ARSHI TWO SHOT - MAT JAO(DON'T GO)

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Remarkable!!! Ankita!!!

I loved it!!😃

Your truly wrote this brilliantly! I really loved this scene Mat Jao! I love how Arnav was vulnerable in this state and he knew only Khushi was the one that can take the pain away. Barun sobti did a splendid job acting this scene. The emotion, the facial expression and the feeling he showed,so pristine!

If only the writer had called you up and ask you to write the scene after him asking! OMG, Ankita this was mind blowing! You really expressed the scene too brilliantly!

You showed a strong Khushi here and of course how can she leave him at this stage, when he is broken. She knew that her Arnavji needs her and only she can handle him.

Just loved how she told dadi ji out of respect, but firmly letting her know that right now no one can stop me from staying here to take care of her husband! No matter what it takes!

Khushi really knows exactly what Arnav need and how to console and soothe him. It was a very cute gesture how she was talking to his mama and trying to divert his mind and bring out happy moment of his childhood memories to take his mind out of what happened earlier.

Oh loved the dialogues of Arnav when he ask Khushi, what have you done to me? It was asking her how she has changed him into a better man from a ruthless person.

Arnav really found that warmth,peace and solace in Khushi's embracement because he went to sleep peacefully and happily in her lap.😳(would have loved it too)

Oh Ankita , please take a bow! 👏 " standing ovation"

I was deeply touch and my heart melted reading this! I felt like I watching scene in my head as I read this..

Thank you for this !! You brought beautiful memories back again of IPK with a special touch!!

Thanks for the pm..

Eagerly waiting for more...😉

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Superb, beautiful !!! loved it..

thanks for pm 😊

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arshi_sona

@arshi_sona

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

This is so touching...i luv dis scene n d genuine acting by Sarun our Arshi...😊

You hv taken me bck to IPK days...ohh God m missing dem...!!

kash aisa shw main bhi dekhatey...it wud hv been gr88...

Very nicely return..luvd it 👍🏼

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

this mat jao scene is one of my favourite...
that two words were enough for him to describe how vulnerable he was ..
loved reading it :)

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

awww loved it 🤗

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

that was so beautiful!

we have always seen arnav and khushi equally drowning in the sorrow of loosing their parents but today you have shown us the pain that arnav had gone through all alone while khushi had always had support. this is why the difference in arnav and khushi was!

while khushi, even after loosing her parents had gotten the love and warmth in the form of her new family, arnav had been left alone on a deserted street, he was left alone to look after his sister. there was no one he cud share his sorrow with because his sister was too lost in her own pain to look at her "chottey".

but today, he has his khushi, his love, his life, his light in the darkness surrounding him.

this was really perfect. loved it!

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Beautiful ... Khushi couldn't able to go back...

Loved how she answered dadi & also smoothed Arnavs sorrow...

Lovely & heart touching OS

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

chi, its lovely

just one dialogue of two words "mat jao"

n this is the end product

aise hi main aapko best thodi na bolti hoon

mwahz chi!

love u for this superb ts

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Iru_Arshi

@Iru_Arshi

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Anku this is the first time i'm commenting on one of your stories while I can't stop tears flowing from my eyes. It just won't stop 😭 This is Perfection!! Absolutely brilliant!!

This is love. And love stands above all rituals n traditions. That's the power of love. And that's our ARSHI ❤️

The most beautiful TS I've ever read..