Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Such a emotional part u made me cry for miss A 😭
arohi/rosy POV mindblowing brilliantly written
kudos to u
thanks for PM
plz Cont soon and will be waiting eagerly

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Hail the writing spree!!
Ithni jaldi update
i wish i cud do fast too.but always held up
back to yr lady just one word Awesome
the beautifully penned part
Ro indeed is one of its type chara
hard to concieve such a chara out of no where yet u did it
as for other chara we do have a stencil n we can make changes according to our wish
but this one! Well done buddy
I wud say anyone who dont follow yr lady have missed one of the best fiction in forum
not just a praise but what I really felt
a perfect blend of romance pain n mystery
keep up thr good work dear

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

sorry i know i m very late

i just finished reading all the parts to ur story...and its so much more engrosing with each updates...
its a request can u plz pm me part 27B ... unless i read that i wont be able to read the further updates...

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Love it.. seriously.. Was waiting for them to meet although they didn't met in real but then at least one knows who the other was... Waiting for the story to further move.. Continue soon.

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

awesome upt
thnx 4 the upt & pm
now Mr.A & Ms.A r goint to meet
just waiting to watch their reaction
plz cont soon

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Awesome part..

Loved the VM..

Thanks for the pm

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Nice yaar ...👏... Miss A .and Mr. A ...😳... will become Mr and Mrs A ... . continue soon 👍🏼

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

awesome update
it was really soo emotional
arohi/rosy has been through so much from her childhood tell now
feel really bad for her
love karan he is such sweetheart
arjun rosy going to come face to face soon..reunion on the way
the song selection were amazing
continue soon

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

this ws so touching...

i'll jst repeat my words from th past...
"I am amazed to see such a woman...she has and is suffering so much...still always putting a brave heart front..."

one more thing i wanna say u...it ws ur very RIGHT decision to change the face of The Lady in Red...

still in a trance...cant' write more...

eagerly waiting for th nxt update

continue soon

love
Aisha

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

My dear Avantika. Are you on a spree making us cry this festive season.😭😭😭I was mumm reading her POV.

They say,"There are wounds that never show on the body that are deeper and more hurtful than anything that bleeds."

Fear of rejection,parent's failed marriage,her father's loneliness,Roshni's feelings,Arjun teasing her about his would be life partner's qualities. The list seems to be endless which made her withdrew herself from him.

It is said that a daughter is a mother's gender partner, her closest ally in the family confederacy, an extension of her self. And mothers are their daughters' role model, their biological and emotional road map, the arbiter of all their relationships.& a daughter without her mother is a woman broken.So is Rosy now. Losing her mother had left a wound deep inside that never quite healed which molded her into a reclusive & reckless lady later on who lost faith in commitment to a life long relationship.

Talk with Aisha about Arjun being in love with a girl seems to be another misguiding one.cant blame the poor soul.Going through so much things around will definitely lead to the conclusion that stopped her to think logical.

Moreover,It felt to me that she wasn't confident that she can be committed to him as somewhere in the back of her head she believed that she is an exact replica of her mother who might leave him at a later stage in life & witnessing her father's loneliness all these years without her mother beside him ,she would definitely not want a life for Arjun who is still grieving over his family's death & who wished to have a family of his own which she doubted if she will ever be able to give him

Also,I still wonder if she is still in the impression that the girl he was in love with was Roshni.

She is broken from within & is fighting within the silent chambers of her soul & that needs to come out.Hope she speaks her heart out to Karan

This was POIGNANT.You have beautifully penned down her thoughts ,inner turmoil &sacrifices.👏👍🏼Best nahi kahugi becoz i am sure Arjun's POV is in pipeline .Isn't it?

I love Filler updates.

P.S.:The VM was beautiful.👍🏼This was the first time i heard this song & couldn't resist to download it.Lovely lyrics.Thank you Tahi for this. 😃