#2 A KASHIAN'S DIARY..author's note/pg 140+SEE INDEX FOR THD3 - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akh20

Okk read late but amazing description of feeling likes real not fiction...

now that's a huge compliment for me!!! thank you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Amazing os ..

Loved it ...

thank you so much!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: guptaaesha

Absolutely Beautiful that os was
I had goose bumps reading last para :')
Romantic..!!
Kitne honestly usne saari baate uss letter me likhi without fake promises :) kitna innocent lag raha tha armaan.and shilpa...that was so obvious that she will have tears in her eyes,even I had 😳
You're Beautiful writer kittu 😊
Thnx for pm

you got goose bumps? like actually? WTH!!!! that means i am actually a good writer!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you so so sooo much!!!!!!!
and haan, i saw ur scrap, but couldn't reply coz of lack of time, college sucks these days..itna kaam..presentations..projects...everything's very busy...anyhow, aapke college ka kya hua? kahan phenkne waale h aapko?😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kritika_24

you got goose bumps? like actually? WTH!!!! that means i am actually a good writer!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you so so sooo much!!!!!!!
and haan, i saw ur scrap, but couldn't reply coz of lack of time, college sucks these days..itna kaam..presentations..projects...everything's very busy...anyhow, aapke college ka kya hua? kahan phenkne waale h aapko?😳😳

oye also u got a new dp??!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

pahli baar kisiko is topic ko lekar likhte padha but not bad kritika...actually arsh ko lekar kuch bhi likho ,bahut khubsurat ban jata hai...aur tumhari likhne ki style usey aur bhi khubsurat bana deti hai...loved the whole...love kash...

punam

thank you so uch di!!! your comments are always so special!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just read bunking periods and will u marry me together..and girl, u always leave us speechless...or shall i say wordless 😆 awesome work..specially the earlier one...the mood swings explained awesomely...wish every girl an armaan as characterized in that OS 😉 [/QUOTahan! now leaving speechless and getting just the perfect comments from you, that's exactly what i aim for😉😉
thank you so much!!
next one on the way!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyworld

awe they are sooo cute...

and i loved it as always !
ty for the pm !

thank you so much!!
keep reading ahead!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

That was fabulous os..

It was really different kind of proposal from Armaan..
But it was so cute.. loved it..
sorry for commenting late.

at least you commented yaar! thank you so much!!! m glad u lykd it so much!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey YOU( since you don't want to be named here!) i wanted to write that KaSh interview wala os, but you see college life sucks (no it doesn't, its just busy) and since i have many presentations and projects and assignments and tests lined up, i don't even know when will i be able to write it.
my teacher rejected my whole project and now he expects me to make it all over again! and he was trying to be so sweet, patting my head, and shaking hands, and smiling.. huh huh huh.
so anyhow, all m saying is that...wait! till then enjoy this one...written it long back...



GOOD NIGHT

He entered the pitch dark room to find her slept peacefully under the covers. He threw his brief case on the setee and removed his tie. Loosening his shirt and opening the button of his jeans, he entered the bed and spooned her. She turned around and kissed his lips. "I don't wanna talk to you...itna late aate hain armaan?"

"kaam tha na jana..."

"tum aur tumhara kaam...door ho jao muhjse!" she huffed angrily and wrapped both her arms around his neck kissing it and closing her eyes again...

"I love you too" he softly whispered near her forehead and closed his tired eyes...

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"karan volume kam kar do..." she gathered his perfumes and hair gels and started setting them properly on the dressing table while he was on the bed watching tv...he decreased the volume for a moment, only to bring it back to normal the next.

"karan theek se leto fir back me dard hoga..." she now moved to arrange his shirts in the cupboard while he changed his position, only to drag back to his comforatble back aching position in a moment...

"jana phone beep ho raha hai...please charge pe laga do..." she drew the curtains and he looked at the charger, then at the phone, they seemed too far from the bed. He simply continued with watching tv...

"band kar doon tv?" she asked putting the phone on charge...he himself switched it off with the remote as he now shifted on his side to sleep... "hmmm..."

She switched off the lights and moved to the bed... "shit I can't see anything.." she whined and he stretched out his hand to her. She held onto it and climbed on the bed moving closer to him and hugging him...

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"sone chale?" he asked leaning on the kitchen wall...

"haan tum change karlo main ye plates bas wash kar doon.."

"kya pehenna hai?" he switched off the living room tv and started going upstairs...

"mera sir.."

"nahi I think aaj vo black three fourths hi pehen leta hoon...tumhe upar se odh lunga!" he winked at her and moved upstairs to the bedroom...

She reached the bedroom only to find it pitch dark and him already sleeping. She quietly slipped in and wrapped both her arms around him, like a blanket...

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She watched the notebook' while he massaged her legs with oil. She kept the popcorn bowl on her tummy roaming her hand searching for the remote, her eyes still glued on the tv. He noticed, and kept the remote near her hand, she grabbed it and put the tv on mute and leaning back into the bed post...she gradually slid down and he helped her settle on the bed, then went back to massage her swollen legs.

She closed her eyes and brought his hand from her leg into her hand, entwining them together and kissing his. "you're going to be the best father in the world dr. armaan mallik!"

"good night!" he murmured and pecked her lips...

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She had started the fight. So now, going to him didn't seem appropriate. She turned and looked back at him. He seemed to be fast asleep. Okay, now this was quite safe. He wouldn't get to know anything. She carefully shifted closer to him, opened his arms accordingly, fitted herself within him, kissed his chest, now feeling relaxed and closed her eyes wrapping his arms around herself.

She felt a smile and a kiss on her head as the arms tightened and one of his legs possessively held both of hers in place.

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"you can't cross this line" she ordered arranging the line of pillows in the centre of the bed.

"and why's that?" he asked throwing them on the floor one by one.

She huh'd at him for this badtameezi and turned to the side. "you should know better..."

"shilpa...you are not allowed to eat ice creams...and we are not arguing on it again..."

She huh'd again and pretended to sleep...

He held her from the back and kissed her shoulder... "no ice creams till the delivery and no more discussion on it..." he kept an arm on her swollen tummy and she kept her hand over his... "I hate you"

"love you too" he kissed her shoulder again...

"bad night!"

"good night!" he kissed her neck and nuzzled his head there...

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He carried a fast asleep shilpa in his arms. Opening the lock single handedly, he somehow managed to sneak in carefully so she wouldn't wake up. He moved to the bedroom and made her lie down. He removed her sandals and opened the zip of her black off shoulder dress.. he undressed himself and slipped in with her. "armaan thand hai.." she murmured sleepily and he brought her closer to him. Rubbing her almost bare back now, he fitted her legs between his and she kissed his neck...her warm breaths soothing him as well...

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She sat on the bed, lied two dinner plates in front of her. She ate from one, and feeded angel from the other. Since he was already done, he changed his clothes and cleared all of angel's toys from the floor...

"ek toh itna khana nahi hota toh plate me mat dalwaya karo karan...tum khaa- pi ke nikal jaate ho and mujhe khatm karna padta hai ye saara...roz ka yehi hai...ya to fir kal se take a separate plate."

"mummmaaa..." whined angel indicating her protest to eat the next bite.

"abhi iska ye naatak...karan tum khilao fir angel ko... main ye baaki dishes rakh ke aati hoon..."

Angel who was already sleepy, was asleep in karan's arms when shilpa returned to the room and karan was looking at both the plates. "tum khatm kar do na aaj..." he pouted and shilpa rolled her eyes.

"ssshhh...uth jayegi.." karan tried to suppress the topic by changing it to angel's sleep. Shilpa rolled her eyes, yet again.

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. He entered the room as quietly as he could so riddhima wouldn't be disturbed. She was half lying on the bed with some romantic novel in her hand and had fallen asleep reading it. He kept his files on the table and went in the washroom to change his clothes.

He softly came up next to her and was helping her lie down properly when she opened her eyes sleepily... "hey you're back..."

He smiled and kissed her forehead... "hmmm...you lie down properly..."

"nah...I ain't sleepy anymore..lets talk?" she sat up properly again. He nodded and lied down on the bed with his head in her lap. She stroked his hair lovingly while he kissed her tummy... "how's my baby doing?"

"very good..." she smiled and continued... "armaan its only a few weeks left now...I am so excited...our life will totally change after this baby na..."

"hmm...it will...change for the better.." he kissed her tummy again... "oye how do you like mihika as a name?" he looked up at her and asked...

Riddhima- mihika? How are you so sure its gonna be a daughter only? What if it's a boy?

Armaan- who's the father of the baby? You or me? Me na? toh mujhe pta hai! Tum bas ye batao ke mihika naam kaisa hai?

Riddhima- acha hai...par mahika is also good na vaise toh...

Armaan- mahika? Is that even a name? you made it up yourself basket! No...its not a name...mahira is a name...not mahika...

Riddhima- haan to mahira is nice na...and its stylish too...

Armaan- to mihika me kya kharabhi thi? Mahira sounds so much like myra...I don't want people to confuse my baby's name with someone else's.

He wrapped his arms around her waist and kissed her once again...

Riddhima-aur myra me kya problem hai? myra sounds good...yeah...i like it...

...and they went on discussing names for their daughter...then shifting to how many kids do they want after this baby...then shifting to how painful it is for riddhima and easy for armaan...then turning to the next week's plan of shopping then to baby's clothes and room dcor and toys and this and that and ye and vo...I didn't listen to it all okay, I fell asleep. Good night!


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Posted: 12 years ago
AMazing n lovely drabbles,loved it n thanks for the pm:)

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