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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..poor arnav he loves her so much... he hope she will be his real wife and shared his room and everything with her...but she slowly understand her own feeling
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eversince I saw this story I love it. I am following this everyday. I love the way they both are behaving. they are really cute. this is an awesome update. waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

DEAl...sauda...bet...love u DII...u r reminding me again nd again about our IPK... 🤗 🤗 🤗

First I tell u about VM...I never heard this song ever it ws like this song only made for our arshi.BEAUTIFUL VM...u r edited very well ...awesome..heads off to u.👏 👏 👏

I understand khushi insecurities her feeling for arnav.she doesn't know wt he feels for her... nothing about arnav mind...if he ask her about nk on first tym when she enter on his house then things r different today.but d way u r portrait hole story it ws amazing.bhot maza aa rhah ek ek chapter ko padhne main...😊

Arnav is very happy...he is going to share his room to khuhsi but all joy dropped when he heard she is leaving in guest room'AWW...😛 😛 😛

Nd when he dragging her out of her room nd nd there I saw cute romance fight. love I read all those dialogue 10 tym after I finished hole update how can u right like this...r u imaging arshi when u written hole update????..tell me na plzz...😉 😉

When he said .i hope you know people made lov...ha ha ha..she is such a innocent soul she didn't know he is nt taking any type of revenge to heart her feelings...😳

You said what you wanted to say Mr. Raizada. Now let me tell you what is going to happen. I may not be ready today but one day when I am ready I will make sure you personally invite me to your room, until then I am not going to enter..

i hope no want khushi will win this deal at any cost.because arnav nd me both wants she will win...lol.

Nd end of d update last paragraph ws beautiful...

It is supposed to be their first night. And it indeed is for their hearts.

They dwelled into each other thoughts forgetting the rest of the world just like the way newly married couple would do on their first night.

They touched each other with the belief in purity of their body, mind and soul when he called her name and when she heard him call her.

They stayed up all night understanding what they mean to each other not wanting the night to end anytime soon just the like any other newly wedded couple would do on their first night.

In all pure ways, they celebrated their first night and made love without letting the other know and without physically touching the other.

after reading this i ws like i m in heaven...

Beautiful update dii amazing...superb...❤️ ❤️ ❤️


Edited by chetna19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice line up yr next part plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I respect Khushi 4 nt intruding his privacy n giving him his SPACE... 😃

Well, I ws kind of shocked wid Arnav's bewilderment bt den it ws expected... 😛

Arnav Singh Raizada got carried away????? 😲

Nw dis ws a shock... 😲 😲 😲

His words made Khushi uncomfortable bt I again appreciate Khushi 4 handling d situation gracefully... 👏

Two love filled hearts, spent dere 1 nyt separately... 😕

Thinking abt each other, luving each other... ☺️

I wish Khushi wins d BET soon, n Arnav loses dis 1 soon... 😉 😆

Luvd it... ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The VM is even better!!!!!!!!!!!!!
khushi knows how to give it back in the right measure!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update yaar...

Thnx for the Pm and do continue soon...

Whats gonna happen next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.👏 Loved the vm so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
QUOTE=chetna19]

DEAl...sauda...bet...love u DII...u r reminding me again nd again about our IPK...

First I tell u about VM...I never heard this song ever it ws like this song only made for our arshi.BEAUTIFUL VM...u r edited very well ...awesome..heads off to u.

I understand khushi insecurities her feeling for arnav.she doesn't know wt he feels for her... nothing about arnav mind...if he ask her about nk on first tym when she enter on his house then things r different today.but d way u r portrait hole story it ws amazing.bhot maza aa rhah ek ek chapter ko padhne main...

Arnav is very happy...he is going to share his room to khuhsi but all joy dropped when he heard she is leaving in guest room'AWW...

Nd when he dragging her out of her room nd nd there I saw cute romance fight. love I read all those dialogue 10 tym after I finished hole update how can u right like this...r u imaging arshi when u written hole update????..tell me na plzz...

When he said .i hope you know people made lov...ha ha ha..she is such a innocent soul she didn't know he is nt taking any type of revenge to heart her feelings...

You said what you wanted to say Mr. Raizada. Now let me tell you what is going to happen. I may not be ready today but one day when I am ready I will make sure you personally invite me to your room, until then I am not going to enter..

i hope no want khushi will win this deal at any cost.because arnav nd me both wants she will win...lol.

Nd end of d update last paragraph ws beautiful...

It is supposed to be their first night. And it indeed is for their hearts.

They dwelled into each other thoughts forgetting the rest of the world just like the way newly married couple would do on their first night.

They touched each other with the belief in purity of their body, mind and soul when he called her name and when she heard him call her.

They stayed up all night understanding what they mean to each other not wanting the night to end anytime soon just the like any other newly wedded couple would do on their first night.

In all pure ways, they celebrated their first night and made love without letting the other know and without physically touching the other.

after reading this i ws like i m in heaven...

Beautiful update dii amazing...superb...




Chetna, that teddy is sssooo cute. Please please please I want that RIGHT NOW

First of all I am so glad I am able to send you to lala land with this chappy. The song is my fav. I first heard it 4 months ago and I fell in love with it. Then I didnt see the actual visual of the song but I knew when I heard it first, it is made for ArShi to the T. Its taken from movie 3G. Check out the actual video. You may like it. I like the way they took it but different happy emotions.

Did you really read the update 10 times? Thats huge compliment to my writing sweetheart. You just made my day

To answer your question, yes I do visualize ArShi having conversation with each dialogue. Ofcourse I also think alot on the lines of IPKKND to capture how they would emote for different sequences. In my earlier FF: BTS, it wasnt that difficult because I didnt show so much aggression and moreover Khushi was really sweet in that. But here she is as aggressive as ASR is, unlike the original Khushi. So I literally have to deal writing dialogues for 2 ASRs here because both are butt headed personalites. Only difference between Mr. ASR and Mrs. ASR is, he is smart and shrewd but she is smart and innocent And sometimes I do get carried away and end up writing ASR as the most sweetest guy. I have to confess I pay more attention to Arnav's lines (because I just love him, one and only reason) and I do read his lines at least 10 times to make sure I am not portraying him as simple character. At the end of the updates I wanna make sure I justify these 2 characters...

Thats what happens behind the screens my darling :)

Edited by deepthiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so he was expecting her to be in his roo but when he dint find her there...his ASR self dominated but the anger, confusion and attraction are lethal combination...loved the update...just Arhi :)
amazing VM :)

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