New Virman FF- Tanhaayi- Ch. 7 pg 19- UPDATED!!!!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

that was short so hoping the next one to be updated rreal soon 😃
manvi's mom is really interesting loving her quotes 😆😆 and manvi seems to be really positive over her new beginning at the college ..its really exciting😃
very well written and waiting for virman encounter ...update soon 😃

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Nice update!! 😃 Manvi's mom is really funny and her quotes also 😆.. Manvi is so excited for her first day in college.. Loved her POV.. Eagerly waiting for Virman first meeting.. Please pm me for your future updates.. Take care 😊

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Nice update.. Do pm me.. waiting for VirMan first meet ❤️

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

short but nice update..waiting for next part!!

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TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

loved the update!❤️

I seriously luv ur writing style, it feels like I just read so much, even though the chapter was so short, like u wrote less, but the impact was so stong! 😊

so Manvi and her brother share a strained relationship! Wonder what happened to her brother, which caused him to become like this?🤔

can't wait for the Virat's p.o.v!!

please do update soon!😛

and do pm me!😉

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Like it
nice update...
Good one...
Waiting 4 next

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Tuba KHAn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hyii !! i just read ur prologue n part 1 n i must say ' amazing ' .. different n interesting Concept ..
looking forward to more ..
update sooon n plz add my name in ur PM list ..

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awesome prologue and Start,,!!! Both have their share of loneliness...they want it to healed with and out on search...This is nice...Very nice...Waiting for next and PM me when u update next...!!!!

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey nice start!!! The introduction part was really good!!! Manvi is lonely & Virat is searching for something, there hunger will definitely bring them together & will make great chemistry, which is needless to say...first update was also pretty cool...his brother's description was quite good! Update soon, waiting to see what her first day at college brings for her!