TAAREY SS - SAB MERA TU (epilogue pg 68) COMPLETED

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

wow...m nw so so w8in 4 d update.. update soon plz.. :) n tnq 4 pm..

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poorni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

nice teaser nd concept pls continue soon

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Alefiya Magar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Superb concept 👍🏼
Pm me when yu update 😊

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kriti094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Fabulous concept
plz continue soon
coz i m really eager to read it

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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

CHAPTER 1

She was walking lifelessly on the road her face pale and her right cheek blown with a 4 finger red print, eyes tearful and red. She was lost in her past with her father. Her mother died when she was 1 year old, and her father died when she was just 6 years. He remarried when her mother died, and her step mom tortured her lot all these years.

*flash back starts*

T: papa... main aapshey bohot nalaaj hu!!!! Said a 6yr old taani

Td: meri princess mujhse naraaz hai? Kyu?

T: papa.. apne bola tha ki aap mujhe aul mumma ko baahal leke jaayenge ghumaane, aur aap ab ghal aa lahey ho?

Td: beta... aaj papaa ko bohot kaam tha... iss sunday ko pakka jaayengey!!!

T: mujhe aapse baat nahi kalni! Aap chale jaao!!!

Td: beta... suno beta... princess!!!

That night her dad went to buy toys for her as she is mad at him, as he was returning home... he got thrashed by a car and died... and his last words were... "Princess... I love you!"

*flash back ends*

Here with rey:

He was driving his car with full speed thinking of what all happened in his office...

*flash back starts*

He was in a very important business party and he heard some people saying...

Guy1 - g1

Guy 2-g2

G 1- hey...isn't that reyaansh singhania..? Owner of singhania industries???

G 2- yeah... the same person whose wife has jumped off with her lover...

G 1: what? Are you serious???

G 2: ofcourse yaar! Bechaara... pata nahi ki isme kya nahi hai aur uss ladke me kya hai???

G1 : then why cant he remarry???

G2: shaq ho gaya hoga usko... apne mardaani ke oopar!!!

And both guys started to laugh!!!

This was it... it broke rey from inside... he started to get all the flashes of his marriage and his wife leaving him...

*flash back ends*

He was driving so madly that his concentration was not on the road!!! And suddenly...

*THRASH***

He was stunned for a moment! He applied brakes and saw a girl who was drained in blood!

He ran out from his car. He took her head in his lap and saw her face so pure, innocent and then noticed the finger prints on her cheek. He also saw finger print marks on her throat also.

R: oh my god! Yeh maine kya kar diya??? Abhi hospital leke jaana hai iss ladki ko!!! Looks like she has been harassed very badly!!!

And he took her in his arms and placed her in his car and drove off to the nearest hospital.

He ran with the stretcher bed along with the doctors. He was asked to wait outside.

Doctor came after 30 minutes and,

R: doctor, kaisi hai ab who ladki?

D: she is fine mr. singhania, you brought her on the right time, warna late hota toh pata nahi kya hota!!!

R: thank god!!! Thank you so much doctor!!! Kya mai usey dekh saqta hu?

D: of course!

And rey went inside... and saw taani clearly now with a plastered forehead. He went near to her and sat on the stool beside her bed.

R: how can someone treat a beautiful soul so badly? Kaun hai yeh ladki?

And was lost adoring her beauty... soon nurse came and arranged some medicines on the tray and left. He slept with his head on the bed on his hands.

Next morning...

Taani started to talk in her sleep...

T: kyu? Kyu mujhe choddke chale gaye papa? Kya kusur thi meri? Jab se aap gaye hai... roz mujhe maar khaane padte hai maa sey... papa, mujhe aapke paas aana hai... mujhe apne paas bulaa lo!!!

Rey woke up and was listening to all this. He was feeling so bad...feeling as if someone was piercing his heart.

Slowly she opened her eyes...

T: hmmm... main kahaan hu?

R: aa...aaa... aap hospital me ho, who...who... kal maine aapki accident kar di, I am really sorry for that! Mera hosh nahi tha... and I brought you here...

T: aapne meri accident kr hi di, toh bachaya kyu mujhe? Marne kyu nahi diya??? And broke into tears.

R: hey, hey, look... chill

And handed her a glass of water. She was watching him while drinking and he was also watching her.

R: mera naam reyaansh hai... reyaansh singhania...

T: me... me... taani... taani shekhawat.

R: aap kahaan rehti hai?

And taani again broke into tears...

PRECAP: TAANI'S SUICIDE ATTEMPT AND REY WILL SAVE HER... HE INSISTS HER TO STAY WITH HIM.

I TRIED MY LEVEL BEST... HOPE AAP SAB KO ACCHA LAGEY!

Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago

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anagharaj

@anagharaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

nice start and different story.

please update next part soon and pm me.

thanks.

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Alexandrite91

@Alexandrite91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Itna acha kaam kise acha nahi lagega. Bahut acha hai.
I was so happy to your PM and my enthusiasm wascompletely justified. I lovved the fast pace that you set in the beginning. Rey's pain and anguish would consume him up if he wasn't distracted by Taani's pain. She needs him and he'll sense that. Then he'll have to forget his pain in order to focus on her. I love the idea and loved the starting. The meeting was really touching. Rey'confusion as to how anyone could possibly hurt such an innocent angel is
clear indication that he's going to feel the need to protect her. I love the notion of a protective Rey. Taani too will realize that her savior is a survivor of a tragedy andd she may try to reach out to him. It's probably not going to be easy for her as he may have trust issues after being cheated on once by his wife.
That's my guess anyway. I look forward to all your updates. I'd love to read how you bring two so different people with such great pain in their heart together and enable them to heal each others pain. Best of luck

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saumya....naam to padh liya hoga..[=))]

@.saumya.

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

very nice start

loved the update..

and the concept is super duper awesome...

coming to the update it was really very heart-touching..

the pain of TaaRey...the hidance and everything was so emotional..😔

awesome hima..

continue soon

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Super awesome update 👏

Feeling really bad for such a beautiful and innocent soul 😭 😭

Loved Rey's care for her 😳

And waiting for the precap 😉

Update soon 😉

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shikha_taarey

@shikha_taarey

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Res
Unres!!! Writing d comment second tym...last tym pura comment clear hogaya 😭 😡
1st chap hi itna kamaal ka diya hai hima di...taaeey ko 1st update me hi milvaa diya...mujhe yo laga uske liye bahut paapad belne padenge😆 bt aapne to taarey meet sabse pehle dedi...thankuuu sooo much for dat!!! 🤗
Coming to d update...pehle to yayyy ...cuz i guessed d stry pehle se... see see mai kitni smart hu 😳 😆
Taani's condition was soo bad...just loved d way u showed her pain n her situation...her helplessness n loneliness!!! It really made me cry hima dii 😭 😭 ...n d flashback!!! Kya bolu hima di...d start of d flashback was soo damn cute...i mean dad's r always ready to do anything for their lovely daughters!! Luv dis sweet bond n same way u potrayed d bond b/w taani n her dad Bt later at d end of d flashback...her father's accident 😭 😭 ...really its so painful!!!
N her step mom...she harressed her 😲 😲 ...i really was crying seeing her condition!! Finger marks on her cheeks n all!! 😭 😭 Its actually said so true...dat in dis world no one cares for u as much as ur parents!!! Widout dem lyf is lyk hell 😭 😭 😭 ...dont hav words hima dii!!!
Den coming to rey...god...he was soo vulnerable n heartbroken!! 😭 N in d flashback...those two guys... 😲 😲 😲 ...i mean how could dey say such cheap things!!! 😡 seriously... mann to kar raha hai AK 47 leke uda du dono ko 😡 ...how dare dey say such things bout my rey!! 😡 😳 😆
N uske baad d accident...as expected...he hit taani!!! After dis starts d best part of d update...as rey came out n took taani's head on his lap...i was actually waiting to read dat wen he sees her condition n how he reacts...n den finally wen he saw those finger prints...at dat tym to he didnt reacted much!!! Bt later in d hospital wen he told dat how can someone behave so badly wid such a "BEAUTIFUL SOUL"... gosh... 😳 😳 😳
I just luv to see dis concerned side of rey... d way he asked d dr. about taani n d way he was feeling bad for her...n he slept beside her keeping his head down!!! Awww!!! 😳 😳
Taani saying mujhe mar jaane diya hota n saying all those things in her dream 😭 ...n rey feeling bad for her!!! 😳
I really loved d chappy soo much...taarey ki first meet hi itni awesome thi to aage pata nai kitna awesome hoga!!! 😳
N precap me taani gng to attempt suicide...so excited for dat!! Actually mujhe iss type ki cheeze bahut pasand hain 😆...n vaise bhi hamaara hero to hai hi bachaane ke liye!!! 😉 😆 both gng to live together 😲 ...excited beyond limits 😳 😳 😳 ...awesome chap...👏👏!!!
Will be waiting hima di...pls pls update soon!!! Ab na wait nai ho raha 😆

Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago