Arhi FF: The Matchmaker #5

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Mints23

@mints23

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Hey Afya, first of all -- congrats on a new thread!! 🥳

And HAPPY FRIENDSHIPS DAY!!

The update was brilliant as usual... superb narration... seamless flow and moving of story in an amazing direction (Arhi romance)... This chapter had so many Arhi moments... I could not stop feeling all warm from withing looking at their blooming love... I really hope Arnav does something to tell her what she means to him... Before that snakewa makes a move to ruin their relationship!! 😡

Loved how Khushi is affected by his gaze on her... and he enjoys flustering her too... Awww and he misses Khushi and wants to hear her voice after a tiring day... loved the brotherly conversation and how Arnav is concerned if Akash is happy with the upcoming wedding... Arnav is really caring and loving towards his family... I am loving him these days, especially because he has started pursuing Khushi finally!! 😊

Loved how Arnav missed kHushi all day and wants to see her when he gets home... loved his disappointment of not finding her there and his worry of her being ok as she was not taking his calls... And so our Arnav picks up another banana and heads to meet HIS KHUSHI! The way he was surprised to see her sleeping on the chair... the way he takes her to bed and sleeps besides her was just so adorable... 😳

Loved the comfortable camaraderie between Arnav and her family... how he agrees to have breakfast with them finally... Now Arnav really is getting used to seeing Khushi all the time... I could sense his need to see her all the time... And then Khushi falls ill... I just loved how you described his concern, panic and action of calling the doctor immediately... It is very endearing to see Arnav taking care of Khushi... He sidelines his work to be with her throughout!! ❤️

Totally loved him being stern with her and telling her to rest and eat in the room. And in spite of all this when she was trying to call her sister, he could not help but feel concerned if she had something important to share with her... He senses Khushi's restlessness and despair... He knows somethings is off! And then Khushi asks him about Anjali and he tells her their back-story... I really wish she tells him everything... At the moment she has nothing to lose... But once he admits of his feelings for her, she will start worrying about the future of their relationship!! 😊

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

yaar feel bad for KhushI

I hope no misunderstand there with ArHi... I just hope so

thank you for the lovely update I am waiting for the next part

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Brilliant update...arnav is so cute...hope kushi can get through her problem...continue soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Oh how i wish Khushi speaks about Shyam to Arnav

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

they did didnt they get her married way too quickly

arrey yaar who does this in this day and age

agreed she has a broken marriage and she limps a little but then there aint really anything wrong with her

shaadi karane se phele ek baar check toh karr lete

dont people do that

agreed that she liked shyam but did they check if he can look after her

that he will care for her like they did

and wouldnt cheat on her

okay you cant know about the cheating bit but surely you would check the boy out for sure

just because he helped her out in her trauma dont mean he is really legible for her

and now they shall suffer for their one wrong move

waise i know this could have happened had the had his background checked but at least they would know naa what he was like before giving their daughter away to practically a stranger

see the guptas knew what raizada family is like which is why they gave their dauhgters to them

woh baat alag hai that arhi werent getting along

and when they didnt check they had that mishap didnt they

only when arnie had done check did they find out

okay i must stop rambling on and on about the same right

and get back to arhi

hmmm so it seems he is starting to miss his wife

that he has realised of his love for his wife

and now is trying to tell the same to her also

awww so cute he missed her so much he ended up at her maternal home aww thats what one was waiting for

and the way he looked after her was cute too

there is hope for them yet yipeee

just this shyam problem to be gotten rid of then all shall be fine

cheers for pm

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dazzlerabi

@dazzlerabi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Congrats on new thread!awesome update n love this caring Arnav...hope to see some progress in Arshi relationship..

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ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awesome update
lovd it😊

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

simply superb.loved it
do cont soon

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Arnav wants to see Khushi and she is always surrounded by people! Akash's wedding preparations puts the entire burden of business on Arnav's shoulders and his diet is banana and apple! * Why is Anjali not saying Hey Bhagwan! me bhi aur meri Bhabhi bhi Chotey ko bhool gayi! Don't even know what he ate! Bechara Arnav!* Akash being the Laxman to Arnav's Ram does care about his Bhai. He knows that his Bhai is overloaded with work. He wants to take NK to task for skulking work under the pretext of wedding preparations.😡

Khushi's SMS spurs him to go to GH and guess what he sees!😲Khushi, Jalebi, TV on and deep asleep! What does he do? 😉 Carry her to the bed! What does she do?😃 Catch his shirt tightly! So both go to sleep and in the morning comes the Taekwondo pose. *You know their Taekwondo pose makes a heart shape, their legs, torso and hands outlining it ❤️ ☺️ I am surprised that Arnav bitwaa's sugar level has not gone down!😲 It should have given the minimal amount of food he took after his breakfast the previous day! Kya kamaal he re ye!😲 * But Buaji feeds him well. She finds him too thin and her Titaliya is just about spared from belan poojan due to Arnav's intervention! *Hai Re Nandkisore! Kya kiya Buaji ko aapne!😕*

Arnav wants to talk to his wife and make her understand his changed feelings. But what does he get to do?🤢 Listen to her cough whole night and call the doc in the morning! Pnuemonia! So Arnav Bitwa doesn't want to go to work but Di forces him! * What the Anjali Bitiya! Nobody gives them alone time! That's unfair!😭*

Khushi is bored to be in bed and Jiji is busy on the phone! *Arnav Bitwaa, me ek baath kahoon? Why are you so understanding about Akash and Payal. You know you have doled out a million $ worth advice to Akash, to get to know Payal well. Why is it only an advise? Why not practice it bitwaa?*

So Khushi comes to know that Di met Shyam at a temple and he inveigled into her good books and slithered into her life! For this creep and a half she has to buy an anniversary present! Poor Di stuck with this lecher and poor Khushi stuck with buying a joint present. A present from them both! *What is ailing you bitwaa? Shy??? Then you could always practice in front of mirror. It helps you beta!😉*

VM too matched very well with the story and blended beautifully.👍🏼

Loved the update, Afya. Waiting for the next update.

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago