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Posted: 18 years ago
CHAPTER 14

in white coffin............archie was lying..........rishab was totally heart broken.......prerna was getting faint many times..........n kripa..........she was only seeing archie's blue face n crying.......

days passed..........but there was a death silent in the house........rishab called prerna's father n request him to came back........sameer has starting windupping his business...........sameer n his nana was thinking to settled in india 4 forever.......they both was unaware of trajedi happen with archie n her death

life is a way to walk on stony n stright ways....

day by day every one was coming back towards life..........dilip's family again supported them.........sometimes rishab thinks that if he agrees on dilip proposal n give her to them...........so she would be alive...........but in front of fate.....no one can do nething........

kripa was giving examination papers of the previous finals.............she came backbut stop on the gate n hear dilip n angad talking to rishab .........but she didn't even listen the whole convo.........she strightly went towards angad home......she find him in loan...........he was about to leave 4 snooker club...........he was alert as he see her comming in full anger

on archies marriage convo she was angry with him.........he tried alot to excause..........he should b da one angry.........but the situation was oppisite n she was angry..........they never remain angry 4 such a long time b4.............from some months.........angad find a great change in kripa khanna's behaviour

"angad snghania..........main tum se shadi nahin kar sakti".........she was talking to hi on seeing with her dark brown eyes into her grey eyes

"likin kyoun?".....although he was angry on her but he know how to control himself

"meri marzi"

"phir kiss se karoo gi?"........he was looking at him immensely..........on this time he find a new kripa khanna standing b4 him to whom he didn't know

"kissi se bhi nahin...........kyoun k i have started hating mens.........JIMMY bhi aik admi tha jiss nay archie ki zindagi tabah ki........tum bhi aik admi ho jiss nay archie se shadi na ki.........agar tum kar letay tau woh na marti..........samar was also a men jissay janwar kehna zyada sahi hai...........u guys have lost ur respect in my eyes".......she was seeing to desperate that he remain quite 4 sometime

"main sirf tum se shadi karoon ga.......yeh kasam bohut pehlay khai thi maine.......main sirf tmhain chahta hoon"........he was saying it seriously

"aik jeeti jagti larki jaan se guzar gai........or tum apni kasam hi nibhatay reh gaye"........she was making a fun of his emotions.........she throw a lot of fire sparks on the face on angad

"aik admi chahat or muhabbat ki baat kar raha hai.......JIMMY nay bhi aisay hi lafzon say archie ko trap kia ho ga............or abh tum wohi chaal mujh pay azma rahay hoo...........kitnay ghatiya hotay ho tum admi".........kitni bedardi say woh us k jazboon ko apnay pairoon talay roond rahi thi..........kripa ko zara ehsaas na howa..........woh tarap utha

"4 GOD sake krips...........mujhay itna neechay maat giraoo.............tumhain dukh hai k maine tumhari baat na maan k archie say shadi nahin ki.........meri soochoon, dil, dimaag main tum rehti hoo.........archie say shadi kar k bhi main usay apna nahin pata......maine kabhi usay us nazar say nahin dekha tha..........sab se bhar k tum ko haqeeqat nahin patah......pehle meri baat tau sun loo"

"mujhe kuch nahin sunana..........tum sun loo........shadi tau main kabhi nahin karoon gii...........na tum se...........na kissi or se".....she tells her decision

"duniya JIMMY or SAMAR pay khatam tau nahin ho jati"...........he know who to brain-wash of a person.........on seeing her so desperate he delayed his thought of telling her the truth...............she was really very angry at the moment..........he was not sure.......if he tell her the truth she can do anyting dangerous too

"meri duniya archie k saath hi khatam ho gaye hai.......mujh main itna kuch bardhast karnay ka stamina nahin........tumhara kia hai..........ho tau admi.....kal ko badal gaye tau main kia karoon gii".........on throwing stones on him............she forgot that he was angad singhannia.........her childhood friend........she only remember anything is that he is a man......n nothing

"azmaloo".......he was calm........he was not angry........he was only feeling bad that she didn't trust him..........n more than that..........her strange behaviour...........archie's tale has changed her a lot

"kia kar saktay ho?"......she was making fun of him.........n he feel a pan in his heart.......but he controls

"chand, sitaray toor k anay k illawa sab kuch.......kyoun k these things r not reality".........the line he saying in funny manner before.............he says it again but in a serious tone

"door reh sako gay mujh se?"

"kitni deer?"..........staying away 4om her was a tough task 4 him but he controls himself

"teen saal"

"teen....sa...a...al".........his heart skip a beat.........

but she was continuing in a making fun of him tone

"zyada lamba time tau nahin hai"

"iss k baad?"

"iss k baad jo tum kahoo gay wohi ho ga........likin mujhe patah hai k tum iss imtehan main pooray na utar paoo gay.........aik admmi aik aurat ko teen din yaad nahin rakhta..........tumhain tau phir teen saal ka time diya hai.........teen saal baad kripa khanna tumharay dil, dimaag say youn nikal jaye gi k jaisay us ka wajood bhi na ho"

"yeh ho nahin sakta".........he was firm

"tum bhi yahin hoo...........main bhi yahin hoon...........dekh lain gain"........by saying this in a questioning tone she left........but angad singhannia.........he remain there n hear the echo of her talk.............

next day.............rishab n prerna told her that angad has left hs house............prerna said nothing more.......but her seeing style told her that angad khanna has alerted them...........she hear this like its a routine matter n again get busy in her work

ok guys

SO SORRY 4 BEING DELAY
m really sorry

newaz

enjoy it

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
its okay for the delay.. are u gonna fast forward 3 yrs??

wow!! umm.. continue sooooooooooonnnn

this was an excellent part.. the dialogues and everything
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwww wow! im gona cry!! 😭 😭 😭
wot a briliant part ana!! 👏 👏 👏
that woz sure worth the w8! seriusly briliant.. n i h8 kripa...!! make kripa stop beein so stuborn n listen 2 angad!! 😡
stil, very nice part!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
i hope kripa finds out how much he luvs her n skip 3 yrs
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
kripa ur mad 😡 😡
u r taking 3 yr skip
awesome waiting for the next part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
ana dear.. part bohat hi achcha tha.. it was a total different concept...what a twist.. very different.. 👍🏼 pehle tho angad , kripa ke beech ki baatein.. kripa ka kind off accusing angad...me very angry on kripa want to kick her.. bohat ghussa aa raha hain uspe.. she is soo insensible.... 😡
usne joh shart rakhi hain angad ke saamne..i was shocked totally.. yeh kya baat hui...kripa very bad.. she has asked him to be away from her for 3 years....this is the limit..... 🤢
aur ab angad chala bhi gaya...bechara.. me feeling soo bad for him..... 😭
now please continue soon...me waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago




😆 oki doki ana, cant w8 4 d nxt part, aur haan, aap mujhe aap nahin, 'tum' keh sakti hain, kyunki me aap se chotii hoon naa 😆 continu karne ke liye thank u sooooooo much!! xxxx 🤗 xxxx



hey saz
app ko kaisay patah k main app say bari hoon yaan chotiii
newaz..............waisay bhi main sab ko app hi kehti hoon
k

luv ya dear

lolz
ana

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK




hey saz
app ko kaisay patah k main app say bari hoon yaan chotiii
newaz..............waisay bhi main sab ko app hi kehti hoon
k

luv ya dear

lolz
ana

aww ana, mujhe laga ki aap mujse bari hain kyunki u sed dat u go 2 Uni rite, aur me to abhi bhi skool main hoon 😆 sory if im rong n ye, reeeeely nice part once again, lekin ab mujhe lagta hai ki me kripa ko bohat buri tarhan se peetoongi agar vo angad ko apna nehy leti! im gona kil her! 😆 plz make a-k re-unite..!! plz plz plz sab kuch pehle jaisa kardo na ana!!! xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

its okay for the delay.. are u gonna fast forward 3 yrs??

wow!! umm.. continue sooooooooooonnnn

this was an excellent part.. the dialogues and everything



thanx yaaar
me will surely try
k

lolz
ana
..oneOone.. thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotii

awwwwwwwwww wow! im gona cry!! 😭 😭 😭
wot a briliant part ana!! 👏 👏 👏
that woz sure worth the w8! seriusly briliant.. n i h8 kripa...!! make kripa stop beein so stuborn n listen 2 angad!! 😡
stil, very nice part!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx



oyye jii
don't cry
don't hate her ji...................kyoun k angad ki zindagi usi nay tau roshan karni hai😉

luv u dear

n waisay........u were right.............i m elder to u.........linkin phir bhi......aap sahi hai

k

lolz
ana

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