Arshi FF: Tethered Thread 3 ***NOTE Pg 148***

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Sanjana1679

@Sanjana1679

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

I think that Arnav and Samar r not in good terms regarding something and now as Samar has taken Kushi's call things will become worse

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

I just came across your story and read it in a go. I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far!

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: clairvoyance
its great

Really? Yay!! 😆

No, seriously, I actually worry about what you would think of each update. Had me biting nails after one comment where I felt I was cooking up a senseless story, after reading your comment.

So, thank you. :)

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

Really? Yay!! 😆
No, seriously, I actually worry about what you would think of each update. Had me biting nails after one comment where I felt I was cooking up a senseless story, after reading your comment.

So, thank you. :)

😆

Meanwhile thanks for acknowledging my responses seriously😊

The chapter is indeed well presented. Arnav's helplessnes strikes out very beautifully

my point was only that Khushi knows about the ways of arnav singh raizada. So jumping on fire knowingly didnt suit her charactereristic in the FF. I mean she shud step planningly.Not just act impulsive on her hormones.

Hope ahead Arnav tries to look at ASR from Khushi's point of view.What , if he wud hv been in Khushi's place and how wud he react to such a boss for whom he might hv subtle feelings inside. He shud be delighted that even after knowing the rude ways of arnav , Khushi still finds pleasure to be with him.He shud consider himself lucky

Overall the FF is very intersting, Do update wen u r free. After all real life is more important than FF

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

i'm having this feeling that samar &la will turn grey

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Sorry yaar for late comment...but u knw I wasn't here last week. so abt update...

pehle toh Muah...I wasn't expecting the update...bcz I thought uwould indeed be busy wid exams.

I didn't quite comprehend the dynamics between shyam jiju nd Arnav. wasn't it sarcasm flowing from both sides? 😕 or was it just 'for the moment' irritation for Arnav. while 'teasing' from shyam?

Then...u described Arnav's uneasiness quite well. however, I couldn't stop a chuckle at your line- 'He threw his phone on the bed and plonked beside it, sprawled spread-eagled'. 😆

Poor Anjali...😆always fraying her nerves over the B-I-L duo. but, seriously, she chose to give an example of THE WORKOHOLIC ASR for not using phone on dinner table...😆
and HP...OP...! well my smiley was brushing teeths on reading tht! 😉 U know wat I mean..🤣

Poor Aman..! and La? very cleverly she took Samar away from window...nd phn call? don't even get me started on tht.

and finally... I liked the way u ended the update...
'things tht i m doing
for love!

chaa gyi boss! 😉 well done! ab no demands for updatefor now! give ur exams well...phir demands chaloo! 😛

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paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

First All the best for your exams...

Liked the banter between Arnav and Shyam... Arnav reply was like he was imagining about her and could not help himself... His restlessness and worry for Khusi came across very clearly... Now that he has had the epiphany... Hope he tells her also

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

wow...an update after a long time... and it was quite interesting...waiting for the conversation... and hopefully ur exams went well? :)

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

It is a. Wonderful FF. read itin one go. Its amazing. Would love to read it when u update next. Please can u PM me. Please please

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sumond

@sumond

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Wow I read all the chapters in one go, you are a damn FINE writer, I love this Arnav and Khushi in your story, n now I am hooked to this story can you be so kind as to send me a pm when you update, I promise promise to comment on every chapter, pretty please.