*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
kya baat hai : i'm too lost in the webof Arnav's care, concern too comment any good! Just i love him more evry passing update!

P.S : that bed is following them..:D
and wud Arnav be with her for the night, taking care of our bruised Khushi..?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
read this ss/ff in oe go..
it was awesome.. new different...loved it...
pls accept my buddy request..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
wow nice!!
its perfect!!
they both climbing together was something really awesome!!
i just loved it totally!!
arnav's story about his break up with la was just perfect!!!
so whats that bed doing there?
update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
This story has one of the funniest and unique plots I have read in recent times.😆
Just read all the parts... Kudos to your imagination... Hope you update real soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
hi...

i was in one of my worst moods...wanted to de stress...and i started with this story...guess what i loved it...and i am smiling...its lovely...i needed some break through...and broken bed was just it...

the ending was good...a suhaag raat bed in their room.

thanks

sri.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome yaar
that "suhagraat bed"😆😳
cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly good. Very well written. Cudnt be more better. Dis ws just awsum. Evry emotion ws very well proved. Beautiful. Keep updating. Aww so arshi are a couple. Woowie arnav is soo caring. Keep updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: sohara

i was extremely tired and exhausted today. but your update energized me.

Ooo my Arnaie is in love for sure. He seems a bit over concern for Khushi. the poor nurses! how can they resist the most handsome hunk in front of their eyes.
Khushi is just crazy. Poor Arnav, she made him climb her balcony, or moreover carrying her on his back!
My man is really strong.
I guess Khushi is the reason for Arnav's break up with La.
OMG, the SR is bed ready in Khushi's room!
How they will resist each other now?😉


My story energised a tired Sohara! I am humbled and damn pleased I could do this for a dear friend!😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: srmirji

hi...


i was in one of my worst moods...wanted to de stress...and i started with this story...guess what i loved it...and i am smiling...its lovely...i needed some break through...and broken bed was just it...

the ending was good...a suhaag raat bed in their room.

thanks

sri.


Hey
I write to destress. But its an awesome feeling to know it is a stress buster for my readers too. Thanks for letting me know. Take care and keep smiling, my friend.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: arnavbarun


Loved it!

Buildering together how cute

i am bit confused neha mentioned nk once! Who is he?


NK will make an appearance soon again. But there is much of him in Chapter 5, and less in Chapter 9.Did you miss Ch 5 ?😉
Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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