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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: tinni04
the update was awesome👏 loved it continue soon😊

thanks 😛

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: rasp_berry
Super cute updt...c i knew it ansh GF is manvi only...loved that whole children park scene...that was so cute...finally after along time vadheras got some news abt manvi but bfr wed i think they will meet her...lolzzz...lets c...cont soon

thanks and yes u r right

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pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 7

All are so happy they don't to express there happiness all family
have tears in there when Ansh and Sia said they there Manvi and
Virat ,Viren , jeevika are so happy that they cannot control there happiness Jeevika run her kids and hug them tightly for give such a good news all 3 of them and family member are waiting when will Wednesday come and they will meet manvi and bring her back in there life

J : I am so happy virenji I cannot tell u finally I will meet my mannu after 2 years I do no how this 3 days will I am excites to meet my mannu she and look viren and virenji we will bring her with if say no then also we will bring with her we force her this time I will never let her go while saying all this she have tears in her eye

Vn : Yes Jeevika we will bring with her she stay away from us since 2 year but this but bring her god as given chance to make virat and manvi together will do it

J : Nod her head

V : Bhai she come na I will say sorry her I will tell her give me what punishment she want give me I am ready but don't I will say don't leave me again I really can't live without her I life is empty without her bhai bhabhi she come na this time I will never let her go away from while telling all his also tear he was not controlling his tears which continuous falling from his eye

All this happening but to little is confusion they didn't understand why all elder are carrying taking there girlfriend and best friend they both are looking all family and finally they both came front of there parent and asking papa why every one is crying listing manvi name

Ansh : Don't cry papa manvi will comming this house only after marrying me I will not go with her in her house I have in seen film girl came boy house after marriage boy are not going girl house so stop crying I am not leaving u all

Sia : Sia start cry and I will not marry any boy I will not live u pls mom ,pls papa I don't want marry

Virat ,Viren,Jeevika all family member shock listing kids talk and said what

Sia : Yes moma and papa she what Ansh girl are going boy house after marriage and I also seen in film pls pls I will listen u r all things but don't marry me

All family didn't understand and started laughing seeing and listing Ansh and Sia talk

J : Jeevika came Sia and wipe her tear u told u getting marring u r so small when u grown that time we will see ok now stop crying neither I call boy for marrying u

Sia : Immediately wipe her tear and so u not marry me see not I stop crying but Ansh also small why u are ready for marriage then

Vn : U told u that we are crying for Ansh marriage purpose looking at sia

Sia : Looking at Ansh

Virika call Ansh near them all family sit on sofa and seening Ansh and Sia drama they no they both are Such drama king and queen like manvi

Vn : U told u we are crying because u getting marrying

Ansh : No one

J : then

Ansh : When I say I meet Manvi and make her my girlfriend I want to marry her and chachu show me photo so I thought saying(innocently)

V : Bhai this u r son u didn't exchange him hospital

Vn : I think u r right Virat and looking Jeevika he is our son Jeevika
he didn't exchange

J : Virenji what are u talking

Vn : Its seriously he is only 3 years and talking like look at at him
what he was saying

Sb : In today world kids are so smart and intelligence they learn all the thing very easily

Vn : But badi ma see his age and so fast in first he make manvi GF and he want marry her and bring this house while little laughing

V : oh ye she my Gf and my best friend not u r cut in btw ansh

Ansh : chachi do come btw me and manvi she my Gf

Sia : and she my Gf and my best friend not u r so stay away from our manvi do u get that

virat stunned and all family member are laughing looking virat face he fighting Ansh and Sia

V : Ansh she is my u don't come btw us

Ansh : no she my gf

V : my

Ansh : my

All family looking Virat and ansh and listing there conversation and start laughing they all are able to control there laugh

Sia : looking at chachu and Ansh and came btw them stand and said she is my Gf and best friend not u r looking at her moma and said right mooma

J : Nod her head

Virat and Ansh looking sia and then eachotherand saying no she my

Vn : Viren came front will controlling his laugh said she all of us she will come this ok and looking at virat and said u r fighting with small kid just stop behaving kid ok

V : bhai u son trying come btw me and manvi he want to marry looking at Ansh she is my I will bring her and I will marry her showing him tongue

Ansh : No I will marry her he also showing tongue his chachu

All are laugh loudly

V : Virat give look and move in his room

Ansh : Move his papa and tell him that he will not make chachu marry her manvi

Vn : Viren nod his while laughing and ok beta

Ansh : looking his papa innocently and ask why u laughing and looking at his moma she also laugh he doesn't understanding

After so long all family member are laugh like after so long all get happiness they see old virat ,viren ,and jeevika all are thinking just manvi name taken in this house see our house become happy today everyone is happy the house become again live

All are done there dinner and they go to there sleep but sleep far way from they waiting that wednesday should come fast and they should meet manvi

Virat room
V: manvi I so happy when I hear u r hear near me now I will make u my again and I promise I will give all happiness which u deserve this time I never brought single tear in u r eye ans ha stay away from Ansh he so smart

Next Day

Vn : viren is ready to leave office its 11 :30am and he still in house
he so happy seeing virat ,jeevika and all family member happy so he decide he will with the for some more time because he have meeting 12 :30 with Mr.Prem Kapoor

J : U ready Virenji for office

Vn : Yes Jeevika and bye

J : bye

Ansh and Sia : Papa u going to office

Vn : yes

Ansh & Sia : Bring us Chocolate

Vn : ok Beta

And Viren leave for office

Kapoor Mansion

PK : Manvi are u ready we getting late beta see 12 :10pm here only and have meeting with mr .viren vadhera at 12:30pm come soon

Sk : u taking manvi with u

Pk : Yes she told me that she also join with this her dream to make there second house for that people who doesn't get love more and elder doesn't love from there children she make them together so they could share there love

Sk : ok

Simmi : But she still have little fever yesterday

Pk : I know beta but u know how stubborn she is its better she come with me

Simmi : Ok uncle I am happy if she happy

M : coming I ready Dad sorry for late

Pk and M leave house and going to meet Viren vadhera for there land case purpose

Vn : 1 pm where they are I given them time is 12 :30pm its half hour pass I have another meeting also he called his other client change his meeting time with them he was very angry

Se : Sir Mr. Kapoor and his daughter came to meet u for meeting purpose

Vn : Send them inside

Pk : Looking here there and ask manvi where is our file

M : manvi looking and she remimder that she forget file in car she take car key from her dad and tell her dad u go I will come with file

Pk : Nod his head and move Viren cabin and knock the door

Vn : Come in

Pk : Sorry Mr .Viren Vadhera for coming late

Vn : its ok u at least inform me because I also another meeting while he saying all these he get cutof in btw

M : Sorry Mr .Viren vadhera we know are late but comming late is my mistake not my dad mistake actually I have fever so I taken medicine and because of medicine I get up late

Vn : Viren is stunned seeing her and said manvi in low voice which cann't get here them

Part 7 finish

Any grammatical mistake pls forget I update very fast and tell me should I continuous this story or I should discontinuous I no my update is not up to mark because I am not writer If u don't like tell me I will stop my story here only because I don't to force any body to ready my story while sending pm

Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago

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JESMY

@JESNIA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

AWESOME.😊
LOVED IT.😃
LOVED THE VIRAT-ANSH FIGHT.😆
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART😊

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

First of all , i m first to comment ... Hahhh!!!!! Now about ff , as always its wndrful, dear !!!!! Luv the update ,specially virat and ansh part !!!! All vadhera are same ... But feel happy for them,after a log time they are so happy n only name of manvi bring their happiness !!!!!! Amzing last part ... Manvi entry in viren's office !!!!! Do cntnue ,want to knw whats next ?!???? Thanks alot for pm,dear !!!!!!!! Keep rocking ******

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Awesome Update..!!

Ansh is cute and like their fight..n Maanvi in front of Viren...eeks..Waiting for next nThanks for the PM!

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

awesome update

luved it

sia and ansh are so cute

loved virat and ansh's cute fight for maanvi

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

owww
this is getting really excited, what happend to manvi????
continue soon

thanks for pm

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lujeyn9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it
Thanx 4 pm
Continue sooon😊

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

the kiddos and virat's convo and excitment was fun ...
manvi meets if she knows then why she approached him ...
waiting for reactions ...
update next part soon nd thanx alott for the pm 😃

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