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Hey folks so with this
we reached the last chapter...

This is for every reader out there, thanks to everyone those who liked, commented and to those also who were silent too...
But since this my last chapter for the story i will like to take some time here...

First of all thanks everybody for such an amazing response i have never ever thought it would gather this much liking...
And secondly I am very sorry i couldn't reply to everyone personally for reviews but i promise I have read them and loved them all...

Thanks very much guys...



The update is in two following post hope you guys enjoy it...😊 😊



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Chapter-5



"Hey that's unfair.." Rey rasped getting irritated..Kriya looked at him with eyes filled up of a large warning signs..."Either you have to do this or i am strucking off our names from that contest you get this point clear..." she pointed her finger at him with a rage filled face...

rey arched back himself leaning on couch in fear of these two lady in-charge of his life..."But i am tired.." with this a very high on energy nia jumped at his side and wrapped her tiny hands around his shoulders..."Then dad drink this, its good for your health.." she passed him a bowl full of vegetable soup, or in exact terms they were all boiled veggies mashes and squashed till there liquid state minus any seasoning...

"Eww...keep that away from me, i have had enough of this bald thing which you both call soup for good two weeks, now i am fine all hail and hearty... So No to it.." he dumped that soup china dish on side table and turned towards Kriya..

"Listen we have been rehearsing since morning and its almost afternoon, let me have some breathe woman..you two are getting such a high dose for me..." he cribbed and pushing both the females away made his way to bedroom... kriya and nia both giggled at his back..

Kriya proposed the option of backing out from competition considering rey's sickness as doctor warned to be cautious from lifting and heavy sport training because his spleen was on verge of enlargement due to ailment, so she thought it would be better for them to not proceed with dancing... but rey was adamant on continuing it and for that he got to such an extend by fixing for his scanning appointment and after a day of spending at path lab his abdomen scans came clearer...she still remember his words which rey aired in her ear while driving back home...

"I won't let you have any chance of dodging me Ms.kriya... come on show me your moves..." he laughed with a vicious echo in his laughter. making her ponder upon what this man have in him..these words still flare up her every single cell and the picture of his sinful laugh make her go weak on knees.

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chucking all these memories out from her brain kriya checked on to rey making sure he is taking ample rest although he proclaims himself to be fit but she knew how vulnerable this strenuous practices and his weak insides could be.. she peeped into his den and scrunched her nose with frown.

"I thought you were having a break, may be sleeping in your fluffy bed..but his highness is messing with some of old gold stuff...why so" she marked her presence into his room.


rey was kneeling down on floor with a pile of clothing lined up in front of him and his closet... he was seeking through some of old clothes may be..smiling his pearly whites at her..."Ohh..this is nothing i was just getting things for our costume..if you have forgotten then i should tell you, we are left with only 5 days for our performance, so ain't we should be bothering and scratching heads for dresses to be worn..." kriya's mouth was wide opened as she was feeling jittery this man who seems so excited about the dance was same one who was cribbing and throwing tantrums few days ago for making him tap feet...

"What.." he asked her on getting such barren response from kriya... she recovered soon and replied.." Umm-hmm nothing.. nothing much i was just wondering why are you peeping for some ages old stuff when we can buy new outfits you see..." she pressed her lips controlling her mind to focus on task in hand.. rey tossed some of his worn out button up shirts in all bright to light pastels and some in broad checks too... kriya grabbed one green large check one and held it from edges.."Eww... we are definitely not going to use such creepy scrap." she bundled it and crumpled the piece of fabric again to that lower shelf of his closet..

Rey wore a irked face and questioned her.."Why.. whats the problem in using old stuff, they save time and funds too madame." he again took out that shirt..

kriya snatched it away dumping it in his room's bin.."No way, this is not happening.. For outfits we are going for a shopping trip and Mr. Scrooge stop being a cheapskate, gosh you earn truck loads from your bakery its number one in town and here you are digging it in borrows...Arghh.." she collected all those clothes rey has scattered earlier and packed them back to there place... "what a shopping spree.. no save me from it, last i got down to mall Nia literally emptied my pockets, consider me out from it i am just comfortable in some of my own collections, you wanna go then shell out your penny.." he threw a new fit, since the time rey has been sick or in actual extending his disease thingy looking out for one or other excuse he had become a tantrum box...Kriya rolled her eyes anticipating his next move, she inquired.."For what are you saving up your balances?? no just clear it out, do you have some personal debts to pay?" he nodded his head in no..

"Then... for what are you reserving them? are you gonna issue some capital out of these retained earnings under your Cafe's name to some of privileged customers?" he was surprised to hear such type of weird questions..." Hell..No, what have gotten into you woman?"rey stopped her from further line up of such statement..." they are for Nia.." he said meekly with embarrassment and then settled down on bed... kriya laughed out with his sweet side of being a daddy.. she took place beside him.."You really think by not shopping for an outfit you are gonna save for Nia's future" she suppressed her sniggers while saying this, rey pouted at her.."Haven't you heard of a stitch in time saves nine,Its just called being foresighted.."


Kriya stood facing him, cupping his hands in soft hold.."I admire you as a father reyaansh, but sometimes we should let go things, don't hold them in fist..the more tightly you grip them they will surely slip down leaving you empty handed. " he said further "Just like sea sand." kriya affirmed that and then continued.."So up for shopping now?"


"Do i have any choice." to this she motioned her head negatively. " Come on get up you fat bum" kriya pulled his arm making him stand on feet..



"Have i heard something like shopping??" Nia peeked from door in thrill... rey answered her "Yeah.. but only for us." he stretched his arm across kriya's shoulder and winked at nia.. kriya looked at him in amaze, what was he doing..

Nia replied with attitude in her walk and voice "SO..what, may be i can get lucky too."

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True to her words nia did got lucky because the first section they entered was kids wing, and she nearly took whole of the new collections on stands..Rey was left only with bags in hand and a long bill to be paid..now it was Kriya's turn to select her dress according to which they will buy rey's matching outfit.

"Daddy I am going to try my new pullover now, i can't resist the warm red color of it..please." she made a baby face to melt rey..

"But Nia kiddo this is ladies section, wait till we reach home.." he was apprehensive regarding the staff allowing her to use trail room.. "No.. i am going it will take only two minutes, you please stay here and hold these bunch of selections for Kri, i am gonna sneak a bit.." she loaded him with all sort of colored flurry fabrics and ran to one of cubicles.. rey was still grasping what his little ten year old done that he got another blow when he witnessed an enchanting feminine presence blocking his view, she was nicely covered with in a soft fabric velvet red colored short sleeveless dress..."Nia..Nia..look.." she came out of her changing room and called for nia.. this grabbed rey's mind on place which was till now mingling in the senses of this velvety red heavenly lady..


"Oh..hmm.. she is in another cubical trying out for herself, you need anything" he voiced out..

Kriya don't why she was feeling conscious of herself under his strong melting gazing.."I..I just wanted her to see this costume, she forced me into this.." kriya covered her right hand with left one in order to stand stable..."I.. will change into something else, this might not be the one for dance.." she started to move out while taking some of the pieces from rey's grip but he didn't loosened his hold..."Rey.. give them to me, ease your hands.."


"No.." he murmured because he was still under the daze of sanctified young lady standing high in front of him "What?? are you all right" kriya tried to probe him..

He focused his brain nerves to the current situation and then said.."Yeah.. i meant, don't change into anything..This is perfect" her every inch of smooth skin rose to same color as of her dress and she turned to go back for dressing up in her casuals again..the moment Kriya took 360 degree turn, rey's all fantasies came alive, he was facing those illusions of years ago which he had tasted once upon.. he lifted his hands up until they came to the level of Kriya's back of nape.. with trembling voice he asked her..."Kriya.. this tattoo, what it is it??"

she was busy sorting her clothes so without looking back at him she replied.."Oh..that, its nothing one of my teenage deeds.. I got myself inked with this wings art way back in high school at that time i used to see it as connectivity...i just loved the way artist had drawn those things.." with this she moved and latched the door leaving behind a bewildered reyaansh..

"I guess I loved it too... since always..." rey tracked down the aisles of cash counter paying for the bill, messaged nia that he is having some important dealings at work, they have to back home at their own..

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Competition day..

"Look at these dancers..Is this 'Dancing with stars' or something.." rey exclaimed the moment he entered the competition venue at Manhattan club NYC..curling his fingers around Nia's tiny fist he showed how nervous all this was making him, dancers waiting in the reception area, some were polishing their routines and some were fixing their costumes.. Kriya sighed in excitement and calmed him up.."Hey..everything will be great, just don't panic..we will be good tonight okay.."

"I am focused, but dont wobble on me.." rey let out his fears, he was worried for his dance..kriya smiled at him.."No..i won't is it fine now.. just do the deep breathing" rey glared at her and before he could say something more idiotic nia interrupted him..

"Now don't be a Drama Daddy.. just break the leg.." both kriya and rey laughed at her.. there was a speaker announcement..

"PARTICIPANTS KINDLY CHECK THEIR NAMES ON ENROLL SHEET, MARK THEIR PRESENCE AND BOOK THE TABLES ACCORDING TO VISITORS WITH THEM.."

turning her head to rey and nia, kriya instructed them.."You both go and line up for tables booking and i will do the enrollment formalities.. and rey book two tables.."

rey was confused at this."why two when we can perfectly manage in one.." kriya twitched her nose before answering him.."because our parents are here too rey, your dad is gonna be here in time.. look i know you are not in good terms with him but for family sake, he has all the rights to come and watch his sons glory.." rey was wondering whether this girl is for real or she is just a cloud mist..

they all lead in different way but something stopped kriya's feet in middle, she saw a female with her partner which cause her rooted..kriya uttered slowly..."Myra.. what is she doing here.." from behind she had a tap on her shoulder and that was from sharon.."what's it.. sissy you look as if you have seen a ghost" kriya fumbled to her and then pointed in Myra's direction..

"Umm... i saw her too, and as per swayam's resources her man Joe is friends with organizers.." kriya still unable to find correct words was staring straight at Myra..sharon placed her hand on kriya's back for support..." Shar.. its killing me, its suffocating..."

"Shh..relax you are my strong headed girl so dont let a presence effect you, do the thing for what you are here.." sharon cupped her face wiping those tiny sweat pearls on her forehead.. Kriya nodded at her but the next thing took breathe out of her, she saw rey and nia meeting Myra and Rey hugged her sideways talking something in her ears...

kriya rushed to bar area for the need of a strong shot..ordering her drink she viewed every performance on stage and she downed three Vodka shots till ten minutes left for their dance.. she was merrily cursing someone sitting on high stool of wooden bar front when rey came up to her.."what.. you can't be serious, you are down with alcohol at this hour.." rey shaken her up to bring her back in senses...


kriya lifted her drowsy red eyes and pulled his cheeks.."aww.. you look so adorable when you are angry..." he removed her hands and made her stand straight..."How many have you gulped down till now.."

kriya counted her fingers.."umm.. let me see.. one.. two .. three.. yes three shots, bar tender one more please.." she ordered for refill but rey dragged her out of crowd and made her eyes interlocked with his.."Listen to me kriya.. here, we are for our dance.. three shots are not much, you can handle it okay.. we are gonna be at that stage in next 5 minutes, so be yourself.. for yourself, for your academy, for me.. for us.." last words were faded to her ear drums as their name had been announced by then..


Kriya removed her Over coat and unveiled her perfect petite frame wrapped up in that red dress... seeing her like this made rey skip his heart beats.. he curled his hands in tight fist, controlling himself from losing ...He instantly unzipped his jacket and came out in sheer fabric V-neck matching rich red colored shirt and black pants.. he was looking as if a Greek god has domed vibrant shades of love.. They positioned on the center stage, Kriya on left corner and reyaansh on right corner.. a spot light reflecting their shadows on wooden flooring.

Abhi abhi toh mile ho
Abhi na karo chootne ki baat
Abhi abhi toh pasand aaye ho
Abhi abhi rootne ki baat
Abhi abhi toh roshni aayi
Abhi na karo muh chupane ki baat



As the melodious beats of song fill up the hall, every thing fell into silence except for the rhythmic tunes and two bodies taking poise postures in sync with it..Both moved their hands up in air making a wing and then again bringing them back to chest level in front.. these moves were pictured in shadows making it look like as if two beautiful birds were spreading their feathered wings.. they both spinned at their spots on one leg with speed and ceased their motion facing each other.


Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat
Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare



Rey crossed the distance between them..making spotlight featuring his every step towards kriya, she stood their with a desire in her eyes... he traced down left side of her cheek bed with back of his palm and trailed it down till her delicate waist.. making her swirl backwards.. his right hand clawed in perfection at her waist curve and left one tugged her elbow crook implicating the whirlpool of passion rising inside his chest...


Teri baazoo mein meri chahate samaaye
Teri dhadkanon ko meri dhadkane sunaye
Teri khwahishon se meri khwahishe riha hai
Teri karwato se meri daastan bayaan hai
Kya sukoon kya junoon
Hum nawa


Kriya was lost in his burning touch, that sensation was making her brain functions numb and her heart exhausting at accelerating rate. She was feeling foolish and wondered whether she was really dancing as per routines or his feathery soft stimulation were causing her to prance with music... she tilted her head towards his hand's direction which was creating havoc at her arm and then with a pinch of pull she felt herself getting elevated in air... her hands crossed above her head in peaks and passing his right shoulder..her body making parallel alignments to floor in straight ideal stance making her toes point in front.. Rey placed his hands at hips and at back of knee in erect way...

Abhi abhi dil ki suni hai
Abhi na karo zamane ki baat
Abhi abhi baat rukhi hai
Abhi abhi dohrane ki baat
Abhi abhi aawargi aayi
Abhi na karo sambhalne ki baat
Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai..
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat

Bringing her back to ground he stepped away from her and they both took air turns on single feet lifting other leg high up in space at diagonal angles.. they made a swift circle around the platform while twirling like this.. and at last step in completion of circle both stretched their arms in direction of each other envisaging others emotions to feel the way other do...

Rey arched down towards floor and kriya curved her back at his humped body resting her position on him... he interlaced their arms from elbow lock, kriya's one leg was folded inwards to thighs.. and other one was standing high pointing toes at ceiling..rey took off his posture making her rise more and then gently snaked her to his right leg out making kriya trail down his body side ways stretching her leg outwards and slowly slowly stirring her leg along his leg sending him warmth of her cozy skin beneath his cloth..


Woh subah toh bewaja ho
Ki guzare bin tumhare jis ki raat


Rey lessened his grip around her arm and buttered her down on floor like a soft muslin cloth she drifted apart in half sitting half spreading position and he himself motioned away like a magnet on his bottoms in sitting posture..taking floor turn they both rose up and moved in same direction rey leading kriya.. both took tiny pause and then highered their one hand in torch like demeanor and shrinking their bodies till knees they bend down and then again jerked it up in seconds kicking right leg infront till middle of torso level.. kriya ran in opposite ways and rey catches her by wrist making her spin on heels across his manly broad front cage and then opening wide their touching hands they made a scorpion tail like sketch with their free hand.. He slipped her to floor making her do side ways split perfectly aligned to hard stage and her face never leaving sight of his sculpted one's.

kriya and rey were so much into each other that their eyes didn't left even for a single blink the hypnotizing contact, it seemed as if their eyes were talking today which they had in them.. Rey brought her back infront of him, such that her back was in audience direction and they both swayed in same ways like two snakes were creating an enchanting fever... her hips moved in flow matching the pulse of song to the brilliance, he serpentine his hands on both the side dips of her womanish curves..they both took steps back and front with same footwork..


gingerly turning her back to his chest he captured her right arm and right leg making a 90 degree angles at her left knee he swept kriya from ground taking speedy turns..calmly descended her on floor making her lying at back.. instantly without missing the time slot he bounced her up facing him again and crept his right arm across her back feeling some of her exposed flesh..making her goosebumps alert altogether in every part of her body.. and locked his left hand with her right hand..

Teri baazuo mein meri chahate samaaye
Teri dhadkanon ko meri dhadkane sunaye
Teri khwahishon se meri khwahishe riha hai
Teri karwato se meri daastan bayaan hai
Kya sukoon kya junoon
Hum nawa'


They both nuzzled into others face resting their nose tip on respective cheeks and oscillated their hip bones perfectly in harmony.. Kriya slightly placed her leg in between his both legs and they jibed making a small circle, creating short waves with their hip jerk.. her flat belly was glued with his washed out abs creating hundreds of bee swarms fluttering inside both of their muscles.It showed on faces with a light pink hue.. they had an intense pool of emotions unwinding in eyes and the proximity of hot and racy breathes was making it difficult for both of them..



The last bit of their performance was with kriya bending down and again spiraling upwards to his jawline roving her hand at his well designed muscled front.. and then rey took their ending stance by enveloping her right leg around his torso, spinning together and making her left leg slip through middle, kriya looped her back with her neck exposing enough for him making her hairs sway down in air, he nestled on her throat lingering his lip brim on the lining.. tantalizing her to the tiniest cell part of her tender frame.


Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina neend tihare



The second music subsided whole atmosphere was filled up with loud applause and cheering sounds. Kriya and rey were still wrapped up in the environs they shared for last 2:30 minutes, their heads making random patterns and joining the pieces of what they had actually done back few minutes on receiving the hosts shrieking voice they both took a bow and then gracefully left the stage.


After a torturing and awkward silence of 15 minutes between both of them,it was when their name was announced for winning couple they hugged each other in excitement.Nia hugged them from back...Kriya pecked her before moving on platform to receive their trophy and prize cheque amount.


Everyone in both families was on moon be it kriya's side or from rey's side they were having a gala time when rey stepped towards his parents his dad engulfed him in a proud hug and then Nia to clinged to his neck.It was like he was all of a sudden became the piece of attraction in museum.The moment he was marching in kriya's direction his ex-wife Myra came in and they had a conversation, Nia to was with them and all this was watched by Kriya from far distance she decided what she had to do next and left away venue, rushing down the streets.

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"Hey..sharon where is my dance partner, i have to congratulate her too." rey approached to sharon and swayam.. and to his dismay sharon's reply was not for what he was looking.."Rey..she already left you are too late."


"what do you mean she left??" rey was unable to grasp things.. swayam proceeded even before his wife would churn his best friend into pieces..."Rey...she left us, she has given this for you.." he handed him that price cheque and continued.."She wanted you to have it, and make a better future for your family with Myra, she may be leaving the town too" this was enough for rey to join every piece, why kriya got drunk just before performance, why she have vanished and her eyes which were saying things to him.. may be everything.

"Urrghh..mad woman she runs her brain too much, god." he dropped to near by chair with his head in hands.Nia came and cupped his hands "Dad..listen too me, i don't know whether She..your ex-wife i mean my biological mother loved you ever or not (Nia pointed to Myra).. Kri, she surely loves you not only you.. she love us dad... go get her, don't make yourself pay latter for missing this."


His dad too patted rey's back "Son..this is the real challenge in your life, don't mess this up." rey got up with a new emitting strength in him and readied to leave behind kriya but he stopped on Nia's call.

"Dad." he sprang up "yes.. what?"


"You know every year around 35 to 40 people try jumping off Brooklyn bridge, because of broken hearts." she made him cautious by a warning issue.. Rey gulped hard.''I will keep that in mind thanks for it." he turned back but again got distracted by his little one "Now what, do you wanna tag along too??" he asked her..


"No..its your proposal, just this much to say, bring my Mom home or else stay at beggars junction." they both laughed and rey hired a taxi down to Kriya's home at Brooklyn although it was 30 minutes drive from Manhattan to their locality but it seemed to rey like hours.


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Here he stood at her front porch with the keys in his hands of her house, Sharon knew she won't open the door so she gave a copy of her key's to him.. He unlocked the teak wooden barricade and without making any sound move to her room.. because their was not even single trace of her in hallway, as guessed rightly she was there in her washroom having a warm shower.. by the look of her room rey could tell she has almost packed her entire living into suit cases and bags..

On hearing latch being opened rey composed himself on her white bed spread with a serine smile playing on his lips...kriya entered her room in bathrobe which reaches upto her knee length and warm droplets shined in that yellow gold light like emerald crystals on her skin making him untamed with love and craving.. he somehow let words flow out of his mouth "So..you leaving??" this brought back kriya to her surrounding...


"Hmm..YOU..." she was shocked and surprised to have him uninvited here " yup..me.. so answer me you leaving this city, home and academy?"


"What the hell are you doing here.. and that to in my bedroom have some decency, you moron.."she yelled at him covering her self with hands..


"No..first i questioned you, so no back fires.. you leaving again like the last time you did, runaway upon me years ago." he finally poured out things stitching past with present..

"What..when did i left you earlier?? and yes you get it i am moving my base to Baltimore with my parents.. i want to be with them fine you got your answers now." he nodded and then got up from bed decreasing distance between them with every step "pretty much.. and just like the way you left me after showering me with sweet torture years ago at Prom night." he slipped his hands in pockets and stood adjacent to her, she averted her eyes still not understanding what he meant.

"why are you bushing around just say it clearly.. will you?" she found some courage in her left under those scrutinizing gaze of his...he lifted her chin and then clutching her from slender waist he pressed his cold yet soft lips on hers.. she felt like buds blooming inside her with his massaging lips,he deepened the kiss with every caress of her petal lips.. re-living her slumber cells making it satiable yet short one rey ceased that fiery matting of their lips, still embracing her lip brim.. and she mouthed.


"It was you that night?" her words brushed like a warm airs on his lips.. his eyes were closed with lingering passion in him "Hmm...now you got it, we were always meant to be." she tried to reason him out...but he pressed his forehead with hers and kissed her nose.


"Shh... Kriya, their was nothing what you thought of me and Myra getting along ...she just congratulated me and i said her that my life has gotten new sliver linings of love..yes, didn't you thought it was obvious for me to find out that Myra hadn't ever written letter to me.. because that was from you..those reading the signs are your word not hers.. it was always yours and always they will be with you, i do want to read signs but with you... and surely want to have new sparkling lights but with you." she had those crystals set on her eyelids threatening to fall down "When did you found about letter and about us being at prom night??"

"I knew it the minute i re-read the letter after you left and about you being that tattoo girl with whom i shared my first kiss, just got know on that shopping day" he finally did some revelations...She was bowl over with this fact.."You were hiding it over four days??" it miffed her.

"I was trying to be romantic.. thought to say it after dance but you ran away..." he made an obvious quote, she bit her tongue and then rey pursued for more.." i wanna have future with you kriya, When i wake up in the morning it should be you snuggled in my arms.. and the only one whom i want to kiss goodnight under those quilts, because the time i held your hands for dance at very instant i knew i could never ever imagine not being able to hold them again.." he took a slight pause to have her rosy face." and after all this when normally someone loves the other person just the way i do.. yes I LOVE YOU kriya, marrying that loved one is only thing to be done." she had runny eyes and red nose by now...

He lifted her hand in his and asked her "Marry me.." she searched for somethings in his eyes, things which could say that all this is lie but the deeper she drown the more she saw love for her in those caramel eyes "So will you??" he was getting impatient for not getting her reply..


Kriya circled her arms around his neck and murmured softly "Yes... definitely." he lifted her in sheer happiness, and pecked on her forehead fondling his fingers at the knot of her bathrobe.

"You better change into something, or else i won't mind giving Nia a little new company.." he winked at her... kriya giggled at his cheesy line "Ain't you being pervy."

He stared at her with dangerous desirous emerging as high tides inside him "Who is stopping you from being it" she captured his lips with that,tangling her fingers in his silky mane..she snuggled more to his front anatomy, it was like pieces of signs which over the years they had passed by are now blessing them with manifesto of being intimate in single thread.


"Whats all under the clothes Kriya?" her eyes flickered because of the bombshell he dropped.


"Reyaansh Singhania you are such a creep." she punched hard in chest and left his embrace creating some distance.


"What just come with it.. whats all under the clothes Kriya?" he lifted his eyes with a smirk spread across his broad jawline.. Kriya passed him a grin and provocatively tracing his jackets zipper down with her finger she purred into his ear "Still you haven't figured it out." saying so she nictitated at him, taking steps away towards door.


"Huh..was it a clue or something." He was quiet baffled by this sudden change in her tone and this enticing walk.



"Ohh..stop being so innocent Baker guy, what you really thought i wouldn't know it that you check me out or even fantasies about me being in.." she left things upon his imagination.


"You being in??" rey tried to get things out from her but she was playing smart.


"Figure it out yourself Big boy..." Kriya stretched her long left leg and positioned it along door frame revealing her leggy beauty before escaping into her walk in closet.

"Damn..She is good." Rey smiled at the thoughts of having this wonder beauty in those skimpy lace Victoria's secret collection.


"What could it be.. a feisty red or inconspicuous black.." he slide his hands in pockets following the path she was torching to.

It took her few minutes and she was promenading towards the door's frame leading to hallway.. He read her inveigling poise, she was out of those white Terry cotton bathrobe and know enrobed her perfect curvacious body in a neon red satin short kimono robe which reached upto her mid thighs giving him access to her long slender smooth legs.. his eyes drifted along her syncing steps.. she have put on six inches black pumps which clicked on marble tiles making reverberating sounds in empty dim light house.. His heart skipped beats along the lither movements of her carved hips.. They moved in a way coaxing his prudence.

She curled her upper body and stroked her finger nails from black shining pumps till her inner thighs fringing her leggy beauty..inflaming the wild thoughts of rey's sanity.."Are you ready for some racy business." the croaky voice sent him signals of tempting strings.


"And what's the play about?" he frowned in amaze.


She flowed coarsely " In your all career you might have feasted upon worlds most delicious desserts but the one you are gonna taste today will be by far the best delicacy you have ever laid your taste-buds on..." and she vanished away with that in dim lit corridor leading to kitchen.



"You know you dance sexy, when under alcohol.." rey radiated wooing her with his sugary voice. His eyes went flung open with her next captivating move, her red satin robe slipped from shoulder back as she untied the knot around her waist belt.He stood rooted to his place with this sudden wildness in her walk, those black heels made her gait more feral..


"Ahhaan..like that, then I would advice you to have some also..may be it will reduce your envision and your hands become more actionable..." she hinted him with luring desires rising in her.

She turned to face him causing him stop at place, noticing the surrounding he acknowledged that they were in kitchen area, the white diamond light reflected her enamored stance.Now it dawned upon him she was in a deep red Victoria's secrets number..A flirty and flaunting mesh flyaway front with a matching V-strings making a dreamy statement.


She twiddled with a satin ribbon which kept her upper overlay intact with her privy curves letting them concealed,soft winds from opened latch of windows caused her ruffle layers which descended till her upper thigh to wave and unveil her sweet belly button.. making rey go gaga over her divine feminine curves.

"You know that's not making it easy for me.. I just want to trap you in embrace, touch these softness and soon want to sprawled up being cozy by your side." He declared shamelessly his ravenous to have her all for himself.


"And for that you have to work hard Boy." having enough of her this tempting seductress he grabbed her from waist causing her to jam to his rugged front.


"So.. Am i having a chocolate wrapped Au naturel" he saw her hands working on chocolate syrup bottle kept on right side of kitchen counter.



"Lucky guess... so what say up for madness?" she stretched out the strings of her satin ribbon making her outlay drift apart giving him ingress. His hands swapped the sheer lace material revealing her cleavage having the delight of rich aisles. Rey flicked fingers through that part.. leaving her in tickles she groaned high filling up the atmosphere with paced up pumping of breathes..


"Anytime.. as long as I am getting a birthday suit coated with sweets, I am loving it.." he reached out to her hand and took hold of that chocolate sauce dispenser.. He drizzled out some of the liquid down her throat valley letting it to decide its own way... and his other hand closed around her hips, she gasped and shivered with this flooded merciless desires.His fingers flexed into her mesh fabric clad bottoms, he could sense her bare muscles underneath the fabric going tensed with every brush of his finger tip.

He lifted her and settled her on the counter..and stared down at her, counter bring her almost to his height,his eyes glittered. He had taken the bait rightly and thrill of that had taken over her until she couldn't think, only long breathes were there the last one filling her lungs with with strong essence of vanilla, sugar, chocolate and Rey's musk..


His Lips caressed from her neckline to her bosom alley,licking all the way the sweetness of sauce and the misty fragrance of her skin..Her nails dug into flesh of his shoulder blades as he explored the unseen beauty with the greatness of chocolate. His tongue trailed deeper secrets of her state of natural..He pushed her gently more backwards and she shifted. His one hand rolled up the lace fabric around her belly button and other one played around the inner thigh making her moan with carvings of her burning insides.


"Reyaansh..stop teasing me." she hissed sharply at his act of making her buckle down.

he scoffed at her. She could very well read his manly features being aroused under those moonlights peeping from her kitchen window. Her hands snaked from his shoulder till lower back of his frame and she passed her one hand around the waistband of his trouser and with other one she poured more of that chocolaty liquid on her now unmasked belly button and some on her above knee muscles..


He looked at her with half smile on his face and plunged to have the gourmet of sun-kissed skin of kriya with strong nutmeg flavored chocolate.Rey brushed his tongue tip around her belly "Its beyond my imagination to have bite of you and melt you on my tongue." she giggled at his savory confession, its the moment she was giving lead to him.The second he toyed with her belly and grazed the dollop of chocolate she moaned with pleasure.. "you have an unchained beast in you." she gripped her hands tightly around his torso fidgeting with his trousers button.


He trailed down to her knee and glaced that brown coated flesh portion upwards making her head go fly out of her wits... "That's the glorious chocolate symphony i have ever laid my hands on." he whispered that coming to her ear and nuzzling in her damp freshly shampooed hair fringes.

"I can't believe that i am about to let you do me on my kitchen counter." she laughed with a throaty sound...

"With you around It was bound to happen.." he connected his lips to hers passionately with a high rush of fluids flowing all inside their systems..


"Ain't you Hungry rey.." she was now inviting him for the final bite of their cahooted confection.


He wrapped her long lassy legs around his mid riff dropping down the already hanging upper in heaps leaving only a soft V-string piece shielding her..." I always have spot in me to have the finest meals."Rey recited loudly entering her master room, he towered her for rest of the night.They were embodied as 'Phosphorescent plumes' glowing in moon light under the bed covers.

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A sharp sun rays troubled her rhythmic warm breathes and she squinted her eyes adjusting to the bright day light entering her room..turning to her side she met with the most cutest sight she has ever dream of rey enveloping her tiny waist like never letting go her.. and his head drowned in her nape nestled comfortably like he was having the best sleep in last years.. she chuckled at his slightly parted lips and with sudden urge of this butterfly rising up her mouth she pecked him on upper lip.. this made rey to open his drowsy lashes but before she could even wish him a beautiful morning her landlines rang up.. being to exhausted from their nightcap act,Kriya pressed the speaker button allowing a furious Nia's voice to fill up the room..


"Good morning you two... If your all nights act have been ended will you both show up at home, I am damn hungry so come and cook me something.. bye." with this she ended the call... Kriya took time to register what happened a second ago and rey announced it to her..


"That's her fake cry.. don't worry you will get used to it." they both laughed with their sweet kiddo's antics..


Resting his head on elbow he bored in her groggy eyes.." You are just like a Christmas morning kriya!! up for round two?" he pecked her lips and kriya raised her eyes.


"Round two?"


"yeah..you, me and hot love making under warm shower and may be i can help you with those some of your Victoria's secrets laces too..." he had this naughty glint playing all over again... she pretended to think over it, but even before she could say anything her body swept of those soft mattress and being raised up by two cold hands cupping her like a baby and she found herself under warm raining sprinkle..



"I love you..Rey!!" she cooed against his bare chest..



"Love you too... Even fairytale characters would be jealous." were his words before claiming her again.




Echoes, silence, patience and grace... Forever and almost always!!!!


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So this was it.. the finale of this story...

I hope i haven't let down anyone, as i am no good dancer so whatever i have written above please forgive if i offended anyone.

and I never thought that i would be posting last part of this story here, at start it was just for fun sake i used to share with some of my friends who encouraged me to post it here...

Thanks to Kinjal, Misha, kuhu and Vaishali for you support and jhellofying my stupidness...

Hope everyone enjoyed it...

Thanks everyone for reading...


Regards

Pallavi...😊




Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago
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itney res maar daley update kha hey di
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*Res*
*Unres*

Your Jaan-e-man is here Pallu 😎...
Ahem!!! Ab seriously apne Res ki N i came running running Di 😉...

Apke update ki taraf aya jaye..
Uhmm!! Ahem!!!

As expected Rey stuck between 1 n a half 'Women' 🤣...
Haww!! Rey kinna kanjoos hai , dance competition k costume par bhi paise kharch karne usko azaab lag rahe hain...
Ab inni bhi kya saving karni yar ...
But chalo he did had a point when it came to save for his Nia...

N then he finally did agree on shopping , who can deny the 'Girls' now 😆...
Nia ko toh lucky hona he tha , uske daddy g uski baat kabhi bhi nai talte...
Wah!! Nia had unknowingly done such a Superb work by asking Kria to try out that Sexy sa Dress...
Rey got to know about his teenage Cinderella N unhe dance keliye hot sa outfit bhi mil gaya 😉...

Here enters the all time haddi , pehle KR ki life mein haddi bani , phir unki Kiss mein N now back to do drama 🤔...
Aggression mein aake Kria gulped 3 shots 😲..

Then their Dance was Mast 😎...
That complete sequence was Beautiful N so was the aong selected , one of my fav 👍🏼...
Ab esa dance kare gay ,'jheetna toh tha he 😉...

Kria left ..
Rey ne sahi kaha she runs her brain way too much 😆...
Wah!! Kya support diya hai Nia ne ap e Daddy ko...
"You know every year around 35 to 40 people try jumping off Brooklyn bridge, because of broken hearts."
That's what all he needed 🤣...
Kya entry mari seedha Bedroom mein 😉...
Oh!! So that letter was written by Kria herself N Rey knew it...
Yaani k Kria pehle se he latoo thi , over Rey 😆...
Rey found his Tattoo girl', the one he shared his first kiss with', great...
Then they confessed N he proposed her ...
Ahem!!! Then their romance was Hot 😳...

Kria dressed in Victoria's Secret number , seducing , teasing him , both of them ended on the kitchen counter with chocolate sauce N at the end in the bedroom ☺️...
Hot hot scene si ☺️...

*Sigh* This is a Fabulous story 😃...
Something very different from what I have read before...
Me loved it ❤️...
I'm gonna miss this story , specially Nia...

U know Di , u can give us an Epilogue if u want 😳...
If u ask for it i'm gonna be the first one to agree 😛...
Do think about it Di 😉


Edited by Roxxy47 - 12 years ago

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