ArHi FF: The Same Coin#2

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

i think akash is the cause of commotion .
luved the convo btw arnav n khushi!

awsome update :)

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Garba in college!!! such memories that brought!!!

So she was thinking abt him, looking for him...and ogling at someone who turned out to be him!!

Interesting conversation about faith and religion...Arnav's intelligence and keen sense of perception does shine through...liked this insight in to their personal thoughts...

So waiting for the big revelation...who was fighting with whom?

Im thinking someone hit on Payaliya and Akash stepped in...??

Cheers

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meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Of ghagras that shine and flow like fluid

Of sisters who you love and yet feel like strangling in exasperation

Of the flash of regret, almost immediate protectiveness and self introspection that follows the above thought

Yes, this was as real as real can get in fiction - and still make you smile fondly at the mirror the words have become. Great chapter, Sem. As always.

The more I flip the coin over

The more I fail to see what stares

There are two sides. Yes, I know there are

Why then can I now see just the one you bear

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Congratulations on the new thread and yet another amusing and delightful chapter.

You always amaze me with the ease you write situations and totally relate-able characters. I think at one point or another anyone is going to relate to the nature of the relationship Khushi shares with her sister Payal, either as the older or the younger sister. The way Khushi realized she has to let Payal find her own footing was brilliant. She still looked out for her from afar.

Let's go to my favourite part as always the interaction between Raizada and Gupta. I think they are slowly starting to realize that they might have similar personalities. There is a certain intensity in every conversation they engage in. They are attracted to each other without even realizing wait Khuhi did appreciate Raizada's back!😆 Can't stop myself from wondering, just what did Raizada think about Khushi's outfit? Something she doesn't normally wear 😉 Just what happened in the end there? what was the commotion about? will you unravel some of that in the next chapter??

Loved the bonus section as always, looks like even onlookers noticed how good Raizda and Gupta are!

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Unresed here :)

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Lovely! I can't wait to see what happened on that dance floor! And I love the bonus conversations!

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Awesome update! Khushi and Arnav can be themselves with each other. They don't have to think twice before talking and expressing their inner most feelings and emotions. This is what love does to people. The gradual progression in their relationship over the chapters has been written so well. I am loving this. But the update felt too short, or may be that was because I liked it too much.

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nlr_nlr

@nlr_nlr

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Congrats on the new thread !

Fabulous update; personal history, philosophy and faith with the brilliant ambiance of celebration ... no pages unturned with the mention of monsoon in the background, beautiful picture indeed !

Looking forward for more,

Nlr

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

So the feisty Ms Gupta and the arrogant Mr Raizada can actually talk if they allow themselves. Suspect its the classroom that brings out the worst in the two of them :-)

Liked Khushi's realisation that perhaps she has protected Payal too much. I suspect its part of that over protectiveness that has led to Payal nursing a crush on NK.

NK is great fun, is in a band and most importantly, took a nervous Payal under his wing, showered her with affection and was generally her protector along with Khushi - perfect recipe for Payal to fall in love with!

When is the nervous Akash going to make his move - as the famous Thakur said "loha garam hai, maar do hathoda"

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 12 years ago