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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Loved it...well written...can imagine arnav getting scared...waiting for khushis story to be revealed...if Shyam was cruel as person ..how cruel will he be as a soul...?

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

grrr🤔
hurrr😡
unres~~~~
god duffer its really interesting.😲😲😲😲.
but why the hell this much short
i want long updatewa.😡😡😡...
pics were really horrible typo🤔...
but me a brave gal so no fearwa😳😳😳...
arnav back to the hotel.😲😲😊😊..
wow!!! any chance of Khushi's rebirth?😕😕😕??
i mean when dt creepwa shyam s here then khushi have to be anywhere nah for my arnie boy😳😳😳😳...
cant wait to hear Khushi's story😳😳...
pls reveal it soonwa duffer...😡

Edited by aNkItA.C - 12 years ago

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

nice dear😊

arnav back in hotel😲

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Aasmaali

@Aasmaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Wow mohit, bravo 👏
Loved it...
Eagerly waiting
Update soon 😉

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

OMG...well that was nice...thanks for the pm...

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

u just leave us in the cliff.
Again so many questions.
Give answer sn.
Fantastic updt
poor arnie dont hav a companion.
Tht letter was by khushi,i think.
Pics was superb,scary
If i get a scary bg song too, it wil b like a movie.
Waiting 4 ur next updt.
Thx 4 the pm.

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

this time i managed read this at mid night
you are doing a great job
the suspense is awesome
who is that woman?
so arnav saw a hanging girl and then a skull.. interesting
and then that letter
when will khushi come to the picture?
continue soon

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Wow super exciting .update soon

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SangArshian4eva

@SangArshian4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

res

unresed

i was about to read the update in night itself thank god i didn't read if i would have read it then i would have experienced a sleep less night yesterday.

so now coming to the update

arnav back in the hotel

really that door scene was scary i was feeling like i am arnav and i am experiencing it.

even i could hear tak! tak! sound of the shoes.

oh god that girl hanging.

that skull oh god it looked scary

even i was thinking the same that lady told that arnav is the one who has to save that girl who is trapped in the hotel but the girl itself is telling arnav to go then how will he help her

iam eager to know the story please give the next update soon

thanks 4 the PM

please continue soon

Edited by Sangu18412 - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

wow so am guessing shyam then is the one who has trapped her
or is there someone else involved
guess we shall know in time
is khushi gonna help him help her
and was is that lady arnie keep bumping into have to do with all this
too much confusion thats for sure
cheers for pm
will arnie be able to help her