Virman SS: I will make u my again one day - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Nice Teaser..Waiting fr the Update n Thanks for the PM!



very soon I will update and thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

nice precap
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

wow super precap dear...excited fr virman meeting...do update soon dear😊
once again sorry fr late comments dear and also thanks a lot for the pm dear😊



thanks and for virman meeting there is a time
may be after 2 update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1



thanks and for virman meeting there is a time
may be after 2 update


wow no problm dear will wait fr that to happn😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 6



After talking to Virat Virka came in there respective room and viren is happy because finally Jeevika and family forgive Virat because he know how much he was suffer after manvi left and all truth came front him

Vn : Jeevika I am happy u and family member forgive him I know u must thinking how selfish
I am but I also have feel bad when Virat through out manvi out of house I also angry on him but I have seen him he broke to much when he get to know truth and he was in guilt not trusting Manvi and I have seen he search her like a mad and he still have hope she will come back his life one day because he know more him she love him she trust him and he is still searching her I hope u understand me and my situation while looking Jeevika he is saying her with tear eye


J : I know Virenji he is in guilt he suffer to and still he suffering and I know he is still not loose hope he still searching her with this hope this he will find Mannu but I was upset and angry more than Virat to me because I am her elder when she was going bad phase in her life I have not seen that I was so happy in my world that I have not seen what problem mannu is facing I hate myself so much

Vn : No Jeevika don't blame u r self I am also fail to notice that how Virat and Manvi marriage going in bad phase without doing anything Manvi as suffer a lot but know we get her back we will searching her when we will get her we will not allow to live us again while teary smile he say Jeevika

J : Nod her head

All family are fill little happy seeing now there life is started in right track they are forgive Virat and they are happy to see Jeevika also forgive Virat but deep down they still waiting for Manvi to come there life so there life will be complete

Kapoor Mansion


M : Dad I pack my luggage u finish u r and packing and very is mom I am searching her since where she done packing or not we are not only going Chandigarh for land case we are also having Bhai engagement in our Chandigarh kapoor Mansion and where is simmi still she not come when she will come

PK : Manvi beat relax everything is ready and simmi and u r mom also coming there both are gone temple and regarding packing purpose all done ok

A : Dad take care u r self and mom and my little sister mannu also I heart is not allow to leave mannu without my self how could I leave without her

PK : Laugh Arjun u r mannu going with us she is not going for her marriage and leaving u so just relax

SK : What happen here why u pulling my son leg

PK : Ask u r son he is caring like a child

Sk : I know he love Manvi so much so not able leave without her but don't worry beta u also joining after few day

A : Take care don't allow her to rom here and there and if feel dizzy u will call me immediately
and I will come there

M : Haww bhai I am not small I grown up girl
don't take tesion about me just concentration in u r work and come soon Chandigarh ok

A : Take care u r self u know u r life I can't afford to loose u because I can't live without if any thing happen to u

M : Bhai I will take care

Sound came from back and What about me see mom and dad u r son not love me

S : Manvi u r bhai doesn't care me see he was not asking anything about

A : who told u that I didn't love I really love u a lot
buy u know na how much I am worried about mannu

S : I know I know I just joking she not only life but she my also life and she my friend and very soon I became her Bhabhi

also while Hugging Manvi Simmi saying all this all are seeing all this happy

M :U know bhabhi u r world best babhi in this world while hugging Mnavi saying to simmi

while saying bye Arjun Kappor and Kundra family leave for Chandigarh only Arjun and Rohan left in Mumbai because they both are just not only friend or not only Jiju and saala but also
business Panther they are in mumbai because they some business meeting

After some hour Kappor and Kundra family reach Chandigarh because Monday Prem Kapoor have meeting with Viren Vadhera so they came 2 days before because they want also want to make engagement arrangement

M : Dad this is such nice palace whenever I reach here I got a different attachment from this Palace

S : I know u like this palace very right and while saying she remember something and immediately call Arjun to say that they all reach in Chandigarh safely and Manvi also fine

After informing Arjun and Rohan Kapoor and Kundra family got freshen up and finish there dinner they all are gone to sleep

Next Morning all are take bath and finish there breakfast

M : Mom dad I am going out near children Park

Pk : ok beta but come soon don't be late u are suppose to with simmi for shopping today itself u know

M : yes dad I will come soon bye mom bye dad

Manvi came children park for fun and doing some masti with kids she today is a sunday kids are coming bye this to play in park and while Manvi is playing with children there is small boy looking her continuous and Manvi saw him and she going to talk to him

M : I am Manvi what u r name

Small boy : My name is Ansh and u r so bitful (Beautyful)

M : laugh So Ansh do u like to be my friend

Ansh : No I want to u make u my gulfrnd (girlfriend) and I am u r boyfriend

M : Haw what u want make me u girl friend

Ansh : ansh nod his head and saying yes

While Ansh and Manvi conversation going on Sia came running while searching her brother Ansh because she kick the ball and And was running to take a ball while flowing ball he see manvi

Sia : Ansh what are u doing here I am waiting u from long time where is ball she looking here there she not notice manvi because her all concentration searching ball only

M : manvi was looking her and saying u soo cute and adorable

Ansh : she is my sister Sia and call Sia and saying meet my girlfriend Manvi

Sia : open mouth girlfriend

Ansh : look my girl friend so beautiful know

M : when I say I am u girl friend

Sia keep her hand on hip looking Ansh

Ansh : U not say no also

Sia keep her hand on hip again look Manvi

M : Manvi smile ok I am u r girl friend and u r my boy friend ok happy and sia u will also became my friend

Sia : Girl friend

M : see I am girl and u also girl so become best friend ok

Sia : while smile extend her little hand for shake and say friend

Ansh : Ansh immediately forward his hand for shake

M : Manvi kiss Sia and Ansh on there cheek
and when she kiss Sia called u are so much beautiful and while kissing Ansh she say u r such sweet

After sometime Manvi remember she want to going shopping to simmi she forget the time while playing kids and talking to Ansh and Sia
She say Ansh bye handsome hunk and sia bye beautiful while she going Ansh ran to her and ask when she will them again Sia also looking and ask when u will meet again will play a lot of game together

M : Wednesday ok bye

Ansh and Sia say bye to manvi but Ansh keep his little hand where manvi kiss him and he so happy and smile looking like this Sia start laughing

Vm : who came with her grand children in children park she get little tension when she not seen her grandchildren and she shout there name in park

Sia Come running but walking slowly slowly keeping his hand on cheek

Vm : Looking his Ansh and ask sia what happen to ansh and sia explain everything in her kiddish tone while listien all this Vm Start laughing and take them home

When they reach home Jeevika who was talking with Virat and Viren how search Manvi she heard door bell and on of servant open the door Jeevika give smile looking her kids and Vm Sia Came and run to Her father and Vm also

J : Vm where is Ansh

Vm : He is coming see there

J : Jeevika see Ansh and ask Ansh beta what happen to u r cheek why u kept hand on u r cheek Sia beta what happen to u r brother looking at Ansh and try to move his hand from cheek but Ansh is not ready to move his hand from cheek

Sia : Moma Ansh make a gulfrnd (girlfriend) and she kiss on ansh cheek

everyone is looking at ansh start laughing

J : Ansh its true

Ansh : Yes moma she soo bitful(beautiful) and she call me handpump (handsome) and punk (Hunk)

Sia : She called me Cutee and bitful (beautiful)

Ansh : Moma I will marry her

Virat ,Viren, and jeevika and all family look him in shock and ask what and start laughing loudly

Ansh : moma why everyone is laughing on me she really nice and beautiful

J : ok ok stop laughing all while she controlling her laugh and tell him see know no one is laughing at u

Sia :moma ansh is right see so nice and beauty ful I also like her and know she is my also girlfriend and best friend both

all are turn to sia and they again started laughing
u also make her u girlfriend

Sia : innocently nod her head and said not only girlfriend I make her best friend also

J : while controlling her laugh and ask what her and she is u r age

Ansh & sia : No She is big like u and her name is manvi

When everyone heard Manvi name from kids mouth all are shock and happy (Ansh and Sia didn't know how there massi chachi looking because never saw her photo all family member kept the photo in room where virat first virat room after Manvi left he change is room and take the promise when Manvi come he will that room with her only and he kept one photo in his purse and one photo frame in cupboard and jeevika kept Manvi photo in cupboard when ever she want to look photo she open cupboard and look photo and kept there again ) they are thinking
may be she there Manvi virat rush toward them ask kids while showing his purse where he kept Manvi photo

V : This is same Manvi u have meet her

All Family Member looking kids

Ansh & Sia : Together they say yes

Ansh : This is my girl friend photo how u got her photo give it to me she my girlfriend

All family are happy listing there kid meet manvi
Viren rush them and ask

Vn : U know where she living

Ansh & Sia : Didn't understand why all elder are equire about there girl friend and best friend

Sia : why u r asking papa

Vn : Because we want to meet her

Ansh : Regarding for my marriage

V : Oye she will be not marrying u she not u girl friend she my girl friend and my best friend

Ansh : know she my girlfriend

Sia : She my girl friend and my best friend

Vn : ok stop tell where u meet her

Ansh And Sia : Children park where we for playing with Vm

V : Vm u see her ma please tell me na

J : also rush pls tell me ma u seen her

Vm : No beta I not seen her I have sit in one bench and this kid are palying in children park

Vn : when u going to meet manvi again

Ansh & Sai : Innocetly saying we are meeting her on Wednesday

All are happy knowing about Manvi and there waiting when Wednesday come and they will meet her and bring her home


Such long update part 6 finish
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Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Update..!!! loved the kids...n yes Ansh directly asked Maanvi to be his GF..didn't want to waste time...how nice...n then their sweet litlle conversation..very adorable...Like it...Finally every 1 knows Maanvi is here...Eager when they would come face to face...but Maanvi has no idea abt her past..Continue soon n Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
owww ansh and sia are too cute,
so manvi call the other family mom and dad, has she lost her memory???
nice part and thanks for pm
and continue soon pleasee😊 i need answers😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ansh sia and manvi's part was sooo cute and these two kiddos are jst sooo adorable 😃
and manvi and her bro and bhabhi 's bond isreally good 😃
excited for virman meeting wanna see their reaction ..
update sooon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved Sai and ansh part
continue soon
thanks for the pm
sent you buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the kids, they are sweet...
all got to know that Manvi is here But I'm waiting for reaction when they come face to face
Loved it
thanx 4 for the PM
update soon...waiting for next

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