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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Wow wat an update... She found Arnav's back hot :P ... N they had a civil conversation? Wow wat garba does to u :)... Wat was that commotion? Hope payal is ok ... Loved the what's app msgs :D... Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update... I can't wait to see what happened on that dance floor
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
I dont have words to analyze the chapter.. but I can say, I am liking it a lot :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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n yeah contrast on new thread 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Congratulations on Thread Two!!🥳
This story deserves many , many threads, and I hope to be on the first page on the next one!


Coming to the updex:


Navratri, garba and Kay in a backless choli, kya bolun ab?
Arnav is obviously going to be oblivious to all else, yeh toh hona hi tha 😆


As usual, you have done a fantastic job of creating the perfect atmosphere, I just love your descriptions, dammit! It makes the reader get so involved in the scene, to the exclusion of all else (Like Arnavji 😉)

I liked Khushi's solution to the Payalia dilemma, hope that works out for her. I also loved the costumes you put them in, a special mention of Khushi ogling Mr. White Kurta before she realized who he was!

And DAN they have the all-important 'faith' conversation, and like Khushi, I was surprised that you chose to make this the focus of one of their early talks (When they aren't biting each other's head off, that is).
In a way, it was a role-reversal of sorts from the show. Arnav, who has some faith, while Kay is still on the fence, so to speak.

You always manage to surprise me with the content of your updates, and this time was no exception!



P.S: Still 😆 at the title!





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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
wow!! I really love this story...I started reading it yesterday...
I think this is the first ff I read where arnav believes in god...
it seems like there was a fight at the end...who were fighting?? NK or akash??

waiting to read another fabulous update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Totally loved the update..
I lked the conversation between arshi... & its good that payal is left alone for sometime...
What was that...??...at the end... Fight..???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on new threaf and great update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I truely appreciate the efforts taken by Khushi to make Payal mingle wid the other ppl :-):-):-)

Ahaa.. Checkin out ''whom she cant stand at all bt knws her most well-kept secret'' guy , albeit unknowingly n concluding him to be Hvng a attractive bckside :-):-):-) is definitely a point to b noted! :-):-):-)

Discussing ur personal beliefs, faith dat too wid ur adversary!
Hmm.. interesting!!!

P.S: i lovd the flashbck of Khushi n Payaliya! i guess dat protective instinct runs in the blood of every elder sibling.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think you are awesome S, just quietly.

Thank you for explaining the title last time, and it totally makes sense this time.

Also M tink u take da badla for my repeated chants of "i love payal"...? Hahaha I actually quite love how realistically you have mapped her out. You know K could just as easily be like, ah yeh payal kya bala hai and all..but I love the way she thinks and tackles the issue, without say being bitchy or whiny? (M hope u underwear my pheelz).

Ok now pliss not to throw juttas at me for saying this..but reading K speak of PJ like that, it kind of made me go pot kettle. Ok wait thats the wrong analogy..but I pheel that K is also a kind of loner, even if she does have the ability to socialise or well standup for herself. I for one love her not really mingling more than necessary, and always hanging by herself cooly observing her surroundings..its very unusual for a K, you know? Tell me if I am over-analysing? I know there is the patels and the NKs of the world...but still. And I get this feeling that A sees through this, or is becoming all "curious case of KKG" just like I am.
I AM SO WEIRD.
oh gosh.
all da normal people are like phangirling over garba and smoking hot back of ASR in a kurta! and hotter than sin but not in red KKG. Them "talking" in a corner.

Another part of this conversation I loved A LOT, was about religion. I penned K down for non-believer somehow too! But didnt expect much from ASR. Thats unimportant shizzle, who is what and all. But the way u went about that scene, and the dialogues, S this is precisely why I lau reading anything by you. I love how you can take the same conversation but write it in different ways, sometimes as blogs, other time as stories and yet others as IMs. (Again i am doing a poor job at explaining no?) Oh and also how you brought in the "she had never really talked about religion anyone before" (paraphrasing ofcourse)!

There is so much more to love and giggle at, and is that a akash vs nk fight we are going to see breakout or what?

Totally pheelz nk+vee and how things kinda change when friends have to divide their attention.
And totally pheelz da food stalls in navratri, thats where I used to be..but sadly after moving countries all I can do is garba..n dan eat maccas chips as consolation :(
And totally pheelz da payals wistful looks..I am glad they exist. Happens to the most sensible, talented, prettiest of us lol?

ALSO lastly, m lau how well written this chapter was all the descriptions..of the garba, the outfits and everything else.

Oh and A+K ship has seemed to set sail in the GG world! Wonder if St Zee is anything like Constance Billiard & St. Judes...

Sorry to go overboard.

Chanda
ps. UPDEX ALREADY.

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