*COMPLETED*#2!FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 12 to 20

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Horizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Hi Wiwy, deeply apologize not being able to read last 3/4 parts. Regret that but excited at the prospect of reading all of them at the same time without waiting for the updates! Looking forward to read them very soon. Hearty congratulations on the grand response to your story! Keep it up!

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Wiwy, I really loved this chapter. 😳 Loved Arnav taking her to the hospital, the hospital scene, thinking about the scooter. And, he's back to buildering, this time with Khushi on his back. Loved the scene with the stars, his reasons to break off with La and finally that bed. 😆 I somehow knew that this was the bed that would be delivered eventually. I really felt like watching these scenes on the screen.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Horizon
Hi Wiwy, deeply apologize not being able to read last 3/4 parts. Regret that but excited at the prospect of reading all of them at the same time without waiting for the updates! Looking forward to read them very soon. Hearty congratulations on the grand response to your story! Keep it up!

Please don't embarrass me😳 by apologising Horizon! Coz its I who am honoured that you want to read my story in one go!😃 Yes 'grand response' as you put it is a great booster, true. What thrills me is when I am told that my story brings a smile to a tired face! That feeling is awesome! Thanks for commenting, Horizon. I was missing you no doubt! 🤗

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: indi52
hi wiwy,

absolutely loved 11... the last bit, the first bit, the middle bit too. very nice. quick peaks into a smouldering pot of feelings, world going topsy turvy in the heat of attraction... then the rain hug.

very nice 12 too... nice tying in of buildering, then the filmi climb and the stars. now the bed... lovely.

i know life's pretty hectic for you now, but somehow i think you find the story a great place to relax and let it all out. hospital, huh... poor baby. 🤗

Hey indi dear,

I am so happy you loved chapter 11. Chapter 12 was rather mushy, I know.😳 But thanks for liking tat too!

You understand me alright. 👍🏼I do write to let it all out.😃

We have to go to the hospital again tomorrow for her check up.

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@soni19sweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

di take rest

but update also

dont be burden

but relive us also

di dont me awake much

but give something for dreaming to us also

update soon

but after checking on you

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Wiwy, I really loved this chapter. 😳 Loved Arnav taking her to the hospital, the hospital scene, thinking about the scooter. And, he's back to buildering, this time with Khushi on his back. Loved the scene with the stars, his reasons to break off with La and finally that bed. 😆 I somehow knew that this was the bed that would be delivered eventually. I really felt like watching these scenes on the screen.

Hey Durgey,

Thanks for liking this chapter and commenting on it so minutely! Thanks for your love and support all through. Yes, th😉at is the ultimate bed isn't it? Aww! You actually felt like watching the scenes ono screen!😃

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Arnav is so dreamy

I love how Arnav shouted in the hospital to take care of her

And must you always stop at the good spots

I hope you update fast

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: shruti46
wen will u update ?

By Sunday night definitely. 😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
Arnav is so dreamy
I love how Arnav shouted in the hospital to take care of her
And must you always stop at the good spots
I hope you update fast

Yep Anita, our Arnav is dreamy😉.

Thanks for liking my story all through.

Okay next update I will try to stop at a bad spot, what say😆 Quite a few bad spots are spinning in my crazy head!

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IssK.

@IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Wiwy darling,

Thanks for the update despite being so terribly tied up! Thoroughly enjoyed...Arnav ji toh kamaal hain bas! Now just hope he sticks around in the apartment thodi der ke liye😉 You know what i mean... Ramlal Guardji nahin hai, bechari Khushi akeyli hai, shock mein bhi hai... so itna toh banta hai!😆

See ya later...hope things ease up soon on the home front... big hug wicked one!