Smitar's: Loving Khushi #3 Part 9(1A,1B) Pg 106 22/8 - Page 29

Fantastic update loved arnav and how he confessed hos feelings

thank u for this quick long update.
again i've no words to explain how beautifully u described Arnav's pain,hurt,confusion,helplessness,love...and yes,u explained what is love through this confession! which make my cry every time i read...and left me breathless with each of Arnav's confession.What he felt in every situation of them, his love for khushi,his complex emotions...which only khushi can understand but no else. and u described all those moment through arnav's eyes,which is absolutely a treat to read.
thank u very much for writing this os.
Smita,u said u'll update only mon,wed,friday but than whenever i log in to IF,i stalk Rulama's thread,if ur update has come or not. Bcz i feel my day incomplete without reading ur ff/ss/os. thank u again for ur writing on our Arshi!

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that was some confession arnav made

mind blowing

wow...WOW...I'm out of words...This is just beautiful...loved the whole update so much...I wanna know how Khushi is gonna react now...what she is thinking...waiting for morning...he is still to answer her what's love...thanks for the pm...

You are truly an AMAZING Writer

Another great update on Arnav's confession!

Loved the way you described his helplessness, why he did what he did, and the reasons are ones which only Khushi can understand..
Like I said yesterday, for a man of few words, for a man who shut all his emotions out, these confessions are no less than redemption..

And the ending was cute. He fell asleep in her arms

Loved it Smita! :)

Thanks for the PM Rashmi :)

oh dude in your need to be not be like your father it seemed that you almost became the same
and brutally not only broke the heart of the one you loved but yourself too in the process
funny how in pushing her away he seems to have gotten more close
and wreak more damage on himself and her
why did she matter he didnt know
or more like didnt wanna know
but knwoing she was engaged to another ripped him apart
and yet even if she wasnt with anyone else what would he have done
in all this confusion he just kept falling deeper and deeper for her
until the fateful day of their contract marriage
that was another of those days when he let ASR take control of arnav
had arnav thought through this maybe the damage wouldnt have been this bad
but since he couldnt let arnav come through ASR just made things worse
man their love story ruined by their own hands due to that snake
not to forget his past and his father

So tragic. Beautiful chapter.
Very well written.