Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#951

unressed comment on pg 133😃

Edited by life93 - 11 years ago

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#952

Really emotional update
Aisha Rosy convo,their bonding was lovley and then their washroom convo was great
the way you wrote Rosy Mario scene was nice...and then also the way u described how she felt when he held her close to him was great
and all the was witnessed by Arjun
and then Arjun's words were so painfull with his outburst and accusing her
omg rosy had a daughter and she also died
felt really bad for her
eagerly looking forward for the precap...Arjun Aisha and Rosy Karan conversation
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#953

i read it twice👍🏼..aisha and rosy.!!😆

kitna kuchh saha hai rosy ne..arjun could not bear her with any one..ek ke baad ek sab reveal ho raha hai..arjun is unaware about what had happened with rosy and her family in past..you have written her and arjun's emotions so well..👏👏👏

and wo Mr. Pereira 😡

Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#954

I m happy that I took your disclaimer seriously & did not read it while travelling.
To start with the two sisters: Glad that you brought in this chotu sa lovely conversation between the two. I missed Misti here.😭
Coming to The Lady in Red:
She is indeed impressive.👍🏼 Never does she fail to surprise me. So its Divide &Rule policy she is adopting that never fails to work at any point in time which will lead her towards being a trustworthy individual to Mario. Very Impressive!!!.

His intensions now seems much more clearer to wards her. After all ,Its the human nature of being curious i.e..,if sum one is not figurable or is out of your mind to understand him/her ,you tend to become more curious to know them more. This goes with Mario perfectly .Ro is indeed a mystery which makes Mario eager to read her more.It would have taken alot of patience for Arjun to keep himself &his sanity in check watching her being so close to Mario which later on turned out to be the accusing words from him. You know that right that I m not at all angry with Arjun for his accusations coz I know it, if he had said those words he surely might have had died a thousand deads along with her. About she having a daughter was something I knew I felt it long before coz sum where at the back of my head I had this one thing in mind about the little girl whom Arjun was not able to recognize long back when he visited his shanti Bua's house.Now I get it what her priced possession means. it was her daughter & sum thing more I m sure of. I wonder if there is any end to her sufferings.

But yes what was shocking for me was that Arjun knew about her having a daughter. Never had I expected that.This pops up a question in my mind, if he was keeping a tab on her even after leaving their home 5years back but then on a second thought if that's the case how did he miss about the death of her daughter. The scream of her's is still lingering in my ears. Please give me a reason to smile after this one. But i know that will take time &I wonder how will I manage it coz wat Ro felt here is nothing to wat Arjun will feel once Aisha will blurt out to him the truth in the next one. Please please please, I request you to end this roller coaster emotional ride soon.

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#955

That was such an emotional update!!!!!
Wonderful!😊

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Amazing update Avantika

loved it and enjoy it a lot

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Haleemah

@hal96

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#957

Loved it 2 bits

Awesome update

Bechari Rosy

Shes been througb so much pain ... lost her l9ve then her baba then her husband n her daughter

Tears flowing down my cheeks

Wonder what Ayesha will say to Arjun

Will she say the entire truth to him n everything

Update soon

Cant wait

Thanks 4 pm

😊

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#958

first of all sorry for being late...

awesome update as usual... loved it...

ro - ayesha convo was nice ... sameer - a silent spectator...

ayesha concerned for ro...

mario 😡 , after all this how could she behave casual?? bold lady... hats off...

arjun's reaction as expected... the pain , guilt of not saving them vented out ... but poor ro...

she lost her husband and the precious part her daughter...

waiting for arjun - ayesha talk... ro hid everything from him for his sake but he criticised her...

update soon and thanks for the PM

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#959

Hello everyone.. 😃

Err.. there is no update.. sorry! I tried my best but family and job commitments kept me occupied..
But anyhow.. Note hai.. aur kuch aur bhi.. 😉

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Today, we celebrate One year of 'The Lady in Red..' 🥳

Honestly speaking, I hadn't expected it to go on for a year.. Partly my laziness is to be blamed, but well.. let's not go there.. 😛😆

So yeah.. It's been one crazy year of pulling out my hair, running off to pen down a thought while letting my food burn on the stove, munching on crisps to do away with my depression every time before making Rosy cry, listening to songs repeatedly until I finally get annoyed and write 'em down and pestering B1 endlessly.. 😆 All in all, quite eventful for me, personally.. 😆😆

Be it Rosy/Arohi, Arjun, Karan, Ayesha or even our sesky villain, Mario Pereira, they've all come a long way.. They're much more believable and dear to me than they were a yr back..
I'd initially thought that it would turn out to be a bit extra dramatic and unbelievable, but the response I received kinda assured me that things were on the right track.. Sincerely hope I'm not mistaken.. 🤔

The fic is now more than just a story for me.. And I do hope I'm able to do justice to what I have in mind until we wrap it up..

A very very huge share of it goes to you guys, for hanging in there when I get irregular and torture u all mentally.. Your extra sweet, at times threatening but honest comments (is what I'd like to believe) are what makes it worth the effort..

Really appreciate all of it. . A biig waali jaadu ki jhappi for all.. 🤗
(And pappi, hotwa se le lena..) 🤪 Aur haan, mujhe bhool matt jaana..

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A thread made by my lovely seksy behnas and contributed to by all of u.. Means a lot guys.. Thank you sooo much.. ❤️

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3868901/ll-happy-anniversary-to-one-of-the-best-fan-fiction-of-this-forum-ll

Feels like a 2nd birthday while I receive soo many gifts.. (I know mere liye nahi Rosy-Arjun ke liye hain.. but well..) 😉

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A chottu sa lame attempt at a VM! Hope you guys like it.. 😳

ll Arjun- Rosy ll - THE JOURNEY SO FAR..

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJfxprsrV6c[/YOUTUBE]

Direct link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJfxprsrV6c

Will be back with the next by the weekend, hopefully.. *fingers crossed*

❤️
Avantika/Avni/B2.. 🤗

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#960

Congrats once again B2...

I need not elaborate on what makes this story special...its not just one thing but many many things that make up this story one of the best fictions of this forum...and as I always tell u that it would make a superb thriller book!

Another point is the air of mystery around the story and the lady herself which hadnt ended even after an year...It makes it all the more interesting!

No doubt Miss A and Mr A continue to rule the space with their own strong persona but then Karan's charm has a magic as well...I love him too!

khair, iss story ka sab kuch pasand hai mujhe...harr panna special hai!