Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally they have met. Mr.A and his Miss A have finally met ...

After so many years of pain..

But do you call it a meeting?

Was it not like meeting a stranger, just with similar face??

Girl you have made me cry to emptiness..

In such situation, what comes in someone's mind first?

Is it long lost love??Blankness??Hatred??and consequently indifference...

Don't know..

Waiting to know what was there in your mind..

Had the shock numbed his/her senses??

Had he/she lacked all the sensations??

Then how had they left each other without muttering a single word??

without screaming??without crying??

Obviously for them, their missions are more significant than their lives.

There was an awesome song from not so awesome movie YJHD

"Kaisi teri khudgarzi / Na dhoop chune na chhaon
Kaisi teri khudgarzi / Kisi thor tike na paaon
Ban liya apna paigambar / Tar liya tu saat samandar
Phir bhi sookha mann ke andar / Kyun reh gaya
Re Kabira maan jaa / Re Faqeera maan jaa"

"Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya"

When some action is perceived by someone as "khudgarzi", it can be considered as "Nirmoh" by some other.

As writer you can judge her..and I cannot..I can roll me only as you want me to..

You can tell me if Miss A is "khudgarz" or "Nirmohi".

No..I am not saying that she did all these for herself..

Eventually, she had sacrificed everything she had including her love..

Does loving someone, give us the right to devastate that someone"s soul??

Was avenging death more crucial for her than living with someone who even did not know whose death to be avenged..

Life is so cruel...

Will he ever be able to understand her truth??

Hat's off Avantika..

Needless to say how ardently I will wait for the next chapter..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update
loved it
flashback was beautifully written
arjun and rosy's emotions were perfectly written
waiting for next part
cont soon
please PM me
Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Gulp* Itte crucial point pe rok ditta and as if, that was not enough,

"Why?!!" he asked, the despair in his eyes contrary to the rage in his voice.. 😲

Di, Please post next one soon, I won't be able to hold my heart for long..

Khair coming back to updates..It was as usual perfect👍🏼
Commenting on last 3 chapters.

Chapter 28: I completely loved Sameer Rathore in this one. Rathore's Dammit and SYS session for Ayesha was much needed one because I am sure ,If all was left on Ayesha, she would have never said the truth..Though she is yet to come out with the complete truth...
So, Ayesha and Arohi went to Yash, Arohi's husband, to take shelter..I am confuse on one thing, few updates before you once mentioned that Arohi faith was shattered by someone whom she trusted after Arjun..At that time I thought it was her husband but after this update Yash seem to be a nice guy..Is there more than what meets the eye or Am I thinking too much..😕
Rathore all ready to make Ayesha confront Arjun with the truth...I just hope even after all this Rathore will not leave Ayesha on her own...If Arjun has lost his loved ones, so has Ayesha.

He paused and gave her a hard meaningful look, "And maybe you and Arjun need this.."

Completely Agree with Rathore on this one, they DO need this.

How dare, Mario spiked her drink😡 Waiting for Mario's band bajoying by Rosy..He deserves it..Its good to see that even after all this, Rosy has someone, whom she can trust. Loved the way Karan handled Rosy.


Chapter 29: I always use to wonder, what exactly made Rosy go away from Arjun but now that I know the answer I feel very bad for her..Seeing Parent's separation at a tender age is definitely very heart wrenching but what, more bad is when you give up on existence of love and commitment after this. Her belief that she is exact replica of her mother and won't be able to make Arjun happy and would leave him was wrong but then you can't blame her. Witnessing your father suffer everyday with grief is not a memory which you can forget easily.

I have to do this, Ro. I hope you're able to forgive me..'

I hope so too*fingers crossed*

Chapter 30: Most awaited chapter is here finally..I just wish ki aap Arjun-Rosy ko mil wa deta but then Aap cliffhanger queen kaise bante😛
Lady in red in white and silver was too good..Aisha's reaction after watching Rosy after so many years was heart wrenching.
For one moment even I was frightened that what Arjun will do but then, Phew, his logical mind took over his heart.
Flashback made me cry..I wish they would have not stopped themselves from confessing their love but then destiny had different plans for them. I just hope they both get their share of happiness after all demons are dealt with.

Loved all the updates di..Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 11 years ago
a brilliantly written longg update ... arjun now knows ro is alive...ayesha is at stake now... arjun would surely get the truth from ayesha's mouth..

ro's own inhibitions has always taken a toll in her life and tats the reason she has made up her life so miserable...

but she has got a second chance only if she is able to use it properly... coz still she thinks arjun loved roshni and was happy with her...

Miss A never understood her Mr. A and vice versa... tats the true shade of love and longing... love has always played its grey games...

continue soon ...

didnt get pm for this part plz pm me next time...😊
Edited by invisible2018 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello ladies.. Okay, this seriously keeps getting better..
And you guys will have to bear the brunt of it.. Jaldiwala update on the way.. 😆

Anyhow.. Before that, let me thank you guys for those compliments, feedback, criticism and all of it..
Thank you.. Means a lot..

@ B1: No worries lady.. Thanks so much; been waiting for your feedback on it.. and here u are with a dhaasu one.. Thank you once again for putting up with my crankiness.. 😆 And yes, I entirely agree with you on that one.. Without a doubt, she was wrong in assuming things and taking him for granted.. But then again, Arjun hadn't confessed to her either, which only added to her confusion and hence the decision. They weren't meant to be back then.. And I think what they have between them right now is much more stronger and deeper than it was in the past. Anyhow.. Oh yeah, B1.. The deal is on.. Btw, I've been thinking of it ever since you mentioned it.. *Shh* ☺️

@ B3: Thanks behna.. And I seriously hope you've dropped the idea.. Oh and that was just a glimpse into his anger.. 😉 More on the way..

@ Sambha.. 🤗 Thaanku.. Of course.. she's at fault, but like you said she stuck to her decisions until the end and didn't blame anyone else for whatever came her way.. karan ki janvi is on a break.. Pehle Ar-Sy ko toh set kara doon.. 😉 Angrywala love # 1 on the way, darling.. 😉 And nah.. pehle Rosy ki band bajegi.. phir ayesha ki baari.. 😆😛 Thanks!

@ PeeCee: Thank you ji.. ☺️

@ diw9, Snehajain, srividhya68: Thanks! 😃

@ AnjuRish : She didn't intend to.. She never knew he was in love with her..

@ daisydee425, NainaSM, Shivi1997: Thank you ladies.. 😃

@ bgargate : Haww.. Blush hui gaya.. Thanks so much.. 😳 Lol, so u wish you were in Ayesha's place, huh?! 😛 Nah.. iswale mein toh Rathore Sir sirf aur sirf Ayesha ke hi hain.. 😉
Glad you liked those Rayesha bits.. 😳
Ro kaise poochti.. That would've made her look girlish na.. 😆😛 And besides she was very stubborn.. and insecure too.. Arjun never confessed either..
Uff yeh dono.. Would've saved me so much trouble..
Nah.. here it is.. Arjun told Ayesha he loved someone.. Ayesha assumed it to be Roshni and the rest followed.. More on it later.. 😛
"He as a photographer had an excuse to be close to the podium.😉
Even Mario would be happy to let him go close to Rosy to click her pics I guess 😉" Aha.. smart you! 😉
Yeah.. She misunderstood a lot of things.. But well, I wouldn't blame her.. It was majorly a cruel game of destiny.. face-off's coming up.. 😉 Thank you soo much!. 😃

@ Aisha.Vashishth: Aww.. Sorry about that.. But it's only going to get sadder now on.. Yupp.. I love that one too.. and have it mind for a special one.. 😉 Thanks..

@nakshatra92 : She was a misguided soul, dear.. No worries, the time to set things right is here.. Thanks so much..

@ kunchu : writing spree is right here.. 😉 Bass dont want to overload you guys with too much, all at once.. Thanks so much.. 😃

@ ...Mithuz... : Yesh.. More on his self control in the upcoming one.. Rosy ko soon pata chalega.. Err wait.. aren't we being too laalchi, now? Confrontation and reunion ko abhi time hai.. 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res for thank-you's

EDIT LATER!
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Edited*

Phew...I see exactly what you meant when you said that was emotionally draining for you.

It was intense and emotional, each of their hurt and pain was visible and palpable. Fantastically written B2, and it was above what I expected, it always is and that is why I love Lady so much.

You left me feeling bad for each and everyone.

Let's start with Ayesha, I have always have had a soft corner for her, and it did falter a bit when I learned that she may have unintentionally started a domino effect that separated Rosy and Arjun, but I can't hold a grudge because first she didn't do it on purpose, as even she was unaware of their feelings for each other, and I think in a way she still hasn't realized the intensity of Arjun and Rosy's feelings for each other. I am going to hate to see the state of her mind when she realizes it.

God it was painful to read her reaction to Arjun's rage, but still she stood strong and this is just the tip of what is coming her way, let's hope Sameer is able to cushion some of the pain or at least help her get pass thru what is to come.

Arjun's rage, pain and anger is all justified and I expected him to rant, but his silent suffering is even more scary. Him hurting himself by slamming his fist into the tree is just a glimpse of what he could do to himself as he thinks about the betrayal more and more.

But even thru his anger and pain he manages to feel hurt seeing her cry. God that was hard to read, his reaction at seeing her, his helplessness, the pull she has on him where he forgets anything and everything and gravitates towards her.

So Rosy finally realizes that she hasn't been imagining his presence near her. Awe...I really felt for her in that moment, and again for some reason I just feel more for her than him. Yes she made decisions for both of them, but again that was unintentional on her part. She not only feared rejection of her love but she feared that she would end up hurting him like her mother hurt her father and that is hard to get past.

As you said what they have now will be lot stronger than what they ever felt in the past.

I think I babbled enough, I hope I made sense here, but I just can't tell you how I felt reading this update, but I am sure you know how I feel since you must have felt the same while writing this part.

This was just fantastic, and I loved every bit of it B2. Bravo behna,👏 very well done.

Now that the first meet is over I am sure we are in for a long and hard emotional storm all over and I can't wait.

Please update soon.🤗
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome part di...Undoubtedly very emotional one😭

My heart was thumping aloud while reading the update, it was as if I am just right there and watching each and every said-unsaid emotions floating in their eyes, the pain, agony, anger, love, longing, helplessness, you explained it all very beautiful di.

Arjun's heart broke into a thousand pieces when she cried and trembled in his arms. He wished to embrace her fiercely without having to let her go, ever again.
Rage in Arjun's eyes and voice was very much expected but the way he managed his emotions and forgot all his bolted up anger, maybe just for a fraction of a second, the moment he saw Rosy pale and crying face and trembling in his arms, tell it all that how deeper and true his love is for his Miss A.

After reading this update, my mind kept wandering, maybe this could have been avoided but then destiny always has its own plans. I am in no position to pin point anyone among the two, Aisha and Rosy, to blame for all this. If Rosy firstly, let Arjun go because of her own set of insecurities that clouded her mind and later because she wanted to keep Arjun away from danger that lurked around and thought Arjun was happy and safe away from her. On the other hand, Aisha was mum because of the promise she gave to her little sister and was totally unaware of the love and undying bond Arjun and Rosy shares!

I just hope this night fades away soon and brings a ray of hope and togetherness in their life. But then, there is a lot to be said and done before they all can have their share of happiness.

Eagerly waiting for the answer to the ultimate question "WHY??".

Please continue soon and Thanks for the PM!

Edited by -Rajvi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Late to rserve but first to commnt
awesome is just a simple given to such a simple chapter
confused???
Yaar I am tired of wowing yr lady...
Arjun stole the whole chapter
Ro ke pain always rulathe hai... But aaj unke... Maardala...
Aisha n Ro... U r so dead ladies...
Waiting to read the fireworks starting from nxt part
i get a wiff that evn Chief is gonna get sys for siding Aisha
spreeji... Jaldi aao 😳 😳

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