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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: foesb
Arnav came to know about his baby! that whole scene was nicely written, starting off from Arnav showing his dominance nature by entering the room without a single query and the way he peeped in and checked out the baby was simply fantastic. I really adore the way you have described the baby from Arnav's point of view it was truly amazing, I love babies so the description you gave was just so sweet😊 again I like the fact you are keeping Arnav with in his character, still he has all his characteristics which makes him ASR. And the manner he straight away claimed himself as the baby's father that was yet another superb scene. As you have mentioned now truly the dynamics have changed, now along with Khushi he has someone else who is equally important and the only plausible way he can have that precious bundle in his life is if only Khushi forgives him. Arnav was questioning Khushi about why she chose not to disclose such an important thing, and the answer Khushi gave was really good! Was expecting Khushi to behave like this after all the things she was subjected to even though it wasn't intentional.Now I'm sure Arnav wouldn't want to procrastinate in ensuring he has his Khushi along with the baby,so eagerly waiting to see how he will do that😃 Great update!

Hi foesb,

I like your prespective and your words of how you took the story.

I see a baby picture on your profile. 😊

Thank you for reading the story and commenting.

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: Rasa23
heyy gopi m going outstation for two days..so dnt stop pming me..thankss..byeee..tc..goodn8 :)

Hi Rasa23,

I will keep sending you PMs about updates.

Take care and enjoy.

Thank you so much for investing your time and effort in this story.

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: kannansangee
didi , I told you this chapters were the most expected chapters...
and now I say you justified each and every character ...

no one was right or wrong...

I loved the way you expressed arnavs emotions ... and I would like to read khushis point of view too ...about him getting angry at her ...

I just loved the update ...

thanks for pm .

waiting for the next update

Hi Kannansangee,

As always thank you for your kind appreciation.

Thank you for reading and commenting Kiddo.

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didi

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Goshhh u protryed each and every emotion sooo welll...waiting for this forrr sooo longgg finally here it is and u worte soo well that I just cant stop myself imgining this scene...Arnav inner fighting khushi's bitter words very well done job...
I really appreciate ur effort...beautifully written...i really loved each abd every word of this chapter...
Cant wait to read further...
Super se bhi bhut uper wala update thi...hats off...brilliant work...

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: renjus
thank you very much for a wonderful update you words were so good that I was picturing it in my mind. Great keep going.

Hi renjus,

Thank you.

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarita_barun
You updated!!!!!!!! hehe...
Arnav's raw emotions on full display.
His reaction to his son... PERFECT!!
Made me tear up, from not knowing about this human being to knowing that you are partially the reason for this tiny creature to be alive. Its just wow.
Khushi's anger is justified.
How could she have known he wouldnt have insulted her again.
Both of them were wrong in some instances but they were also correct.
Its good that Arnav was willing to forgive, because the one that matters is his son.
He already missed out on the entire pregnancy and Abhay's first 6 months... Arnav won't let his son out of his sight now.
Waiting patiently... take your time love 😊

Hi sarita_barun,

Always nice to hear your perspective.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Regards.

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Hi All,

A lot of people asked me why Arnav should blame Khushi. Why Arnav is angry.

I would like to address those questions raised by following readers and anyone with similar questions:

--MISHTEE-- ,sreemeera , sanluvug , saara76 , ifsaal044 , koisk , harshdb , -Shwetz- , sfghfj ,prerna1 ,asha_mehta ,jeya0301,bhaktiii

I dont know if I can answer exactly to your questions. But I will tell you what I thought when I wrote those chapters 18 and 19.

1) Both Arnav and Khushi are angry. but they expressed it differently. Arnav is ASR. He will be aggressive and domination at any given time. His past experiences made him ASR. He lives in a cut throat competition world of business. He has to be ASR to survive. That adds to his charm as well. Khushi has her own ways of questioning or expressing or rebeling. End result they wanted did not happen. Things did not go right. They are both angry.

2) Arnav protects what is his and this is a matter of his son. From Khushi's flashback (if I am right) Arnav kept asking her if she was pregnant. Khushi did not know that at the time. But Arnav felt it. He seems to know her body more than her. 😃 He would gladly accept his son then and now.

3) There is always an underlying love. without that there is no love story. Even their hatred originates from love (if that is possible)

4) These are his first reactions after seeing his baby. According to him, he is not at mistake entirely because nature's fluke accident was the major deciding factor here.

5) What happened to Khushi is unfair. She is unhappy.

These were some of the thoughts I had when writing the chapter.

I am sure it wont answer all the questions, but it might give you some idea about my thoughts.

As always, Thank you for reading and commenting.

PS: I am very nervous to give any filler updates or cheesy updates now after these chapter 18 and 19.

Edited by gopijimodi - 12 years ago