ARSHI TWO SHOT - MAT JAO(DON'T GO)

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dimple288

@dimple288

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Omg that was very emotional . Outstanding

Loved the way khushi answered dadiji. Kaash aisa Kuch his hota in our show.

I almost cried reading their heart touching conversation .

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Aww this was a really nice read ! Loved it ! 😳

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fatousha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

oh it as beautifful very loving nd emotionnel...❤️

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

It was simply amazing n heart touching..

U chose a beautiful scene n extended it so beautifully...

I loved Khushi's(Ankita's😉) decision 2 come back 2 Arnav...As he needed her at that time badly..

Ankita..

I m getting greedier...

I demand more scene..

Especially,the scene before their marriage...

I don't want consumation...

just my angel falling asleep n Arnav carrying her to Gupta House..😆

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

I have read this second time.

Truly amazing n very emotional.

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afshan alam

@afsuu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Beautifully written. This is a favorite scene for me and you did an amazing job. Loved it..

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

You so beautifully and sensitively gave closure to that scene - it was just so so them - wish the serial had shown all this.

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

aww...it was soo lovely

i just loved the scene...and i too wanted her to stayback

just loved the story❤️

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Awesome and very touching...

This is one my favourite scenes.

Loved the way you elaborated it.

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