Arshi ~Falling Out Of Love~**IMP NEW NOTE** Pg 74 27|6

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dialuvarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

its new.but hope arnav is not a jerk in this.love to read more

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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No doubt its well written and an interesting concept. But I can't digest Arnav cheating on Khushi or whoever his would be wife is. It is too early to say anything. It might be Khushi with him on the bed but why would he agree to marry someone else if he loves the girl with whom he is right now? Its very difficult for me to imagine Arnav in such a character. Right now his character looks similar to that of Shyam. He is all set to cheat his to be wife. U should continue if everyone wishes but I'll not be able to enjoy it as I have a particular image of Arnav in my head and it doesn't match with this Arnav. I m extremely sorry if I m being rude. I hope u understand. All the best for this one 😊

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arshina223

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: risat
No doubt its well written and an interesting concept. But I can't digest Arnav cheating on Khushi or whoever his would be wife is. It is too early to say anything. It might be Khushi with him on the bed but why would he agree to marry someone else if he loves the girl with whom he is right now? Its very difficult for me to imagine Arnav in such a character. Right now his character looks similar to that of Shyam. He is all set to cheat his to be wife. U should continue if everyone wishes but I'll not be able to enjoy it as I have a particular image of Arnav in my head and it doesn't match with this Arnav. I m extremely sorry if I m being rude. I hope u understand. All the best for this one😊

Hey its ok.
Every one has their likes and as i said, i wanted to know everyone's opinion be it good or bad. And as you said its too late say anything and in the prologue nothing is clear. But i respect ur decision to read it or not. Thanks for the honest opinion dear. :)

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: arshina223

Hey its ok.
Every one has their likes and as i said, i wanted to know everyone's opinion be it good or bad. And as you said its too late say anything and in the prologue nothing is clear. But i respect ur decision to read it or not. Thanks for the honest opinion dear. :)

Thanks for understanding. I believe every writer deserves honest opinion from his or her reader. It helps them to understand the view point of the readers and be a better writer. I m again very sorry if I've hurt u but that's how I felt 😳