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Posted: 12 years ago
When I was 14-15 I was crazy for Sarat Chandra Chattopadhyay's novels & Rabindranath Tagore's short stories...Calcutta & Bengali society of early 20th century means their stories to me...while reading this story I can visualize that scenario once again...i dont dare to compare off course,but believe me throughout these 4 chapters all i can remember is those stories...
I admire Arnav's character u know...his situation is really familiar to me...but the way he replied back his father...wanted a difference in life...displeased at the norms of that society...still saw Khushi as a child...I always wanted the leads of those stories like this...
As for his visit to the courtesan...it was common then I guess...but I have faith in him...he will not repeat this again...
What i loved most is he didnt take out his frustration on Khushi...he might behaved rudely but he did apologized...and is really kind to her...
And Khushi...innocence personifies...she is such a kid...trying hard to grow up...but not really understand what growing up means...
I badly want her transition from a child to woman in presence of Arnav...in his company...and fall in love in the process...
really really beautiful...looking forward for more...


I wanted to read your stories since two months now...at last got the time...completed reading them all in three days...they r so awesome...I am grateful to ASR for "his musings" which made me want to read ur stories...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
He ddnt do it..:)
Lovd this update...
Especially Arshi scenes...
Khushi s so cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i recently read ur late spring and it was lovely ... and this ss is just too awsome !!!! veru different concept... i am liking it very much !! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wen is d next update 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I absolutely love this story, it's very different
I like how you're writing Arshi in the 1920s. Reading about those times is so interesting just to find out what women and men actually went through

I really like Arnav's character here and I can't wait to read more of this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
His guilty conscience did not let him rest!!!

Whew! Jenny you gave me a heart attack when you wrote that he was unfastening the buttons of the girl's shirt. So glad that he did not have sex with the girl who was even younger than Khushi!

And he was missing Khushi when he did not see her! It was so cute when she said she wanted to have a baby and he laughed out loud!

But, will he still take a room outside and leave her with his parents?

Edited by jessjazz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The story brings out how difficult such marriages were for sensitive, thinking people. It is bringing such a change in her and making him question himself.
Beautifully told.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waitin for your next. Update of this beautiful piece of work please arnav dosent leave kushi alone incase he leaves the house
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Posted: 12 years ago
read it all in one go...😊.
just an awesome story...⭐️
loved it...😆
continue soon ...
will be waiting...🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the update

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