ARSHI TWO SHOT - MAT JAO(DON'T GO) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Oh..anku
This is so beautifully written
Mat jao is one of the scenes which I loved between arshi
The way u carried it ..made it evn more beautiful
Wish ..if they had shown it as khsuhi coming bck to him...sigh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
true she did have her parents with her as her amma babuji
while he had his parents snatched and betrayed by his own
ahhh when she is there for him all will be okay
and she will be his shield as always
she would have stayed back right
and she did here as she knew what he would be going through
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The update was brilliant ... loved it 😊 Thanks for the PM


Even though tears were filling her eyes for parting with Arnav & for staying away from him until the marriage is completed with full rituals but her heart feeling elated at the thought of him taking care of her & her safety so intently & she worried for the problems that she's facing but her heart trusting her Arnavji who would set it all right at any cost brought out the immense trust she had on Arnav

Khushi mustering her courage & returning to RM, she interrupted by Dadi & the latter harshly speaking to her but Khushi 👏 politely & firmly telling her that she rightfully belonged in RM & also making Dadi recollect Arnav's words that she was his wife & belonged here was a fantastic scene. I liked Khushi's approach of respecting Dadi but still making her stand clear instead of fearing Dadi

Khushi witnessing his tensed form while he sensed her presence & then she soothing his pain; he asking her about being here & not at GH but then not intruding further on learning that she couldn't leave him was lovely …………….. love the way in which they understand each other 🤗

On hearing her convo with Buaji Arnav realizing that she was her for him though the rituals meant a lot to her, he trying to speak to her but stopping from continuing further on hearing her & then he expressing his love for through his eyes was beautifully laid down ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Arnav elated on knowing that she was talking to his Mama & tightening his hold on her out of happiness; ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ he then surprised on hearing her complain to his Mama & she cupping his cheeks with love & speaking about the undying love he has for his loved ones & he pulling her into his tight embrace & feeling her love through her words & actions & mouthing a silent Thank You to his Mama for sending this angel into his forlorn life who is showering him with love threw light on how Khushi's love has brought him peace & love in abundance ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

He feeling good to speak about his childhood, her act of making him lie on her lap making him feel better & calm, she crying silently on thinking of the pain he underwent alone due to the lose of his parents, promising to his Mama to wipe away all the pain & sorrow that lingered around him & in the end the stars sparkling above was beautiful 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
beautiful OS
loved it
loved how Khushi answered back to dadiji
thanks for pm
well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heart warming and adorablw thought
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Nice thing

Hope they showed scenes like this

But no,

You fulfilled it

Will u contiue this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so beautiful and touching. well done Ankita. Love Ya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
You write such beautiful stories. Thank you for sharing them with us. looking forward to the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Wow... Awesome, Super & Beautiful
Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome update
Love it 😊

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