SWARON SS- ETERNAL LOVE - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Nyc update just waiting next PART
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
Ahh hope sharon will be fine
Waiting for next part
Update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4-

Precap- a bomblast takes place near Sharon's father's hospital Swayam and Sneha suspects Sharon to be a victim of it and became upset..!!! Sneha realizes her mistake, reveals her truth to Swayam and decides to mend her mistake and make swaron meet !!!

With a shivering body Sneha opens the door of Mr. Raiprakash's private cabin and the sight in front of her makes her cry!! And she breaksdown near the door unable to control herself anymore !!! While swayam enters the place with a horrified expression on his face and there she was his angel, his love of life, his beautiful innocent Sharon ."She has suffered major injuries on her head and arms and the accident which took place infront of her has given her a mild heart attack!!" informed the nurse beside her!! Swayam just nodded and came forward, kissed her on her forehead and sat beside her holding her hands..Tears start to flow down his chocolaty brown orbs..!!
The nurse tried to console him and said-

Nur: Bahut pyaar karte ho Sharon bitiya se..??

Sw: *nodded his head* bahut se bhi zyaada !!

Nur:* smiled * yaha aao!!

She took him to the place where she kept her belongings..!! Her phone, her purse and a gift wrapped in a beautiful wrapper with a piece of paper kept next to it!! She handed her accessories to him and said..:

Nur: Ye ab tumhara hai Swayam!!! Ye tumhe takat dega. Dekhna Sharon bitiya jaldi se thik ho jayegi !!!

Sw: Aap mujhe kaise jaanti hai??

Nur: Sharon meri beti jaise hai beta.Apni har baat aa ke batati thi mujhe!! Mere saath hasti thi aur meri godh mein hi roti thi.Jo pyaar meine uski aakhon mein dekha tha tumhari baat karte hue.. wahi tumhari aakhon mein bhi dekha hai uske liye!!!

He took the things and opened the letter!!! It said:-

Hey Swayam,

Aaj hum pehli baar mil rahe hai.I am very very happy!! I know mein baaki ladhkiyo ki tarah nai hu!! Simple hu shy hu..!! but iss duniya mein tumhe mujhse zyaada pyaar koi nai kar sakta..!! iski guaranty hai mere paas!! I love you..Alot se bhi zyaada..!! ..I didn't know ki tumhe kya pasand hai.!!! But mujhe isse better kuch nai laga tumhe dene ke liye !!! This teddy will our first sign of love!! I love you a lot Swayam!! Happy First Date..!!

He smiled at her angels gestures and opened the present !! There was a cute white teddy...a small hear was tucked to it neck!! With I love you imprinted on it..!!
More tears made their way through his eyes!! He then turned towards the nurse and said..

Sw: Shukriya!! Ab Sharon meri responsibility hai!! Kuch nai hone dunga usse ..tum mujhse dur nai jaa sakti Sharon..Maut se bhi ladhna pade toh ladhunga par apne se dur nai jane dunga tumhe..!! mein khaya rakhunga tumhara I Promise you Sharon!!

Nur: Ro mat beta Sharon Jaldi hi thi ho jayegi!! Aur tum ho na uske saath..

The nurse smiled at him and kept her hand on his head..!!! Handed him an envelope which consisted of Sharon's medicines and an account of the time it should be given to her and without saying a word more moved out of the room..!! Sneha has already left the place as the sight of Sharon's condition was killing her..!! Furthermore she was getting late and it was nor safe for her to be in such a short dress at this hour of night..!! while swayam sat beside Sharon holding her and while kissing them whispered in her ears-" I can't wait anymore to hear your voice and see you wake up with a smile every morning in my arms I am missing you Sweet talks Sharon please come back jaldi se thik ho jao!!! " He cried a lot and prayed to god and while taking care of her fell asleep..!!!

So my dear readers..! I hope you all liked this and are expecting something romantic in the upcoming chapters..!!
so I promise to give you an awechumm update ASAP.
next chapter will be really special and yup..!! kaan pakadh ke srry..!! chahe jitna badha likh lo..!! IF pe chota hi aata hai.

Love,
anny..!!


Note On the next page..!!!
Do read..!!

Edited by anandita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64



well...i just want to say that i am very disheartened by the response i am receiving...!! as a writer i expect from you guyzz something much more...!!! as a reader (people who really like this ss) i know that you guyzz want updates so i am updating but small chapters because i really don't want to continue this SS as it takes alot of pain to write 4-5 long pages for one update and then edit and PM it to approx 50 peoples and then you receive no response ...!! so from hereon i won't keep any demands as they are not fulfilled and will update according to me...!!

if you want long and regular updates ... then srry but i want better response varna..im really unhappy...!!!

Regards,
anny..
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Edited by anandita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
res, tu really mar khayegi😡😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
superb...
loved this update...
true love is justified!!!
pl ab jaldi update karo...
falling for this more and more!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res.. Aur jab tak mera ss post nhi hota unres nhi krungi.. Huh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Update was superb !

Lovely...story

Swayam talking to Sharonw as...awiiee...!
thanks to nurse...:)

PS- hey dont be dishearten i know what it feels..when response is less...
but keep writying u write awesumly,.
n plz thode aur bade chaps plz plz plz..!
Update next soon...
Love,
Sakshi,.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Awesome update 😊
Swayam taking care of Sharon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was such a sweet update 😊
I loved the letter sharon wrote for swayam 😊
Update next chapter fast plz...

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