Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
Can I res? I am so excited...waiting...for some fireworks on and off the field ...

Anu and mints ...

Chaka pe Chaka mar ASR confidently
Your mood will change almost instantly
On the field and off play the game fairly
Remember how makes you feel Khushi
And you will shall definitely have victory
Simultaneously will start your love story.

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
and I here?

Ditto Vandee😉.. Lets set the Field on Fire! 😳
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago
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I am the umpire... I decide if I should keep letting ASR play!! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
A

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From the beginning itself, i couldn't stop myself from phangirling over Arnav. He was so much sensible and in control and totally reasonable this time. The boost by the previous game + his improving personal front equations bth being the reason. I liked it how sorted he was. He did well by breaking up with Lavanya, not because of the obvious reason ;), but actually there is no use carrying the burden of a non-working relationship, its better to put a full stop, before it takes the bitter route. Although i feel bad for Lavanya, but i know, that she knew, it had to happen. :(

i'm glad Arnav accepts, to himself that khushi is being a 'distraction' in his life. She is affecting him. ;)


more than Anger, in those anger management classes, Arnav would learn to manage himself in situations that is forced, or the point when situation goes out of control.


Clearly his performance, affects him at mental level, as now he is form, he is loosening up, which is nice, not completely though. A good player should be able to hold his nerves, even after a loss or a bad day. But i think, we learn both from our losses and gains and hopefully arnav would do so as well.;)

Khushi and Him, are getting along :) on a very unexpected convo. I never thought she'll ask him about Aman, but them Khushi, she is concerned for everyone, in a nice way :) and Arnav too was indulging, which was refreshing.


And comes in the Snakewa, where was he hidden till now?.. In his hole?😉


Wanna see Arnav hit a 6, this time the ball being 'Khushi'. ;)
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update. I think you are doing a great job balancing the story in the cricket world and the world outside it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I can see why some may say there's too much description of the game but I think it's important.
It has a significant bearing on Arnav's frame of mind.
For me the longer the chapter the more for me to read!
Given Arnav's views of the media his relationship with Khushi can only progress slowly. I like the way you are showing how he is slowly opening up with her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Un-resed my comment on Pg-104.
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Wow... Loved it...is the stranger Shyam?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
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First of all I take back my words of improving the pace of the story, as in one update it moved a lot.

Arnav is out of the relationship with Lavanya. He admitted to himself that the thoughts of a woman who interrupted and distracted him was not his girlfriend but Khushi.

As for Khushi, she find has the fluttering sensation in the region of her heart on seeing her laad governor smiling and he doesn't look like one while laughing or smiling.

They both continue to have a joviall chat, sharing personal info and laughing on private jokes. Surely they have moved a lot from their first encounter.

And the snake is here. Now what problem will he create and will it bring Arnav and Khushi closer...to find out we have to wait for you next update. Hmmm.
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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