Arhi FF: I found My SUN (updt 26-3) CHAPPY

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

I really enjoyed their Body Language...

Awesome Update !!!!!!!

Thanks for the PM.

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

awesome updt
they both are attract toward each other
how long they can control each other
updt soon

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Aww...they are soo attracted to each other... I loved how their body id responding to each others touch...😊

Cant wait for the next update... 😊

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

awesome part...

they hav somthing between them...but need time to understand tht emotion...

thnks for the PM dear...

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Perfect part
thanx for the pm

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Amti4u
Aww...they are soo attracted to each other... I loved how their body id responding to each others touch...😊

Cant wait for the next update... 😊

Yeah they are attract to each other, but both the characters are dumb, i don't know, how to tell them to fall in love.. They are pathetic some how, confuse... HUHUH..

What to do yaar.. Can YOU push them a LITTLE. Please??? 😉 😉 😉

🤣 🤣

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ReneeRV

Yeah they are attract to each other, but both the characters are dumb, i don't know, how to tell them to fall in love.. They are pathetic some how, confuse... HUHUH..

What to do yaar.. Can YOU push them a LITTLE. Please??? 😉 😉 😉

🤣 🤣

I would love to push them... with full force.. or wait we can take help of Buajii... 😃 But, this is fun yaar... Kuch dragging tho hona hi chahiye.. After all its Arnav Singh Raizada...and KKG😊

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@Sarangnunmul

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Thank You everyone to apreciate My WORK.. I found my Sun is not the fantasy story and not it is any Fairy tale story.. it is normal story guys.

I hope you guys will pick up some very wise words from it.. 😊

I am sure the track is not moving very slow, if yes, please Guys tell me, so i can Move it little Forward, so it can put up some Speed to it..

And I tell You, it is just started, it is a long way to go.. may be within 3 - 4 updates you will find new entires. and then after that, story will zoom in it..

but please do tell ME if anything you guys feel missing, or YOu GUYS WANT THAT IN IT..

Every advised is WELCOME.. 😊 😊 😊

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

"UPDATE SOON" That's my advice😊

Reene, I don't have any problem with the pace of this story...and you cant expect anyone to confess within 2 or 3 weeks time...Give them time yaar... Let them have some fights, some jealousy, some passion.. Pyaar ke liye tho bohut time baaki hai na... 😊