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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

awesome update

loved it

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Read all the parts.
And it awesome.
Do continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: nia333
Hello Dear Marry

Once again an Awesome update dear...👏 Thank u so much for Bigwala update...loved it!!! 😛
I love Cutee Ansh...❤️ 😳 more than Virat...He is our Real Cute Lil Hero...😉😃 Sia tooo..She wants her bro get married to Mannu only to play with her...very...very cuteee...😳 😆 Virat is fully jealous of Ansh...very funnyyy... 😆 I like caring bro Arjun ...But why Mannu was sad before?...😕😲 awww...Virat made my Ansh cry...😭 bad guy Virat....😳Mannu is going with Vadheras to their house...Super excited to read next part...😛 update soon...Thank u so much for d pm n sorry for late comment dear...😳
Love u
Take care

its ok dear and yes she want his bro marriage to her so she and his bro
will play with her and u love ansh aww and virat make ansh cry very bad na and
what happen to her its get to know to u when past part reveal and thanks pari

Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Read all the parts.
And it awesome.
Do continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.

thanks for u r comment

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sups

@sups

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

update soon...want to know what happen to manvi

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

pls do update soon marry 😊

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: prathe
pls do update soon marry 😊

may be today I will update

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: pink1

may be today I will update

will be waiting 😊

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

I am sorry for late update actually I am busy doing my marriage shopping and marriage preparation because next month I am getting married on 22nd dec I hope u like this update and next update I will try soon

Part 13

All are going vardhera house while driving viren give call to SB and tell her to say every one manvi is coming with them but don't react any thing like they know him and other side Asnh and Sia want sit with Manvi so they both sit Arjun car and Arjun call following viren car and virat also want sit with manvi but he can't because viren drag virat with him he is so much want now what happen to her 2 years back why she behaving like this that she doesn't recognize them is some thing bad happen to her

Viren Car

Vn : viren seeing virat and jeevika they both are there in there world and he know very well both are thing about manvi so he break the silence and tell them that he inform family member about manvi

J : Viren ji what happen to mannu why she didn't recognize us is there bad happen to her I really want know

Vn : I also thinking same what happen to her last 2 year how she meet this kapoor family

V : Bhai I really want to know what happen to her I can't see her staying away from I really want her near me I can't live with out her

Vn : virat relax we want to know about manvi so we should try to come close kapoor family then only we will get to know what happen her

V : But when she will recognize me and us

J : I really want to hug my mannu and I want to tell her how I miss her how I am leaving without her

Vn : Jeeevika very soon our will be with us my heart is saying we will get our manvi very soon

In Arjun Car

M : So Ansh and Sia tell me in u r home how many people are

Ansh : Shaumani Dadi ,Vanisha Dadi ,badaDadaji , Inder and kamdair dada and dadi, and sholk chachu

Sia : and bada badi beeji .badi beeji ,mandan dada ,pinki dadi ,babbu mama and sweety mammi and our little brother Aditya (Aditya he is son dabbu and sweety he is 2 yrs)

M : when Ansh and Sia telling there family member name manvi feeling like she know them very well but why can't rembering any thing about them she is in her thought and listing Ansh call she break her thought and looking Ansh and Sia whenever she see Ansh and Sia she feel her that she some kind of relation with them which she unknown

Ansh : So girlfriend tell when u going to marry me know u r brother also not having problem right Arjun Uncle

A : Yes yes I really not any problem while laughing

Sia : See friend u brother doesn't any problem know u can marriage my brother Ansh and come our home we will play lot of game

M : Bhai what are u saying front of kid

Ansh : In cute angry tone I am not kid

M : ok u r not kid I am sorry

A : what why giving angry look see some so much desperate married with little mannu and I will get just cute jiju what say Ansh

Ansh & Sia : Jiju means

M : tell tell know

A : Jiju means when u will married my sister u will became my jiju

Ansh & Sia: ooh

Ansh : So Arjun uncle u can call me cute jiju right girlfriend

M : Yeah right but right know u both of them concentrate on u r study ok

Ansh & Sia : ok

All reach vadhera house all family member so happy they will see manvi and sad that they can't so there happiness front her and should behave like they have seen her first

Everyone come out from car and moving to when Virat ,Viren Jeevika and all family member see Ansh And Sia coming with manvi while holding her hand from both sideand looking at her he is happy he know how manvi love Ansh and Sai when they both are to small she always like play with them and they both are also like her coming and after 2 year same thing they both are so attach with her in short time and all are so happy seeing her with like this

They all are came inside sit in hall

Vn : Dadaji this Arjun and his sister manvi

Everyone looking manvi with love they only know how they controlling there feeling toward her

A : hello Sir and hold manvi hand and make her sit near him

All are seeing how much Arjun taking care of manvi like she is not her sister she is his daughter

Viren introduce Arjun and Manvi to his all family member and while introduce every one noticing Manvi reaction like she thinking or some confusion is going

D : u love u sister so much

A : Yes Dadaji she is not only my sister is my daughter my first daughter right Mannu

M : Nod her with smile face but manvi try to remembering why
this type feeling growing inside like she knows them very well

J : when Arjun say mannu is not sister but his daughter and remembering her and manvi conversation in which she always saying Manvi is her first daughter

Viren know what jeevika is thinking for her also manvi is her first daughter

And other side Virat just seeing manvi he can't take his eye from her he was scare if he take his eye from her she again from far from her his heart want to hug her want to give lot of love her want tell how he living with out her how he want apologize his mistake to her but he can't do this any thing like this he feel so helpless and scolding him self that why he say her forget him and know she forget him he want she recognize him shout him scold him pls manvi manvi came back my life again because with out u I am nothing

J : Jeevika goes near manvi and tell her to come with me

M : look Arjun

A : say go with her I have some work related case so I will with mr viren till that u go with them and spend some time

M : ok bahi

Manvi goes with jeevika Ansh and Sia also follow them in jeevika room and virat and other family also follow them

J : Sit hear I will bring u something to eat saying like this when she going manvi call her di and she stop

Virat and all family member also shock when manvi say jeevika di and viren ( viren is coming to his room to collected some case related paper )

J : What u said

M : Di

and all looking at manvi

M : sorry if u feel bad but I really don't know why I am calling u di

J : no no I really don't feel bad

M : really so should I call u di because my heart saying to call u di and I am always listing my heart

Listing all this all family member are happy at least some ever manvi connecting with them again

Vn : Viren came forward but one condition u can call her di

M : Condition

Vn : yes condition and that condition is u can call me jiju not viren ji or Mr. viren

M : Jiju

J : yes manvi u call me di and virenji is u r jiju

M : Smile widely and said ok

Ansh : u know momma I always Arjun uncle cute jiju

V : u also means

Sai : Chachu Ansh ask manvi and Arjun uncle if can married With mr friend so Arjun uncle say yes

V : Shock what

Arjun waiting viren but not come so he ask where is viren because he want to see manvi also whether she fine or not and while searching he came viren room and heard the conversation them he feel happy that how easily manvi mix up them and start laughing listing Ansh and Sia conversation

Every one turn there face Arjun when they heard some laughing

Ansh look Arjun and run with him and Arjun pick up him in his hand

Ansh : Uncle u only told me naa if I married with my girlfriend then u can call me cute jiju

A : Yes I said

V : what u r cute jiju not u r monster kid

Ansh : How many time should I tell u chahchu I am not a kid and I not a monster I am a handsome hunk and now cute jiju also

All are laughing listing Ansh word and other side virat feel little jealous and manvi also see this start smiling she her smile every one happy and especially Arjun because he like when her little happy and smiling

After that conversation viren take Arjun in study room discussion
about case and virat ,ansh ,sia and jeevika sitting in Virika room and talking with manvi Ansh and sia playing with manvi and looking them virat and jeevika happy because they seeing manvi after 2 years and not ready to move away from her

while jeevika goes kitchen to make manvi favorite dish and virat go out attend one call he doesn't want to receive the but its continously ringing so manvi said him to pick the call and ansh and sia goes to bring they drawing book to show manvi there drawing

when alone in room she shout loudly every one came running in viraka room listing manvi voice and when they see her shouting and sweating they get shock seeing like this jeevika ,virat ,viren and Arjun run toward her

A : Clam done mannu clam done see not body trying to kill

M : bhai know I have seeing somebody trying kill

J : mannu relax nobody hear see but she also get scare she her sister like this condition

V : when virat see her like this he get pain in his heart

Viren and all family member scare for manvi that what happen u want kill

A : clam down and take mannu in his hug

M : bhai they kill

M : bhai they kill

while saying she get faint

and when she get unconscious Arjun pick her and lie her virika bed and call doctor

That its today if u like this update then press like button and give u r comment and tell how u like this update

Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago