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Inspector Avinash... I can just see him ripping sheetal into tiny bits.
Now who ever has set up this ass Naik will have to look high and low to cover his role in the murder.
Loved the way that Avinash countered Sheetal and made her say a lot of things. She is an incredibly foolish woman to have walked into the trap of words set by Avinash.
And this fool Sheetal thought that she was smart enough to be shatir dimaag Raizada's girlfriend...i pity her and her insane ideas and dreams.
Khushi is such an adorable and loving child. A daughter which every mom will love to have. It was fun to read the way khushi was playing mom to her mother. 😆
And Arnav the ever caring and loving Boyfriend...hai i loved the fact that he is already trying to be in the best books of his future mother in law and also at the same time used that opportunity to meet khushi whom he missed the whole day at work. 😳
It was so adorable to read about this Garima who was flushing like a teenager in the throes of her first crush/ love...Cho chweet.
This spunky payal was just too much. I loved the way she teased Arnav and khushi, i can already see that she will make a great sister to khushi.
And then you unleashed the hotness of Mr. Raizada who could not control himself any longer and had to give in to the urge of kissing khushi and holding her tight. ☺️
You did a fabulous job of writing down that scene Aarti...which is no surprise really cause you just know what to the write. The perfect words to convey their love, emotions and needs.
Hooked and looking forward to reading the next update.
P.S: I missed the goofy Akash in this update, looking forward to reading the progress of his love story in the next update...and actually waiting for the firebrand payal to explode when she comes to know the truth.
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