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Posted: 12 years ago
Res 😉

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Amazing update di with an Awesome lines to finish😉"What hav u done to me Arnav ?" and "exactly the same thing u have done to me,baby" ...Loved,Loved,Loved it to the core😃
Payal's fears wer perfect being an elder sis...Am sure she would have fainted if khushi would have said abt the intimate moments😉😆
The cafe scene was super cute...😉Both behaving a bit in professional way...And Arnav happily gave up by saying he came for her...Hw sweet😃😉
Black shirt,un tucked,three buttons open,Sleeves rolled up,blue denims...Ufff...there is nothing wrong in khushi checking him out😳😆But a wild khushi...never expexted😆that came as a surprise...Now what talking they are going do after this neck bite😉Waiting for the next one
Edited by vqwerty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What have you done to me ma'am? Let me recover before I can comment!
RES 😉

Ok so I ended up dozing off because it was a crazy hour of the night on my side of the world when I read your update but I am fully awake and ready to ramble away, consider yourself warned! ;-)

RE your reply to my previous comment which made me grin like an idiot:

Am I glad or am I glad that you preach clear communication and you say people may find it boring, are you kidding me?! People love it and no I won't speak for myself alone but for majority of the readers as well. We love clarity, we love to read character interactions and most of all we love Arshi interactions and you give us all of the above and much more so how can we not LOVE what you do! ILY
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Oh we ( I) also strongly dislike unnecessary twists that only drag the story and take away from it's beauty so lack of those is one more thing that I LOVE LOVE LOVE about your stories. Arnav and Khushi being who they are, are more than enough to create troubles for themselves they don't need extra evil characters to make life difficult for them! 😉


On to the chapter then! And I will go back to my initial reaction which was what have you done to me, you see such is the impact of your writing, it is powerful and it always has a massive impact on us readers no scratch that on us spectators of a great show! :D

Seeing the Vampire side of Khushi is the last thing I expected to witness, you totally took me by surprise there and I had a quite chuckle to myself, so she has this adorable conversation with her sister about standing her ground yet forgets all about that at the sight of her Laad Governor oh but I can't blame her nah. After all we often make resolutions with ourselves that we can't even follow or rather forget to follow. This Khushi is definitely a strong and confident Khushi what with the way she pounced on him and her declaration where she lets it all out, not afraid of letting him know the kind of hold he still has on her. Respect to her and her Laad Governor doesn't back down either in letting her know that she makes him feel the same way. Khushi is sure of what she wants and Arnav on the other hand is still on the path to discovering what he wants! I am glad that at least he is not letting go of Khushi, he is pursuing her and is looking into convincing her but the question remains what does he want to convince her of knowing all too well that she wants commitment and eventually she wants marriage anything other than that is sure to give Payal and her family a heart attach if not her.

Needles to say that I can hardly wait to see what you unravel next or rather how they go forward from this strong attraction that they can't deny, are they going to have a repeat of the conversations they have had before with her wanting more and knowing that he can't give her more or has something changed within ASR ;) bring on more whenever you can ;-)

Ps. We do appreciate the fact that you update this story for us despite having a crazy hectic asli duniya and we love you for it!

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
pyal really love her sister very much,her concern is so understandable
arshi going in dinner date
i hope both they decide what they want for each other
loved the update
continue soon
Edited by rupamudra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a cute update. love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
What have you done to us?☺️
I love vampire Khushi 😆
Awesome update.
Waiting for their the most needed conversation.
Edited by sadianabil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG, it cannot get better than this. Wonderful, mindblowing update, completely swept me off my feet with the vampire bite. AWESOME, thanks for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...what was that...
That was surely very sizzling and very apt...the title speaks so clearly in this story...


Your writing is just perfect!


Waiting for the next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waw! What a great update..
I love khushi! In this FF, Khushi has surpassed arnav with boldness, passion and straightforwardness!

A chasing arnav is always a treat.. and good that he chased her. And khushi really doesn't need any encouragement, neither she cares about any discouragement. She listens to her heart!

Absolutely amazing update. looking forward to the next one!
Edited by golpokobita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm passion at its zenith
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Posted: 12 years ago
@farah...
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U updated thank u so much...


That was awesome...

Payal was worried for Khushi...that was every sissy would do😊😊


Their meet in cafe was good...


Last line gave me goosebumps☺️

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