ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 3 - COMPLETED

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lilakumariacnw

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Congrats...
Waiting for the update...

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I read this completely today... It's awesome and congrats for third thread.

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Diya Ganguly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Congratulation for new thread..
Waiting for update..

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fleurs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congrats on the new thread 🥳
Eagerly waiting for the update

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dima_a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Congrats on the new thread ...👏👏👏
waiting for update

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Suchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Its Aug 1st.. when you are updating..

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Chetna

@chetna19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

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Firstawesome edition yaar..i loved d way u put sindoor nd magelsutra in khushi's pice ek dam mast..😳 😳

Arnav is hell confused...he thought

What is she talking about? Job or me?

Why the hell she entered my life again?

She never left you at the first place to re-enter! Why is she killing me with her meaningless questions?

She is asking the questions that you are supposed to ask yourself

Why is she not with NK? What does she want from me now?

Ha ha ha ha...lol..😆 😆 😆

Nd I loved khushi confidance.she ws standing infront of great ASR ...mhumma...😉

Finally he know that khushi is Executive Designer in AR.Starting of mahaupdate ws just flawless.

Khushi is like doll for him..still ask her did he hurt u'.i like arnav care for khuhsi ..he wanted her safe because he loved her alot...Than poor aman stuck between them.he he he...

I agree with arnav...Guptas are making his life hell...

Chocolate wala aprt ws my favorite. I loved their all arguments'.😳 😳 😳 😳

U Beautifully written khushi nd her parents part.beautiful .😛 😛

Nd last when she enter in his house perfect...khushi's all plans r perfect I m sure her path is nt easy ..it is very long nd difficult to bring old arnav back...

Nd last one dialogue'Aaana teri marzi, per ab tera jaana meri marzi hogi.

Haye'.ab kya hoga'.. 😎 😎

Khushi is his office in his house now in his bedroom.bhot mazza aane wala hain I m sure.

deepthi dii ur written each nd every dialogue is perfect.thanks for wonderful beautiful lovely awesome mahaupdate...☺️... 👏 👏 👏 👏

this is for u...

i m reading ur updates like this...😆

this tym i m going to say sorry to u...because this tym its my mumma's falt nt mine...😉 😉

Edited by chetna19 - 12 years ago

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rupzloveu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

congratsss fr the new thread...

awesome update...

loved the 1st part...

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

congo shongo Di...for new thread...

Part 1

WOW...how he noticed every tiny details of her...she had to feel uncomfortable...even thinking of it,gave me goose bumps...
So ASR surfaced and they argued...just loved this Khushi...her confidence...
conflict between his mind and heart...well protryed...
So now Arnav knows Khushi's role in his business...Good...
poor Aman...firse ASR ka gussa sehna pada...
cant wait for next part...

Part 2

So they again fight...uff this man...and his anger...he doesnt even realize what he's saying when angry...
but Khushi replied well...her question "Which is you?" Arnav khud bhi nahi janta...
Aman couldnt get info about NK,why...
She is Mrs. Raizada to you all...aarre wah Arnav...
And his confusion...I was like,its not ur fantasy dear,she indeed left him for u...

Part 3

then their meeting...loved how Khushi is confident about what she has to do...
bechara Aman,aaj din bhar sirf drama hi dekhna pada...and free mai daant bhi mila...
Loved the part where Garima told her about their childhood...beautifully written...
So Khushi is going to his(their) house...cant wait to see how he's gonna react...

Part 4

Achha surprize mila Arnav ko...Khushi's grihapraavesh...just loved it...I was wondering how its gonna be...thanks Di,for making it beautiful...
Her tears didnt make any effort to stop and his heart didnt stop bleeding to her tears...loved this line...
Loved Akash-Payal a little more...
Then another ArShi confrontation...kitna jhagadte hai yeh dono...
"It is your decision to come, but it will be my decision to let you go now"...wow...loved it...

THANK YOU so much Di for such an amazing and itnaa bada update...love u a lot...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wat the update done no pm nthng diii

Finally unrsing dii

2 ur maha maha maha maha upd8😆😆

dii itna bad upd8 ka cmnt ka liye l8 hogyi sorry 😭😭

soo bribing u wid dis teddy

1st upd8

awww diii how cute arnav behaved i mean he was literally noticing her from had 2 toe

and i lyk khushi also dis tym c was equally participaing in her husband moves😆😆

khushi always took arnav breahe away hehehe wid her antics😆😆

and den strtd dere most awaited session question ans lolll😛

how can he be so rude to her 😡😡 and her parents also 😡😡

She took step forward looking into his eyes and asked calmly, Are you sure you want me to leave...(after pause, she added) you?

hayee diii mar diya mjhe apna iss line se😳😳

my fav line⭐️⭐️

she made wordless lolll arnav singh raiada ko chup kar dii👏👏 khushi kumari gupta hats to u off 😳😳

arnav mind and heart battle urrrghhh diii i hate his ego😲😲

on way he was happy to c her and the other way he was angry no one can undrstnd him dii

and finally ek sach bahar aya ki behind his success it was khushi only😳😳

how i loved it dii muaaahhh love u

i agree dii bichara aman 😆 😆 😆

part 2

khushi and her irritating antics 😉 😉

diii can arnav be never polite 2 in first place😕😕

he was going 2 cnfss really 😃 but damn his ego stopped him😲😲

and den his cncrn wich leaves her speechless again😆😉

desperate arnav😆😆

part 3

how cold he such a low word for his wife dii 😡😡

Poor aman trying to explain his position to khushi 😆😆

And den cat and mouse fight of name calling in conference room loll

yehh log aman ko target bnna kab chodenge mjhe bata do aap

chalo ek baat achi lagi mjhe khushi pne dono kaam ache se nibha rhi hai and i lyked how she said she wil check the bg of mittals first den wil move ahead

👏👏

loll arnav snatched her chocolate frm her mouth😳😳

Arnav and clueless hows dat dii khushi soon ans his ques so dat it may help dem in future

awww dii how beautifully u descrbed dere childhood i was having a beautiful smile wile reading dere childhood part and arnav khushii bonding for each other and dere hug and kiss ufff damn cute dii

⭐️😳👏

Part 4

payal and akash surprised arnav truly

😳

arnav stammering loll as if he never saw khushi but today wat he saw was really gud shock for him or cn say second shock in a day 😳😳

Arnav carried her to the house awww hayeee itna pyara scene tha wohh u made me remember again d ipkknd moment dii 😭😭

haye akash teasing him 😆

dii in the last part u still let her say anythng damn dere egos

Dats it dii i hope i made justice to my cmnt nw its upto to u will be waiting for ur reply nw😳😳

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago