*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Wiwy darling,

Thanks for the update despite being so terribly tied up! Thoroughly enjoyed...Arnav ji toh kamaal hain bas! Now just hope he sticks around in the apartment thodi der ke liye😉 You know what i mean... Ramlal Guardji nahin hai, bechari Khushi akeyli hai, shock mein bhi hai... so itna toh banta hai!😆


See ya later...hope things ease up soon on the home front... big hug wicked one!


Issk meri🤗Bas 'thodi der ke liye'?😉 What will he do in that limited period? Bolo to?😉
Tum bhi na! Thodi paagal par cute ho!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Issk meri🤗Bas 'thodi der ke liye'?😉 What will he do in that limited period? Bolo to?😉
Tum bhi na! Thodi paagal par cute ho!😆


Pagal toh main hoon, wiwy the wicked! Kabhi kabhi cute bhi shayad! But more than anything, main REALISTIC hoon!! So i'm not getting my hopes up. Thodi der se zyada he will not stick around. You and Khushi... both of you will make sure of that. You wait and watch! There might be a kiss, if i'm lucky
Bas. Usske baad they'll fight/hurt/someone will call/doorbell by Ramlal guard ji who's just come back from shaadi and checking if all's ok with dear Khushi cos her light is on so late/kuchh na kuchh aisa hee. Then, humarey Arnav ji... he'll go bulidering out, get in the SUV and speed off at break-neck😆

So my dear wiwy...thodi der is kaafi. Let's make the most of it methinks😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



Yep Anita, our Arnav is dreamy😉.
Thanks for liking my story all through.
Okay next update I will try to stop at a bad spot, what say😆Quite a few bad spots are spinning in my crazy head!



Do these bad spots mean no cliff hangers... That would be nice
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


My story energised a tired Sohara! I am humbled and damn pleased I could do this for a dear friend!😃😃

😃
oh yeah, you write beautifully.
I wonder, how cum it is your first FF!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks...u don't know some days I don't do anything but read some fan fic just to divert my mind...and when its very written with good vocab and story...it makes it even more addictive.
thanks again...continue pls
Sri,
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update 👏

arshi pick up her in his Amy
n take her hospital
his smirk n smile ... make khushi mad

ARSHI SCENE. ... ARE AWESOME DEAR...

I love they hospital, car, hayye demiya, remembered about scooter
forget her apartment key n all grauds are in leave
Arnav muttered under his breath,"Unbelievable! All the guards have disappeared! After all they are guards of her building! Some of her pagalpan (madness) must have rubbed off on them!".

Khushi sniffed loudly, her red face threatening to burst into tears!

Arnav said hurriedly, "Don't cry Khushi. Let me think. I can take you to my house or put you up in a hotel or''"

"No, no, no, I want to go home," Khushi cried.

The sight of her tears melted Arnav. "Alright, alright! Then there is only one thing to do. I will climb up to your flat and open the door from inside. The lock of the sliding door of your balcony is still broken isn't it?"

khushi is happy n tell she to want to climb
n challenge him.

The harness swayed as a cool gust of wind hit them. Khushi closed her eyes and buried her face in his broad muscled back.

Arnav looked back at her and smirked, "Darr gayi kya? (Are you scared?)"

Khushi fluttered her eyes open, "Nahi to'..


ARSHI CLIMBING WAS TOO AWESOME
THEY TALK STAR
ARNAV GOT TO KNOW KHUSHI PAST
KHUSHI ASK HOW THEY BREAKUP????
arnav tell her...
😲 😲 bigger 😲 😲 Khushi stared at him in daze. What was he trying to say?!

But before she could ponder on this anymore, he prised open the door and holding her hand brought her inside her room.

Khushi was lost in thought, when she heard him exclaim,"What the'! What is that doing here?" pointing straight ahead.

Khushi raised her eyes! Lo behold! In her room, right in front of her eyes was the Suhaag Raat (First Wedding Night) Special bed they had checked out together in the 'Only Beds' showroom!




please continue.
thank you for mp me...
sorry for late reply
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Please don't embarrass me😳 by apologising Horizon! Coz its I who am honoured that you want to read my story in one go!😃 Yes 'grand response' as you put it is a great booster, true. What thrills me is when I am told that my story brings a smile to a tired face! That feeling is awesome! Thanks for commenting, Horizon. I was missing you no doubt! 🤗

Hi dear wiwy now i am fully embarrassed to have not seen your response last few days!Embarrassed
That missing is very much mutal dear with you not being much on the thread lately..🤗
I was telling Durga, how crazy my days are these days, but end up coming back to the thread to relieve that stress, altho haven't been able to read any wonderful analyses. Yes, very much looking forward to a day to calmly sit and read you...as I know all my wait will be more than worth! keep up the good work dear, You are doing fab!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur


Pagal toh main hoon, wiwy the wicked! Kabhi kabhi cute bhi shayad! But more than anything, main REALISTIC hoon!! So i'm not getting my hopes up. Thodi der se zyada he will not stick around. You and Khushi... both of you will make sure of that. You wait and watch! There might be a kiss, if i'm lucky
Bas. Usske baad they'll fight/hurt/someone will call/doorbell by Ramlal guard ji who's just come back from shaadi and checking if all's ok with dear Khushi cos her light is on so late/kuchh na kuchh aisa hee. Then, humarey Arnav ji... he'll go bulidering out, get in the SUV and speed off at break-neck😆

So my dear wiwy...thodi der is kaafi. Let's make the most of it methinks😆


Sorry missed out on this page somehow! Okay I can make him stick around thodi der se zyada !ssk ! But you know what that will lead to, na? Are you ready for it?😉😳😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls add me dear ...i hve sent u a request
this ff is really funny and cute
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dear friends, Thankyou for liking and commenting on Chapter 12! 🤗I am delighted!😃 Rabba ve!


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