Virman SS: I will make u my again one day - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 10



That day come when Ansh and Sia going to meet manvi in children park today ansh and sia are so happy and they both are getting ready but only ansh and sia not happy with them all family member are happy especially virat,viren and jeevika they also decide they go with ansh and sia in park to see manvi reaction when they come front of her and to get little more details about her

Ansh : mooma where are u

J & Vn turn when they heard ansh voice

J : ansh beta what happen why u r shouting and running while talking to ansh sia also came to there parent room

Ansh : haww I am shouting I am call u to make ready

Sia: mooma make also ready we are going to park to meet my budlly(buddy) and gulfrind(girlfriend )

Ansh : yes momma I want to handpum (handsome) front of my gulfrind

(girlfriend ) pls fast fast make me ready to don't t late

Sia : yes momaa fast fast

Ansh : sia see today I will tell her I love u and I want to marry u

Sia : ok tell her soon then we will bring her in our house and we play all day with her

Ansh : ha we will play with all day and I will not allow villat chachu near her

Vn and J looking there children and listing there talk while smiling and one more person is listing all this is virat he came to tell his bhai and bhabhi got ready to leave soon because he doesn't have patience to wait he was dying to meet manvi

V : oye u want to marry her no chance I will not allow u ansh

Ansh : giving cute angry look to his chachu and asking why I like her she so bitful(beautiful)and she calling
handpum (handsome) and she is my
gulfrind(girlfriend )


V : making irradiated face and teasing beautiful handsome and girlfriend first say properly u r kid not big boy and one more thing she my she came my life first so she my not u r I will see how u r marry her I will marry her again and bringing in this house

Ansh : NO I will marry her

V : I will

Ansh : I will

V : I will

Ansh : Momma look chachu while crying run to jeevika

V : see u r crying and u want to marry her

Vn : virat stop behaving like a child

V : Bhai u telling me ask u r son he want to became my sautan

Vn & J : while laughing virat stop

V : Ha tell tell me only u can't scold my sautan u is hugging his mom and crying i tell u will marry her and know one come btw us

Vn : controlling his seeing antics act and saying virat he is kid but u r not

Ansh : while shouting Papa I am not kid I am
handpum (handsome)

V : See see bhai what u son is saying

While all thing going other elder come virika room to tell them they should leave but when came viriks room they seeing hoe virat and ansh fighting for manvi and all start laughing

when elder enter in room while laughing virat ,viren and jeevika looking

J and Vn : try to contol there laugh Ma , U are here anything u want

SB : we have came to tell leave park soon

Vm : ha but what this going on looking at virat who make irritated face and looking ansh and ask virat what this why u fighting with ansh and calling sautan he small kid but u r big u should understand

Ansh : Shouting loudly while crying said how many time should I tell I am not a kid I am

handpum (handsome) and don't call me front my
gulfrind(girlfriend ) kid


Vm : why ansh why should we don't call kid front u r grilfriend

Ansh : because if u call kid front of her then how she will ready to marry I want marry her

Sb : why u want to marry her

Ansh : because I like her she sooo

bitful(beautiful)

J : She beautiful

Ansh : nod his nod head

D : and what

Ansh : telling na why u disturbing me

Vn : Viren looking dadaji while smile face and then virat who make his angry and look ansh and ask and what

Ansh : and when she come in this house she will play me and sia and I can continuously stare her
because u know

All family member saying because she beautiful

Ansh and sia : yes right

V : U want play with her u want stare wait I will show and run behind ansh

Vn : Virat Ansh stop if u two behave like this I will cancel to go park

V and Ansh : together no we want to park and meet my manvi and both are giving each other angry look


All family member start laughing with there behavior and they start to leave park to meet manvi


I Know again short and not good update but when My other story will finish I will start to give big update and please avoid any grammatical mistake and if u like this update then press like button and give u precocious comment
Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
manuthi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... cute fight btw virat and ansh... loved it... waiting for manvi's meeting with virat and family...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol sautan ...
loved it...
continue sonnn pleaseee
hemameenu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
ha ha so cute really through out the story i was literally laughing ansh and virat
wow what a cute bond
and v calling him sautan now when mannu comes to know about these how will her reaction be i am really liking the possessive virat he is possessive about his mannu with small kid also
yep it was short but really cute
hemameenu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls pls pls continue soon
itsfate thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved virat ansh fight
continue soon
thanks for the pm
madhuharini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update dear...😊
it's really interesting...👏
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow super loved the cute fight btw ansh and virat i was literally😆 while reading it dear...super😆👏😛
do continue soon and also we are made fr each other too soon dear😊
Syed695 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab Update..! Like ansh and Virat..too cute..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...
Eagerly waiting for virman meet...
Plzzz update it quick...

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