Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Awesome update dear
Just loved it
Beautifully written
You always leave me speechless
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#912

wow it was an awesome update

loved arjun and arohi very much

now cannot wait for their confession

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear😊😊

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#913

"He couldn't protect her now...because she was already scarred.."

OMG! this one line gave goosebumps to me...pls dnt tell me ki jo mai soach rhi hu vo sach hai...i dnt want this to happen...oh my lord plz sm1 tell me i m wrong!

bt...i guess...i've already guessed it! *sigh*

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beautiful and magical part ws the dance and her feelings told in such beautiful manner...

it touched me deep down...whn outta the blue he called her 'Arohi'..

waiting for the maharevealation..plz continue soon

love
Aisha

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#914

🥺🥺

You my dear always make me speechless when its all about Rosy-Arjun.They are just perfect soulmate.Its like these two share an extraordinary bond between-An unconditional love,respect for each other,bringing out the best & the worst of course in each other & above all highly compatible in a way different from what the world call it PERFECT.Their indifference towards each other is also for each other.I really felt for Ro when Arjun asked her to back off from the mission which will rip her apart & her thoughts that she was already scared in the past.

He couldn't protect her now because she was already scarred.I really wish it isn't the possibility of where my thoughts are taking me but then life isn't that fare especially for a woman in a field where there is hardly a chance for an escape.I know, you feel that i sympathize Arjun more than Ro but trust me its actually the other way round. Everytime she feels that she is no good for him,i feel like going to her to smack her & say,that everything is not lost.He loves you more than you can imagine. Everytime she feels she is too low for him to love her,it feels that Why is it that the two knows each other so well in & out but does not know what they feel for each other.Irony again.🥺

Her vulnerability is resurfacing everytime he is around & trust me when she rushed towards him to stop from going coz she feels a sense of security when he is around I was more than happy with that unshed tears in my eyes.Every attempt by Arjun to make her understand & break through the wall she has built around her is being fruitful.😃

A friend in need is a friend in deed.A simple line but with deep meanings. Karan is really a friend indeed.I am glad that Ro has him beside her when she is about to stumble. Arjun's reaction seeing her dancing with Karan made me realize how is he gonna manage seeing her around with Mario.

The dance-"Love is of all passions the strongest, for it attacks simultaneously the head, the heart and the senses."

Mario: For now, lips sealed.🤔

Ayesha-Rathod: I pity them,how are they gonna handle the two stubborn individuals.

Precap: Avantika, I really feel the accusations from him is really too much for her to handle

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#915

awesome update as usual...

perfect song selection... well suited for rosy's situation...

arjun did things which irked him for HER and ro for HIM... perfect pair...

arjun know ro works for mario... kab arjun samjhayega mario ko ... eagerly waiting for that...

karan with a guitar... back off dude , warna get ready to get strangled by arjun ...

karan - ro dance was nice...

arjun called her arohi , she finds it alien to hear her name from him...

she had been through hell already , bit scaring...

arjun - ro dance was awesome...

loved arjun - ro convo , she really know how to get on his nerves...

precap sounds something emotional ...

update soon and thanks for the PM

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#916

First of all, Karan with guitar..what to tell more?He's present everywhere with Rosy to help her in work and also support her whenever she needs it.Then Karan-Rosy dance, he helped her even when she hadn't decided anything for her performance. But he's in for a lot of troubles, the look in Arjun's eyes made evident that he wanted to strangle Karan for his behaviour.Somebody save him too:)
Arjun, reached there in time just as he had promised to never leave her alone now. The Arjun-Rosy moment near the bar counter, gave it all.The pain, anger, fear, love and care, was all evident at once.It was beautifully written.Arjun just wants Rosy to be safe, to protect her from all those greedy eyes.And she is too stubborn to accept it, though all she wants is to be safe and secure in his arms, the person whom she had always loved.
Arjun knows that she works for Mario, and he must have till now seen his entire janam kundali, ab toh Mario ki dhulai pakki hai..and thats what he deserves too!!
The choice of song was just perfect.It was similar to Rosy, what she thought and felt could be known through that song. Then the Arjun-Rosy dance, it was the most beautiful part.I felt as if I was also there watching the performance.Beautifully written.. :)
Loved the entire update..
Continue Soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#917

Hat's off Avantika...
Superb update...
Sensitive Arjun Arohi moments...
They have danced together. ..
Their moments together were magical...
Cannot describe what I was feeling for them...
Still I cannot say that I am happy for them..
Nothing has progressed...
And truly they are poles apart. ..
Arjun's pain n anger...piercing me..
Arohi's stay behind the shadow is agitating me...
Karan is fab yaar..
I am in love with this character.
Awesome chapters..
Plzz continue soon dear...

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Superb update
song selection was great
Arjun Rosy convo by the bar was lovely...he calling her Arohi was emotional part
so Arjun now knows that she works for Mario
Arjun and rosy's dance scene was awesome
precap sounds interesting
thanks for pm...continue soon

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#919

A beautifully written chapter...!!!
dance wala love hayyeee
the song the description..the vm and Mr n Miss A...everything was perfect..!!
the gussa and iske baad wala dance... garmi bht hai ya Mujhe feel Ho rahi hai..
karan is a perfect partner... but after his dance and flirting with Ro I hope he is not on hit list of arjun...
Finally it is heading towards smthg big...
Mario Pereira... he is so callous...I somehow fond him very calculative n mysterious...he is not what he seems to b...somewhere he just finds ro mysterious...Ah am guessing too much..!!!
Over all loved it totally...perfect
update soon
waiting eagerly for next dose of Mr n miss A
Precap has made it more difficult to wait