Arjun FF: The Lady in Red T2. Edits n new link Pg. 147 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😲 Be still my pounding heart.❤️ Damn you woman, you could have warned me.😆 Okay I am skipping the beginnings and going right to the end.

I had to blink my eyes and read again and again to make sure that was for real. I thought like Liza, I too was dreaming.😳

Seriously babe, you have caught on, you don't need lessons from me, in fact I should be taking lessons from you.

Hai..mardala...kya decription tha, Arjunji in swimming trunks, I felt like he was walking right out of the water and on to my computer screen when I read that, I had to do a double take. And for this you get 10 on 10 for this update, rest is just a bonus. (Wish Rosy had gotten glimpse of that.😉)

Phew...lady you do know how to come back with a bang don't you?

Anyway, every one of your updates for this story ends up being my favorite, somehow I end up loving each update more than the previous one. You always manage to steal bit more of my heart with every update, and this was no different.

Poor Shree, I thought he was going to end up dying a painful death by his three senior officers, if one had spared him the others would have definitely done some damage to this poor soul, but in the end it all worked out.

Loved the conference room scene most especially Shree and the fear for his life, Liza trying to help him yet she too didn't want to risk too much, and even Chotu, poor guy didn't know what he was going to end up being but whatever it is I am sure it will be fantastic.

The best part was when Shree suggested Arjun be a bartender, I couldn't help but chuckle at that, but he would have made one sexy bartender. I could just imagine the girls hanging around at the bar just to get a glimpse of him.😆 But I like the photographer bit a little more.

Awe...and that small flashback was just perfect, I love those the best especially now that I know their true relationship or what they felt for each other in the past. It is nice to get a glimpse of those small moments that led to everlasting love.😊

Rathore and Ayesha..didn't I tell you they are perfect together. I loved that Sameer can't resist crossing that line between personal and professional relationship between them. He though quick on his feet and figure out what exactly he needed to do in order to protect her. And the best part is he understands her so well.

And Ayesha, she may resist trying to feel anything for him, but deep down she knows that she also needs Rathore at her side and I am glad that they will be together because things are going to get tough for her.

I loved the slight wordless exchange between Rathore and Arjun for Ayesha's safety, good to know that Arjun still worries for her even though he has yet to get over his anger at her.

And also the exchange between Arjun and Ayesha, showed so much of their bond of friendship, and now I know that it will be tested time and again but it won't break.

Rosy and Karan..looks like that friendship is special in its own way too. Glad Rosy got Karan to open up a bit about his past.

So Janvi is our Karan's girl, and she seems so familiar too..can't wait to get another glimpse of her. Like Rosy I too hope that Karan gets that second chance.

Last but not the least, our Rosy, has she really given up on life? Yeah may be, but I get the feeling that soon things are going to start turning for her.

Yeah, lots of highs and lows ahead, but I am looking forward to each and every one of them.

I loved the update as always behna, and I can't wait to read more.

I am excited just to read the precap, I am sure it is going to be edge of your seat update next time and I can't wait. Please update soon.


Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago
Radhi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part.
Thanks for the pm
drunkiiebabe thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaan it was gr8
awsm..superb
i loved it ❤️
shree convo wid d team was so funny 😃
arjun aur bartender
oo freak hehehe 🤣
lisa nd other girls were drooling over arjun
naughty girl
i m jealous yaar..
Arjun aur wo v shirtless 😳 *blush* *faint*
hayee main marjawan
Mr.A aur Ms.A goa mein
hey bhagwan no no sweety arjun ko jaldi milwana apne love se
wat an update dear
keep it up
update soon
love u sweety
Edited by Shivi1997 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...😊😊😊
Raesha as couple...😉😉😉
Chhotu as college student...😆😆😆
Arjun as photographer...😊😊😊

Precap ki wajah se ab apko jaldi update karna padega plzzz
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m not d drooler di mere liye kya
😉
unres
chalo update was awesome as again
etf team n under cover
treat 😉
literally imagine poor shree state 😛
hmm so samesha lovely
businessman uff gangster n her girlfriend
once upon a time in mumbai 👏
chotu yup better watch out
fb amazing Goa n dat 😳
ayesha sarcastic comments ⭐️
well arjun bro as photographer
👍🏼
drumlol pleej
for janvi arohi i imagine of kmh
hmm dont give up
every one nt getting second chance bt if u get grab it 😛
hmm hmm lisa ji ka ye haal to baki sbka 😉
well jaisa des waisa bes
chotu update
thanks for d fb n teaser di 🤗
thanks for d pm
lovely
ps. chotu update
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_



<font color="#990000">Whaaat?!! Yeh chota tha?😲</font>
<font color="#990000">You guys are certainly greedy.</font>

<font color="#990000">Thanks Payalia.. More on the way..😃</font>


ha greedy di
bhukkad always for d update 😆
aapne bnaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.shree and liza-both of them were so afraid while telling about the fake id's to other members.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

i m not d drooler di mere liye kya
😉
res


Oh well, too bad then.. coz iss wale mein no rakhi-special.. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
B2, revenge time...tadpa tadpa ke unres karungi! 🤣😈

chalo revenge khatam kar dehthi hoom...

Awesome updates...I loved this long updates!

The flash back about the beach vacation...bikinis was so cute! I wonder itne close teh dono but ek simple si confession nahi kar paaye...it was so tough na?

Anyways coming back to present...loved the entire scene...I can visualize that look on Rathod and Aisha's face!

Aww Arjun is caring for his Sha...wow...so cute! a true friend!

and then the bartender...🤣🤣
bacch gaya Shree warna toh SYS glares mein ash hi bann jaatha...

Photographer...oh oh...fitting into the role with a dip in the ocean...I am visualizing that and i cant stop drooling B2! 😉

Aisha and Liza also drooling...😆 haan agar itna devilishly handsome and hot ho toh bichaari ladkiyaan kya karein!
"bacchna hai haseeno...lo main aagaya" imagining Arjun singing this to all those girls!


And finally Janvi and Karan...i know whom to imagine! thanks! 😉
[but u know my agle janam secret na...wahaan pehla number Arjun ka hi hai!]

oh no...i hope i didnt bore u with this bak bak..loved it B2!
cont soon!


Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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