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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

lovely update

Payel being the caring older sister is genuinely worried but Khushi has lost everything to this man that she wants all to herself...

Loved the way she made the first move in being a'vampire"...very natural keeping in mind her state,,,

Eager;y waiting to know what Arnav wants to talk to her about?

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

@PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Hey Farah hunnie amazing update once again. This FF is really unique and although the concept of arnav being a non-believer in marriage but the way that you have portrayed this is really marvelous.

khushi on the other hand is not a very restricted and prejudiced character and has a very calm perspective. she is not very modern but she is not so stereotyped that she is against Arnav's approach.

I really love the fact that they understand each other and they cant stay away no matter what...

Thank god arnav came for her otherwise khushi would have been heartbroken.

I wonder what it is that arnav didnt tell her earlier and wants to confess now?

Is it about why he doesnt believe in marriage and about his past?

How will khushi react to it? i really hope that she does not leave him alone and they get through this together.

Wonderful update.

Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by PrInCeSs_dIVa - 12 years ago

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

omg!!!!!!!!!!...tht was jst awesome...

payal is worried for khushi n thts in a way justified...

coz she knw ASR doesnt belive in marriage...

bt khushi is soo much in love wid him...

n she had came a way too far to go back...

its gonna be complicated...bt der r no arshi if der is no complication!!...ri8!!...😉

loved d last scene...😳

cant wait for d nxt part...

update soon plzzz...

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magss24

@magss24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

what an update loved it...especially payal n khushi's convo was amazing...just love their bonding...

and the vampire part..he he loved it..

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

omg!!
the last part was so new, so exciting!!!!
payals concern is so understood!
how can she not be confused when the two ppl who are in between this mess are confused themselves!!
amazing sister bonding!
and damn u arnav!!! god hes hot!

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

That was an amazing update!!!

All payals concerns are valid,least she knws that khushi has already given herself to him

Finally arnav admitted,and the smile on khushis face must've been worth it fr him

Lol khushi showed him jus how she feels abt him
And the last two dialogue were awesomeee

Amazinggg update!!!

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Huner

@Be.edgy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

Amazing!! I just read this whole story in a go and I must say you're a Brilliant writer. Cant wait for more. Im in love with this story..

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Natalia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#908

'Vampire' hahaha, she sure is behaving like one, aiming straight for the neck!

Man , their passion is combustible! What will happen to them! Payal is worried, as any elder sister should be! Hope it doesn't prove to be gravely correct!