*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Lol
The end surprise waS funny
Loved the updTe
Thanks

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: cheesemad
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awesome update...
asr is so caring...they climbed building together, how sweet...
sorry for short comment cant type much from left hand...

ps...lucky kkg, I had an accident last day na toh asr mila upar se hath fracture😆

Oh! You poor soul! Haath fracture and no ASR! What is the world coming too! Take care! Love you!

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

HAWLARIOUS!! OMG! You are such a classic!!

I absolutely loved it. Well, it seems like he can't help but give in to her. Whatever she wants! I would love to know what his thoughts were as he was carrying her on his back. Dangling in the air!

I thought she refused the bed when in her angry mode?

I love your sense of humor.

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next update.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Katelyn
Wow, Arnav is so caring and protective of Khushi! Yeah, Khushi did enjoy the attention at the hospital and seeing how worried Arnav was! Love their star gazing moment while buildering together for the first time...dhak dhak dhak!! Wow so Khushi finally got her Suhaag Raat bed! Wondering if they will try it out...I mean just sit on it!! 😉 😆 Thanks, dear Wiwy for taking the time to update even with your super busy schedule!

Thanks Kate! Your comments are always so cute like you! ⭐️❤️🤗

Yes Khushi finally got her SR bed! What shall I make them do now? Any idea?😉

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: massu91
Wow amazing update...loved it

m glad u changed it frm ss to ff

but pls dont stretch d story unnecesarily..otherwise it vl loose its essence
Loving d story sooo far

Thanks yaar! I know there is a limit to stetching! A twist in the tale coming up probably in the next chapter! Hope you like it.

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Nirjhoramanisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I am surprised too.who can chooses suhag raat bed for khushi 😉 😉 😉

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Excellent Update wiwy👏

My grabber😊

His care and concerns...no matter what as always😊

He is in denial and confused with his relation with La and now with Khushi😕

He is way too possessive ...😉

He knows her pains as an orphan...

He can do anything for her and make her do anything ay the same time.pretty daring😳

I knew it the Mighty BED will be the cause of reunion...😆😳

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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Nkayani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Loved the update.
Wonder what will happen on that bed 😳

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johsim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

jst read dis WOW lvd how u incorporated scenes from d show & made it ur own originality BRILLIAN T

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Wiwy, What a wonderful update. I am hysterical 🤣just love the ending and the bed! Brilliant. 👏

I truly am enjoying your FF and I am glad you are finding time to write amidst the chaos of ad!❤️ Cyn

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