ARSHI TWO SHOT - MAT JAO(DON'T GO) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant Ankita 👏

It was so beautiful. I second ur thoughts on Arnav. He had a very painful past. He has lost his parents, his family, a shelter and had to live at the mercy of others. When he was only 14, he had to take the responsibility of his sister. He was the support to his family. But in all of these, he never had a pillar of support. His Di was his weakness but never his strength. Khushi is his strength, his pillar of support. It was his circumstances that made him what he was before he met Khushi and Khushi is what her surroundings made her. Though she too has lost her parents, she found a loving and caring family with babuji as her strength, her protector. She didn't need to carry the burden of responsibilities till she was in Delhi. Both of them have suffered the worst and came out as winners. Now they are the biggest support to each other, they are the strength of each other. If one falls, the other is always there to catch him/her. That's the beauty of their relationship. The story is beautifully written. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just came across dis...
must say it was adorable!!!!!!!!!
This scene was one of the many wonderful scenes in the show n SaRun were awesome in it!!!!!!
everything about the scene was perfect... the way arnav says 'Mat Jao'!!!!!!!

u did a wonderful job!!!!! wish they had shown something of dis sort in the show!!!!!!!!!!

beautiful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was so sweet and adorable! it would have been so nice to see all this but :(

thx a lot for putting that beautiful scenes in word!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww that was too beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow beautifully written 😳
loved it to the core
keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maat jao - these 2 words have never been sooo soothing nd sooo beautiful until Arnav Singh Raizada had uttered them in our show,the show which i relive wit every passing second of my life..! ❤️

This man has never failed to amaze me nd yet again his simple two words made me fall in love wit him all over again..!

When he uttered those words in d show i felt like i am listening to some most beautiful words i have ever heard off nd thats wat my ARSHI is..!

Beautiful,pure,innocent nd yet passionate who alwaz make me feel dat they r devine nd immesurable nd ofcrs unbeatables..! ❤️

nd her u again made me feel wat love is nd yes true love is alwaz beautiful ❤️

his two simple words hold all his emotions nd love nd his dependence on her nd his belief dat wit her by his side he will not feel d pain nd his need to her..! ❤️

his love nd his need for her is alwaz expressed though his eyes nd as words r not neccessary as khushi is well knwn of his unxprssed words nd his eyes which alwaz show his pure love nd admiration for her..! ❤️

khushi,this girl is simply a gem..! ❤️

she can make me feel dat being in love u get stronger nd for d happiness of ur loved one u can do anythng..! ❤️

here by taking d decision of cuming back to RM to b wit her hubby fighting wit d world believing dat she has every right to b wit him make me fall in love wit her even more..!

D way she asked mohan to drive her back 2 RM nd d way she said dadi abt her staying at RM wit her arnavji was beautifully expressed

her firm clarification nd her firm announcemnt abt her staying at RM actually made dadi agree her defeat in front of her love nd thus winning evrythng nd evryone for her love she went to their room where she knws dat deep inside her hubby is craving for her..! ❤️

her cumimg back to RM do shock arnav coz he knws dat rituals mean evrythng to khushi nd she is very much strict abt it but yet again she proved that nothng can b more important to her dan him..! ❤️

khushi kumari gupta singh raizada yet again left evrythng nly to support her hubby making evryone feel dat she can do anythng for her love nd her love is powerful dan her belief in some rituals nd there she is in all her glory standing in front of him making him proud of their love nd giving him dis assurance dat she will never leave him..! ❤️

her way to distract arnav's attention from that mournful day was beautiful n yes she did succeed in doing dat nd her talking to arnav's mom nd calling her mamma nd making him believe dat she is talking to her mom-in-law...!

Nd arnav's xpression aftr hearing khushi calling his mom as mumma nd talking to her was adorable

nd thus she took away all his pain by making him remember about his childhood which is actually his treasure nd thus by lulling sweet nothngs she made him sleep in her lap..!

Nd he slept peacefully wit new hope nd new determination dat tomrw will b another day when he will try to make thngs fall in proper place nd he knws dat wit khushi by his side he can win anythng nd evrythng..! ❤️

this is indeed one of d bst shots i have read in dis forum..!

I love it to bits nd i hope i have done justice wit my comnt 😳

abear hug for writing dis shot nd making me fall in love wit ARSHI nd ofcrs U all over again...! 🤗

love u my baby doll ❤️
Edited by ara_000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dats so heart touching... OMG so so nice❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, this "Mat Jao" was one of my fav scene from show and you made it more beautiful, awesome! I wish we could have seen something like this in our show, this was amazing, fabulous piece of writing. Loved the way Khushi took the decision and no one could stopped her by reaching to her Arnavji, her way of lighten his mood and talking about his mumma was so heart touching, lovely. God bless everyone with such supporting life partners! Great job dear, this was by far one of my favorite OS, bookmarking it to read it again & again in future 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Partner that was so beautifully written ke kya batao? 👍🏼👍🏼👏👏

You wrote of their love for one another so beautifully and the lines you used? Haay main marjava.
That was one of the most beautifulest two shots I have read Partner hats off to you ❤️
Edited by LondonChick - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Amazing TS 😊
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