VIRMAN FF:You are my love PART 19 updated 6.11.13 - Page 65

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome teaser akka!😉 I'm waiting for the update!😛
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Awesome teaser akka!😉 I'm waiting for the update!😛



will update soon arthy... my junior shakespeare
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AWESOME TEASER
SOME THING INTERESTING
CAN'T WAIT UPDATE SOON.



will update tomorrow dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 15:

Hi my dear buddies... Thank you for your likes and comments in my previous update. I am here with a long one. Hope you'll enjoy this. Here comes your next part...



After dancing, Virat introduced Manvi to his close friends circle. Ofcourse, she doesn't need any introduction, but for Virat it was his proudest possession to introduce her as his wife. They started chating with lots of fun and joy. Manvi excused from them as she got a call in her mobile. She went outside the hall to speak as it was from a very important person. He was Mr.Rahul Singhania, only friend of his chachu Madan chaudary. He helped her to enter in modeling and offered many chances for her achievements. But she only agreed his initiatives and fought herself towards her achievement. But he always supports her like her chachu.

Phone convo:

Manvi: hello uncle... Very happy that you called me after long time... how are you?

R.S: I am fine beta... Your happiness is expressed in your voice... How's Shruthi?

Manvi: Haan... She's fine uncle. Doing her higher studies in Delhi university.

R.S: Oh... that's great. I called you for an important matter... I need your help beta.

Manvi: Just order me uncle... Have I ever ignored your words?

R.S: But it's quite difficult in this situation for you now... you are married too.

Manvi: Arrey... you know kithna sweet hubby I have? He will always respect my decision.

R.S: Manvi... we have planned for a show in Germany with a topmost model. But she regret at the last moment. Can you do it for me? You have to stay there for 5 days atleast... I've left with no more option beta. If we cancelled the show, we'll loose our reputation in the international standards.

Manvi: don't worry uncle... nothing will happen like that. Surely we'll achieve this time too... I'll ask Virat for my 5 days Germany trip and call you later. Bye...

Manvi was sincerely watched by that evil bitch... Her every actions created a sense of havoc in her dirty mind. She was also on a rage of jealousy towards Manvi for having Virat... She was none other than Preethi, Virat's ex-lover. She somehow understood Manvi was ready to go Germany, that too for 5 days. This is now enough for that spoilt brat... to use this chance and stick to Virat again... to throw Manvi from his life and make him her's again... so that she could rule over all their property... a status of being Virat's wife... She never thought in her mares that he'll come to this awesome position. Otherwise, she'll never moved away from his love. But now it's quiet difficult for her to gain his attention she thought in her filthy mind...

When Manvi was about to move towards Virat, she got another call. It was Jeevika... Jeevika told about V..ma's uneasiness in breathing and severe body ache. Manvi was shocked on hearing that... She cut the call and ran towards him worriedly. But she stopped suddenly... She decided them to reach home first and then tell him everything. She thought, if he knew he'll become more tensed and worried... She urged towards Virat and asked him to take her to home without saying anything... Virat felt something fishy in her mood and took her to home fastly...



"Virat come fast to ma's room", said Manvi and ran inside towards V..ma's room holding his hand. When they entered, Jeevika ran towards Manvi and cried holding her hands. "Di... Is ma fine now?" she whispered slowly... Virat saw her and shouted, "what happened to my ma?" shrugging her shoulders... Manvi was blinking unable to see his helpless face. "Wo... wo... actually... body ache. She finds very much difficulty in breathing too" she said silently. "So... you knew everything when we were in party? Right?" he yelled at her shaking her shouders heavily. She controlled her pain and stood seeing his eyes. Her eyes were filled with tears and it started rolling down to her cheeks continuously... "Virat plese understand... that's why I urged you to come home... If I told there, you'll be worried na?" she said patiently.

"If something happened to my mom, before we came? You hell trying to hide such an important matter? How dare you Manvi? I have to be with my mom at her every needs... better you don't come between us" he yelled and went inside V..ma's room banging the door at her face... Manvi was crying so hard. She can't hear those words from his mouth... She was helplessly standing outside the room with Jeevika. Viren saw all these and tried to console her... but she was not ready to stop her sobs.

"Don't cry Manvi... It's just his frustrations... He was highly worried for ma in these 7 months... his fear of loosing ma made him to speak like this..." said Jeevika wiping her tears.

Manvi turned and looked towards V..ma's room... "She is quiet fine now Manvi... Doctor came and injected her... She was sleeping now. You can see her later... ok?" said Viren and signaled Jeevika to take her to their room.

Virat entered the room and saw V..ma sleeping... he further inquired about her condition to the doctor who was there with V..ma. Hearing his words, his eyes becomes moist... he sat near her and holded her hands... Feeling his touch, V..ma opened her eyes... "Virat... don't worry beta... life is a mixture of dusk and dawn... You should know to face everything" she said.

"Ma... please... don't say like that" he said while his words chukled in his throat... His worries didn't helped him to speak... To change the topic, she asked about Manvi...

"don't ask about her ma... She's very careless... hided your health conditions from me that Bhabhi informed her while we were in party. Shit..." he yelled again.

"Virat... my health was not deteriorated today... nor yesterday. It went weak so many months back... She's a poor innocent soul... why did you hurt her? Haan? Not only you... she is also my child... she was the one who agreed to marry you only for my request... without any expectation from your side... till this day, has she asked anything regarding her needs? She'll always worry for others and take all possible attemps to make her loved ones happy. She'll never fight nor give up easily... She always wishes to see others happily. She don't have any relations in this world than Shruthi... She was my angel who returned my Virat back... It's your responsibility to pay back her happiness... otherwise, she'll feel lonely na?" said V..ma.

Now he understood everything... He was calmed down hearing his mom's words. He felt really guilty for hurting her... His mind was wandering without any constancy... He donno how to set things right... Also he fear that, he might loose his love again due to his anger... "I am sorry ma... it's my mistake... I hurted her too much and that's not fair... She'll be worrying badly becoz of my words... I am sorry" he said to ma worriedly.

"go and apologize to her beta..." said V..ma caressing his cheeks.

Virat went out towards their room to meet Manvi... At half way to the room, he realized that he left his mobile in V..ma's room itself. On the otherside, Manvi entered in V..ma's room after checking whether he'd left from there.

Manvi came inside the room and hugged V..ma who smiled seeing her. "Now-a-days, some one seems to be very busy na? not even spending much time with her ma" said V..ma to make her smile. Manvi forced a smile in her lips. But thinking Virat, her eyes filled up again. She tried to control her emotions infront of ma. "How are you feeling now? Is it better ma? Has your pain reduced now?" she asked patting her back slowly to make her some relief from pain. "How can I be not well when you are besides me?" said V..ma. Her eyes were filled and she hugged ma again.

V..ma aparted her after few seconds and asked, "What happened my child? You wanna say anything to me?"



"Nothing ma... I am fine. Just came to see you" said Manvi. Virat watched her painful eyes and worries that she's trying to hide. He also understood her lonely feel when he failed to understand her feelings. She just hided that matter for his sake... so that he should not worry. But he accused her and hurted her harshly... He came inside to take his mobile. Manvi noticed his presence and scared thinking what he'll do now... Virat saw her scary face but she turned aside without facing him. V..ma nodded her head in assurance to Virat and he left from there thinking of her.

After making V..ma sleep, Manvi went to her room. She changed her costumes and wore a simple night suit. She came to bed and lied on it silently closing her eyes. She was thinking how to say about her Germany trip to Virat. Virat came inside the room and saw Manvi. He thought that she'd slept. He moved very close to her and lied near her. He caressed her cheeks and whispered sorry'.


Manvi woke up from the bed slowly realizing his presence near her. She sat on the bed holding her duvet. Virat's face is tensed seeing her tears... He pulled her in his embrace and closed his eyes. Manvi felt his tears on her bare shoulders and raised her face to see him. She can bear even his harsh words but not his single tear... "Virat... it's ok. You have every single right on me. You can scold me, slap me or anything... Please don't worry for this simple matter... please" she spoke softly.

"I am tired of this Manvi... I don't know how to save my mom from that evil cancer... It's playing with me crucially... We have consulted many doctors and undergone many treatments... but nothing helped me..." said he broke down infront of her.



Her heart is drenching seeing his state... She made him lie on her tiny shoulders and consoled him. " Virat... I promise you... we'll save our ma together... very soon she'll be out of this deadly disease... I am here with you na? I can't see even your single tear..." said this she wiped his tears and caressed his hairs softly.

Manvi made him to lie on the bed and she lied on his chest holding him tightly... hearing his worries, she was praying god to snatch away his pain. Virat felt a support on her embrace. He cuddled her very close and asked, "Will that miracle happen in my mom's life?"



"why not? Trust me Virat... some miracle is gonna happen and it'll make my ma and Virat very happy... ok?" she said confidently... Hearing her words, a new confidence developed in his mind... "I am ready to face everything, when you are there to support me... guide me... as mom said, really you are an angel in my life which returned me back whatever I lost... my energy... my confidence... my love... and so much that can't be explained in words" he said holding her tightly and kissed her forehead... Manvi also kissed his cheeks back and smiled.

Manvi thought he was back to normal and started to speak about her Germany trip... "Virat... I wanna ask you something" she said awkwardly... "hmm... I'll give you whatever you wish" he replied caressing her hair...

"I wanna go Germany... for a week" she said slowly and scaringly waiting for her reactions... "What?" he asked and suddenly got up from the bed jerkingly...

"Have you lost your brain? I'll never allow you to go anywhere... that too for 5 days..." he said straightly... "No Virat... it's very important na?" she pleaded him softly.



"nothing is important for me... please Manvi" he said holding her hands. She has lost in his eyes for a moment. But she has to go for Mr. Rahul. "Virat... do you think I wish to stay away from you? I'll also miss you. But we can't go together leaving ma in this stage. I should respect Mr.Rahul Na? He is like my father and helped me in many aspects... Now it's upto you. If you don't like, then I won't go" said this she turned back.

"Ok... you can go" he said without any interest. Manvi noticed this... but she too had none other option besides going there... with this they went to sleep.

...

Next morning, virman went to airport together... both of them were not talking to each other. They were very silent till they heard the voice which announced the passengers to go inside. Once they understood that she has to go now, they keep on staring each other... Manvi closed her eyes suddenly without able to see him as she can't breakdown in front of him now... Virat turned to go back outside seeing her closed eyes. He took few steps towards the exit... She opened her eyes to see him again. But he was not there... She saw he was about to go out from there. She sat down on her knees and broke down without thinking her surrounding...


He turned back for the last time to see her from the exit door... His legs stopped moving... His heart stopped beating for a second... He ran immediately towards her and took her in his arms and whispered, "It's ok Manvi... it's just for 5 days na?" he said patting her back concernedly... She hugged him tightly and asked, "but you are not happy. I'll miss you badly Virat... I can't regret his words... Please don't mistake me... please..."


" I can understand Manvi... no one is dare to mistake you. It's ok. Getting too late na? hmm?" he said making her to stand by her legs and wiped her tears...

"ok fine... but you should come back to me as soon as possible..." he said holding her hands. Manvi kissed his cheeks and aparted her hands from his with a heavy heart. Virat smiled to make her happy... He stood there till she went inside and ready to move out.

The evil bitch Preethi was there watching all these and making her spoilt brain to plan something... "Let's start our plan to work from now... Our only disturbance, Manvi chaudary... lost from here leaving my Virat... If I failed to grab this opportunity, I'll be the loser... What to do?" she started thinking herself... "Ideaaa..." she said loudly with an evil smirk in her face and started following Virat... Donno when this idiot will gonna understand what is meant by love...

That's it... Wish to know your comments on this update... From this part, tracks will move on and Virat will get to know about Smrithi soon... Also, according to my prologue Virman will find their happiness and hidden values behind each other...

THANK YOU...

BYE BYE... TAKE CARE...🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Eeeks! I'm the first to comment! Yayy!😉

Its party time!🥳

Coming to the update, it was just awesome and i loved it to the core!😛

Hate Preethi and Smiriti is coming back... hmmm... Interesting!😉

Will miss Virman together!😳

Take care!🤗

Love you akka!❤️
Edited by Angelic_Friend - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Eeeks! I'm the first to comment! Yayy!😉

Its party time!🥳

Coming to the update, it was just awesome and i loved it to the core!😛

Hate Preethi and Smiriti is coming back... hmmm... Interesting!😉

Will miss Virman together!😳

Take care!🤗

Love you akka!❤️



thank u my junior shakespeare...
very happy that you commented first...
luv u too...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update he hurt but vm relise his
mistake he opolozie her now she
germany for week what will
prethi do he will again hurt her
or he will stand for her update soon
Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
you wrote nice... Virat's anger to manvi for not telling him about his moms health
then loved v.mom the way she told virat about manvi
manvi going to Germany for 5 days
hate this preethi ...don't know what she will do😈
from next part its gone b interesting
smiriti's entry
waiting for next part
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Abi... it's wonderful update
Manvi is such a darling who understand everything perfectly
but Virat seems little rude but nice
desperately waiting for next part
hope everything goes fine in Virman life
update soon
and Thanx 4he PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updt...its very long...n loved it...i think prethi is upto something very big...she will the 1 who disclose manvis past...lts c cont soon

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