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soaringskies

@soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Looking forward to read more of this😃

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Did you say first time writer...where have you been girl?
That was beautiful and heart touching start...mothers pain came in waves through the screen..is child is about to be separated from the mother and she is feeding the child for the last time and preparing herself for the pain and separation..it is so sad.

Damakedar start and I know it's going to be one hell of a ride.
Please continue soon.
Bookmarked the page but if you are taking buddy request for PM list let me know.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Thank you Nids for recommendation.

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Wow that was a wonderful opening to the story
It sounds intriguing would loved to read more
Continue soon
PS:thanks nidsubh 007 aka nidhi for recommending this wonderful story
ps2:do pm me if u can

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Very nice start...

Would love to travel with u in this journey...

The child for sure is Khushi right???

Do continue soon...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

oh my God, what a start

loved the prologue

would love to read more

pls continue soon

thx nids for recommending this story

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Great start! Has a wonderful mix of mystery, sadness and a new beginning with a baby! Looking forward to more...

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Very nice , pls do continue. I am sending u a buddy request. 😊

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I have to thank Meera for showing this to us, please continue soon, does not seem like a new writer to me, please PM me with updates

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Wow this plot looks super intriguing. I'm guessing its Khushi & her baby????? Whatever it is, I'm pretty sure just going by the prologue that its going to be a wonderful story. Eagerly waiting for it to commence. Great going dear & keep it up :)

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

interesting prolog... pls continue soon..
can u pls pm me..??

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