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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's another twist! Well khushi I'm wid u if u hav decided to make arnies life hell! He should realize the consequence of his doing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow superb updates loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update
Love the concept
Do pm me pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice FF. Its concept is fresh and exciting one. Please keep me updating with PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really love the concept of the story,,,,,
dis is really somthing new to read...
eagerly waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
interesting ff
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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C'mon khuhsi make his life damn hell
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update...so khushi want to teach him a lession for his mistake...Payal also going to be a raizada bahu...
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for all my friends who commented. I dont know when i could update. Whenever i update i will surely send you all pms. Pakka. Love you buddies.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey all again late update sorry...😔but i hope that this will make you happy.😊. here you go...


Part 5

At mandir

Khushi and payal get into the mandir and prayed to DM. khushi in her mind "hey DM you have changed my life in just one second and now they are agree to make me as their bahu. I dont know what he thinks about me. But I will never let him live in peace. So you have to be always with me. Pls DM raksha karna". She came out of the trance when she felt payal touching her hand. "khushi, shall we go now. They will be reaching. If we got late then buaji will kill us". "ya jiji, let us go". They returned to their home.

At RM

Anjali was arranging everything for sakun and checking them for the last time. Then syam came near her." Rani sahiba, why are you panicking everything is alright. You got everything for sakun. So chill". " I know that you will say this, how could I chill, this is the first step to my chotte's marriage. So I want everything to be perfect."

"but anjali, mm sakun is for khushi then why are you taking this much things for sakun. Dont you think that it is so much." "I know that it is so much. But this is not only for khushi but for some one else too". " some one else? But who". "actually, akash's parents had called me yesterday. They tell me some secrets. You know, akash is in love with payal. They said me to take sakun for payal too from their part. They want to be get him married with chotte."

"so, akash know this?" " no he had just said to them that he likes her dont said that he loves her. But they came to know about this from his mentions about payal. So we are planning a surprise for both of them." " wow anjali, that will be really funny to see their faces. Did you informed akash to come with us?" " ya ofcourse, I already informed him. You know he was so happy to come with us, and I know the reason". " no now we know the reason dear" he winked at her and she blushed and hit him on his chest playfully. Then they saw akash was coming and suddenly changed the topic. Mamiji came to their tip topped and askes " HHBB anjali bitiya tells me how I look?"

" you look stunning mamaiji" said anjali grinning. " aree nazar na lage humein" she said and put a kala tika behind her ear herself. Evry one laughed at that and nani and mamaji came saying" sab thayyari hui?" "ji mamaji, everything is fine" then lets move. Everyone left for GH.

At GH

Buaji and amma were running here and there arranging everything. In the midst buaji was yelling at payal and khushi both were at khushi's room. Payal was wearing a green churidar and looking beautiful in it. Khushi was insisting her to wear a saree instead of churidar as khushi was already wearing the purple saree. But payal refused to wear saying it is khushi's day not her. Payal thought that her khushi has came to old mood. That chirpy and lovely khushi, thinking this she smiled to herself looking at khushi.

Raizadas reached GH and made their way inside. They got a warm welcome from guptas. They sit of chairs. Khushi with payal was brought to the hall and sit near anjali and nani. Payal was standing at there and akash was staring at her. Payal looked at him and smiled. Both were happy. They were served with chai and snacks. Everyone were in the hall then buaji noticed the huge amount of sakun thal and she asked . "what was the necessity to bring these much in shakun" asked buaji." Actually we came here not only for khushiji but also payal too" anjali chuckled and looked at payal who was standing near the table. "so these shakun is for both of them." "kya?" akash asked that unknowingly that he is getting trapped. " kyun akash what happened to you why did you ask so?" asked a smirking syam. "wo, mein." He gulped and looked at payal. She was also shocked to the fact that for whom they are proposing her. Khushi was happy that now her jiji will also get a partner. Anjali took a deep breath and said " aksh dont worry this is from your parents side that we are proposing payal, only for YOU" she chuckled giving stress to the you part. Now akash was blushing like payal. Both looked very cute at that moment. Khushi gasped at them and asked " jiji, you were in love with akashji, then why didnt you said to me?" these made both akash and payal blush more and they keep quite looking into each others eyes. Anjali answered for that" wo bath yeh hai khushiji ki they both even dont know about their love so we parents thought to give them a surprise like this."

Mami said" anjali bitiya yeh tho bada hi surprise tha ab tho mucha lagtha hai ki in donon ko ek bar bath karne keliye bhejni chahiye" " ha manorama thumne ek dum sahi bola, javo bacho bathein karke aavo"nani said with a smile in her face. Both family were happy to see akash and payal going together to talk. They continued to talk abou the roka and shadi.

Payal and akash were looking at each other but they got nothing to talk about. Finally akash spoke" paya, I dont know that my parents asked anjali di to propose you. But whatever they did I am happy, what about you? Do you love me and with me in my life forever?" " akashji, I liked you from beginning I dont know about does I love you or not. But I will be happy when I get you as my husband. You are a nice person." " thank you payal, then we may go to the hall" payal nodded and joined them in the hall. When payash reached the hall the raizada family stood up and said " so everything is fixed. Roka will be on the coming Sunday and shaadi will be after two weeks. Both family were happy on the decision that they want the marriage as soon as possible. Because the neighbours were used to talk about khushi's marriage. Raizadas bid bye to guptas. They loved both the girls a lot. They invited them to come RM for roka and they left. Khushi had forgotten her pain in her jiji's happiness. She was in a teasing mood and teased payal saying akash's name. all of them were happy after two days of their sadness. They started the preparations to roka.

Precap:" chotte khushi ji line pe hai. Bath karo unse. " saying this she hand over the phone to arnav. On the other side khushi heared it and cut the phone instantly do not want to talk him anything. Arnav pasted a smile on his face and took the phone. When his di left the room he cut the call unknowingly that the call was already dismissed. Both of them were happy that they thought the one in the other side was insulted.

how was it. pls comment and let me know.

part 6 on page 11

Edited by sarun9 - 12 years ago

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