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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

It just keeps getting better. The fight and the aftermath was super hilarious. Loved all the blurting outs that happened. Now at least all that confusion is cleared, NK and V can date in peace, Akash can pursue the totally-clueless Payaliya in peace and leave K and R to bicker in peace ...

and now they both admit the other is 'hot' ... what more do we need??? just throw them together a few more times and the sparks will start to cause some serious damage.

Do we really have to wait 3 more days for the next update? Now that you don't have to stalk/spam the Shattered thread, maybe you can spend that time writing and give us a faster update!! 😳

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Great update
Lol what a conversation between all of them
Aww poor akash didn't get a dance with payal
Ooh raizada and gupta moving onto gentle teasing

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Tas.Chow

@Tas.Chow

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Ooohh sparks starting to fly between Gupta & Raizada!..:D I luved the last line thou! " and this diary will burn with me in my funeral pyre" lovely!!!! Wat else can I say! Great work! Ohh yeah I can say this...update soon!!!...:D

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Awesome update! Omg the coversation between them all outside was just too hilarious! They are all crazy! Poor akash! All his plan seems to be backfiring. Lol

Arnav has started to appreciate Khushis appearance. He even admitted to himself that there's something about khushi.

Do continue soon

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Amazing amazing loved it...

U hav written it exceptionally beautifull...i hav never tought the misunderstanding vl clear dis was...made me lol lol...enjoyed reading...

I love every character of ur ff...

Sab ek se badhkar ek h...

Yaaay arnav khushi r finding each other attractive n are doin normal talks tooo...semantic plsss dont u think 3 days is a very looonggg ahead...sob...i cant wait more...wit every update i fell in love wit dis story n den i feel the need to read d nxt update sooo.

Hehe

omgg shatttered ended i know bt i h read somewer too ur line abt lets cry together...n its d only thing thats stopping frm reading...

Expi! Did u give a tragggic end or

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Wow an amazing and brilliant update, simply fantastic.

The update was written exceptionally well, awesome writing.

So Arnav had been checking out Khushi quite a lot and was left mesmerised by her outfit and her beauty.

I guessed right the commotion was with NK and Akash,

Totally agree with Arnav the discussion outside was very entertaining,

Finally the misunderstanding was cleared and both NK and Akash admitted they thought the other loved Khushi,

Khushi's reaction was fantastic, she definitely is a fireball, poor Akash got so scared.

Lavanya admitting not telling Akash the truth as she thought it was funny not too, superb.

Awww Arnav reaction when he saw Khushi leaving was quite unexpected, so glad he followed her.

Poor Akash trying his chance with Payal and was still left disappointed.

Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi, still in there argumentative mode but at least a lot more pleasant and civil.

Khushi's diary entry was fantastic, must agree Arnav does look hot in white, also will Arnav ever have a peek in the diary.

Thanks for the note juhi's story shattered has finished, that is my next stop for reading.

Loved the update, a wonderful read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Thanks for the Email, continue soon please xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Hahahahaha...I just couldn't stop laughing reading the fight/explanation of tge confusion..poor khushi but enjoyed it a lot. Soo atlast thay are starting to find each other attractive. I loved the Arshi convo. Soo much...!!!!!

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samirao

@samirao

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

First of all thank u so much , for writing about , r beloved white hot raizad's feelings , and expressions , when he saw beautiful , innocent ,
bare back ,miss sexy , i mean Khushi , must say whole update was full of entertainment , written exceptionally well , impatiently waiting for the next part

Edited by samirao - 12 years ago