan cool

And it seems they are ready for their fight or war to win their love back

Of course DM did this

You asked her for help and she did help when you tried to help yourself too by telling geet all this

Oh ho kya baat hai

He believes in DM now

Aww isn't that just great

Sach mein pyaar mei kya kya nahin ho jaata ji

ASR ko phir se DM yaani ki bhagwaan pe vishwaas ho gaya

Aww all that darkness after his parents deaths has vanished after his that confession to DM

And Baby your AB is back in action about time too

It seems that khushi managed to get the same arnav who used to pay pranks on the family not this one who was all arrogant and silent

Wow she sure has changed him

Seems true love can change anyone even ASR

Aww isnt that just good

She gave them there arnav once again who changed and closed himself off after his parents death

Abbb aap unki naa fikar kariye he is back

But don't underestimate khushi either

If she can do this to your brother she can also resist him too

So let the games begin geet

Ahhh well lets see what maan is doing now

What with his rejection of geet playing on his mind whats gotten into him

Dadi he is running can you believe it

All those excuses he is using to avoid one certain someone

Uff kya karrein yaar

Dono bhai behen ne toh bgahne ka plan bana diya hai

They aint gonna make it easy for them are they

But then they shouldn't either right

That's some excuse you made there mate very naughty lying to your dadi

She knows that its just an excuse mate

But guess he don't wanna tell her either why he is going

Don't wanna complicate the matter with dadi knowing right

Yeah use your sis and her hubby as an excuse too

As if she don't know that you are doing this to avoid someone

Shame she don't know that someone is geet only

Who else but her can make him do this naa

Of ciurse he cant miss their wedding

Although given his current state you never know he might just skip that just to avoid geet

But he wont will he

After all its not only his best friend's wedding but that of his sister's too

So not coming to that will cause lots of problem

As if he can miss it like you said arnie and aki wont participate in their wedding rituals without him naa

So he will come with annie and jun huh okay that's fine

Hmmm actually dadi there is someone who can make him change his mind and that's feet she is trying to do just that from this point onwards so chill

Aha so NT heard them good

Now she can tell geet as well about this

So geet is aware of all this naa

Bechari is making plan to make him fall in love and he is running

Ahhh so she told dev to talk to geet good idea

Bless she is so excited about her plans for maan

Wait till she knows about maan decision

Dev is like hain she sure is chirpy after what happened

Oh dev she has moved on from that now

All she is focusing on is how to make him confess again

Sorry did she say bro pe line maarne ke liye to dev

Wow she sure is out to get maan aint she cool

Ufff kya yaar inke office romance ke plans gaye pani mein

Well that can still happen after their wedding right

How can he miss the wedding my dear

Yup that wedding is gonna bring them closer again

That's the spirit dear make sure he falls for you again

Hmm so she is letting have his time off from her

And then when they meet well he wont know what hit him

As ASR younger sister is out to get him

Though MSK wont make it easy either but there where the fun lies right

Ahhh so khushi is leaving too

Wow she cant remember the time spent with her sister but with arnie

Now that's something ehhh

Sweetie it aint tainted never say that

And once you marry that man am sure you will be happy that this happened

Well you will be able to as you will be with him naa

Kpi nahin khushi that's okay

Yaad toh unhe karr sakti hain naa

He might not be yours but you can think about him

No she wont be able to will she

As if that's possible not when DM is in the other camp now

Yes goodbye indeed but just for few days and then hello arnie

Then he wont spare ya at all

Wow he is giving her too time off from him

And then wham he will be there for her forever

She wont know what hit her naa

But of course she too wont make things easy for him either

Afreen toh bas aapki hain ji

Aur soni maan ki

So let this love game begin yipeee

Cheers for pm

Happy days are here now woohooo

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