Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

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fabulous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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Rabiabegum

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome story!!! Please update more often... Thanx!!!

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Mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

This story is always a nice read... Very different form the rest! I loved the pace of your writing and so do I love the seamless flow of this story. So much detailing about cricket and the IPL... about cities and its specialities... This is a total travel treat... topped up with a brooding Arnav and a smart Khushi.

Loved how things have proceeded for both Arnav and Khushi since the last time they met and spoke. I guess breaking the ice was good for both of them. The atmosphere seems to be nice and happy one on field and off field as well. I like this Aman who looks out for ASR all the time..n and is least affected by his sarcasm.

I am glad that Khushi managed to be at the right place at the right time, joining Arnav and Aman for their dinner. The whole set-up, the conversation and Khushi's bindaas attitude was fun to read. Loved the way Arnav noticed every minute flick of emotion on her oh-so-expressive face.

And then the dessert scene.. 'you have something there..' Hayye!! Why ahd Aman to disturb them!! Loved their conversation... his innuendo and her shock at being at the receiving end. Things seem to be changing between the two rapidly and he is definitely opening up to her... I just hope Khushi does not hurt him for her assignment!!

Waiting for more... like always!! 😳

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ntmrjn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Really new concept..its character esp arnav is really complicated.looking forward for next update.

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Awesome update...So Arnav starting to open himself towards her is a very big step...he is trusting her hope she will not break his trust...Aman playing the mediator even if unintentionally...I hope for a good relation between them...written beautifully...

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

I am just loving this story. Its so different and keeps the reader engrossed.

The relations between Arnav and Khushi is slowly developing.

Arnav is almost observing everything about Khushi and Khushi on her part too is sometimes shocked and sometimes surprised at Arnav's behaviour.

Looks like Khushi is the lucky charm for Arnav. From the time she has entered his life, he and his team are playing well.

I loved the scene where she was enjoying her ice cream and Arnav was just staring at her.

Who is this Nick Thomas?? What are his intentions towards Khushi???

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Amazing and superb update, I absolutely loved it.

A fantastic read from start to finish,

Honestly I'm just loving you perfect and beautiful descriptions of the place they are currently in, it's tempting me too book a flight to India, lol.

I'm loving Aman he will definitely play Cupid between Arnav and Khushi and I'm so glad he made Khushi join them.

Arnav has definitely been observing Khushi quite a lot when ever he sees her and it nice to see him checking her out at the table.

Loved her direct and excellent answer to Aman when she spoke about the article Arnav did not contribute towards, I'm glad Aman is going to make Arnav re-do it again.

Wow the way Arnav was looking at Khushi when she ate her dessert was so amazing, it's made me crave for a chocolate dessert, lol.

Arnav using innuendos with a innocent Khushi was funny, lol.

I'm glad they managed to have a normal and civil conversation with Khushi learning quite a few interesting facts about him and she also saw a very different side to him.

It was nice to read the match went well and Khushi learnt approaching Arnav after the match was a lot better, I can't wait to read more interactions between them.

The update was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM xx

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Very interesting update .Why so late dear , I love this story.

Khushiis getting what she wants and he is being so nice and greek God for her.hmmm

Lets see what Khushi will do for the rest of the time.

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#650

This was such a well written and detailed update. I learned so much about city of Kolkata and the game of cricket, both new to me.

You have also developed Arnav, Khushi and Aman's characters so well that each one of them now has a distinct and very interesting personality and now on their way to actually have a relationship. Aman's damage control ploy is working.

Just like Khushi, I am glad to discover that Arnav is not the douchebag I thought he was. Arnav now notices everything about Khushi and is a little piqued that she was acting reserved with him.

Loved Khushi's desert by the wayway😉.

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