Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Leki

Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...


hie leki
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

i am glad you are feeling better.

and i am also glad you liked my comment.
jab acchi tarah se theek ho jao tabhi update dena samjhe ya samjhun


Samajh gayi😆

Originally posted by: Leki

Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...



Will be waiting😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Amri174


Samajh gayi😆



Will be waiting😳


good filal ke liye byee mai trust ka update dene jaa rahi hoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
hey just read part 5 A B C D
and they were once again super duper top update...!!!
poor shree thinking about riya and her memories...!!! and kitan tired tha but couldn't say it to arjun😆 and his analysis on arjun was bang on...👏
and arjun hmm he inally realized ki he deep down somewhere he loved riya... and her betrayal about her identity is making him restless...!!!
okay so riya found that siddharth guy wants to kill arjun... her reactions were awesomely written...could actually visualize it infront of me😉😳 just perfect her fear her anxiety everything...!!!
hmm so finally sameer and chottu also got a lead on that sidharth guy... gosh is such a🤬 threatening sam... iske consequences usko pta nai hai abhi.. jab pta lagega to maza aayega...!!!
aur sameer ka gussa omg .. koi na koi to zarur pitega😉
aisha liza convo and their thoughts about men were very heart touching.. both understands what other is going through afterall they both are suffering from the same thing... no notice from their lovers..!! aur ye aisha kiske baare mai baat kar rhi thi? undercover agent? was it riya????
aisha shree scene was an another treat... loved it...!!!
omg arjun is now having nightmares about riya mixed with roshni...!!!😲 and wants a proper closure for her...!!!
hmm so ariya meeting dustin cohelo almost at the same time??? any reason behind it?😲
well riya sure can do anything for arjun... she risked her identity and came to tell commissioner about her findings..!! inspite of her boss's refusal...!!!
so shree knows riya is alive after seeing her footage in that club's video...!!!
and now arjun also knows that he has actually seen her protecting him almost lying on him😉
guess soon everyone will found out about her...!!
waise love the way she saved him...!!!😉 and arjun was comforted by her presence...!! awww
hope she doesn't run away...
can't wait to see everyone's reaction on seeing her alive😉
what no precap?😲 that's not fair😛 hum bechare bachon ka kuch to khyal karo😆
update soon...!!! eagerly waiting for the next chapter😉😳
P.S. congo shongo for the 2nd thread🥳 loved this mega update on occasion of the 2nd thread😉
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Splendid work swthrt. Hats off to u!!!!!!

Loved Sam in his rowdy rathore mood.

OMG thy both were in killer mood n that manager was provoking thm. Oppsss wrong move.

You provide a great scope to Rathod's character to demonstrate his capabilities as a ETF chief, which he never get in the serial. Not only Rathod but u gv equal space to each n every character.

Loved the way Rathod shut the mouth of that manager through his straight frwrd talks.

Yeyyy thy got the lead coz of Rathod n that Sid malhotra is a piece of crap.

Wow Arjun's sleep was again disturbed by a nightmare but this time its about Riya's death in place of Rosh. May be coz his mind was clouded by her thoughts but where is the gunshot n that too in musty godown was cme frm????? Is this some kind of indication???????

Finally he decided to clear all the mess by talking to commissioner. That's nice thought.

The interrogation of Sid malhtr was damn exciting. He looked like a hard nut to crack but our very own rowdy Rathore showed him his true place. I wish I can saw his expression at that time.

Waaooo Riya can go to any extent to save him. That's amazing n this is wht called true love!!!!

OMG hw cleverly she assigned the task to safeguard Arjun frm any kind of threat to M.K. n Tim.

Wow Shree was shocked beyond limits whn he saw Riya in the footage. I m glad that he didn't get fainted. Wht happened whn he see her face-to-face??????

Oh gosh!!!!!!! Somebody aimed at Arjun but Riya saved him in the nick of time.

Awww he felt that he was familiar with the touch.

Finally thy cme face-to-face.

Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!

Waiting for the fire works.

Continue as soon as possible.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Leki

Once in a while you can come first no problem


😡 mujhe khus hona chahiye! Hamesa tum ya divi le jate ho first comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


😡 mujhe khus hona chahiye! Hamesa tum ya divi le jate ho first comment
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haila maine kya kiya🤣😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Leki

Aww i vl do it before 6 or after 9 sure...


make it soon!
I am dying for the precap 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21


haila maine kya kiya🤣😈


haan haan tu toh dudh ki dhuli hai! 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@vampu vahi na vampu dekh naam devil aur act innocence wale..ramachandra...
@leki edit ur comment i need precap now...

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